Konoha: This Uchiha Just Wants to Lie Down

Reading this novel made me feel that all the chapters are weak. One chapter for others is worth three chapters for you, but one chapter is just one chapter for you. It's so stupid.

How should I put it? It's not easy for the author to give the three-star rating for word count.

How can I put it this way? In this book, Pig's Foot brings too much personal perception to the original plot and characters. Also, the setting and use of Goldfinger are somewhat contradictory. At first, Pig's Foot was barely strong, but then it took off. Others' Immortal Mode was amplified and strengthened, and Pig's Foot's Immortal Mode directly soared.

Normally, when writing about civilians who traveled to Hokage, 95% of authors must write about pig's feet falling in love with Hinata and Uchiha girls. That is, the double standard of life and death. On the one hand, I mentally suggest that I must stay away from you, but physically I must stay close to you.

In the first chapter, the reader is given a test, a graduation test, or someone else's Kakashi's graduation test, and the protagonist is treated as an opponent. Is this reasonable? Will he be killed? If you can't defeat Kakashi, you will naturally stop after being dealt with in two or three times. How could you be killed? And tmd Danzo deliberately arranged this assessment because he wanted Kakashi to kill the protagonist, huh? An ordinary assessment in front of the public, to kill people? I think this wave of wisdom is not the wisdom of the characters in the book, but the wisdom of the author. You don't have to write if you don't want to, but it will lower the average level of starting authors, right?

If you don't have the power to cheat, you want to lie down, and the whole family is looking for death.

Want to lie down with Uchiha status? Do you think your death was not miserable enough? And how could a civilian ninja marry an Uchiha princess?

When I saw the marriage, I was persuaded to leave. It was not because of my pride. First, I was too young. He died early in the Hokage, but he did not get married early. Like Moonlight Hayate, he remained unmarried until his death and had a childhood girlfriend. Pig's feet got married just after she went to school. It's unrealistic and impossible. Secondly, after reading the character introduction, the heroine is estimated to be a genius. Is it possible to recruit a son-in-law so early? Third, I guess I am talking about hugging my thighs again, but the result is that the protagonist has no self-esteem to dedicate himself to the heroine, and does various research and escort to improve the heroine's strength. Then there was a Hinata woman who was flirting with a girl while getting into her arms and hugging her thighs. She had a bad character. Fourth, when I read the comments, the assessment turned into a life-and-death fight, and no one was allowed to admit defeat, and no brains were used. This was because Konoha was not a mist, and it emphasized love and dedication, or it was a Kakashi fight. The internal fighting among Konoha's wealthy families was not so blatant at that time.

Don't worry about those people's bullshit. The writing is quite good. To be honest, it is possible to become a god. Damn it, the kind of 6-year-old and 7-year-old super shadows are all rubbish and cool. Sticking to your own understanding is the best. If you can talk about family, friendship, love and the improvement of strength in this book. , The planning of the power system, etc., If it is meticulous and down-to-earth, then your novel will be a first-class novel. If it also has some characteristics, such as the chuuniu characteristics in the chuuniu girl's journey to Hokage, or the badass characteristics in League of Legends, then you can become a god.

To be honest, even pirated copies of your book are not available

I think it's okay, but the research part is too taken for granted. It's really that easy to produce a finished product. Orochimaru + Nobu are already at the pinnacle of the ninja world.

In the first chapter, I was dumbfounded. A low-level civilian student who had not yet graduated could actually marry into Uchiha. . . I was completely confused by what I wanted when I married into a married woman at the age of 12. . .

It's said that he is lying flat, but he is not lying down at all. A married woman can still be tricked by Danzo. Can Kakashi's opponent for the early graduation assessment be you, a little kid who just graduated and is not even a genin? You put up a fucking barrier to prevent you from admitting defeat. It's better to be attacked by a sneak attack. Not to mention that you told me in advance that many ninjas were watching the battle. This is making everyone look like a fool.

Among so many Naruto fans, there are a lot of bad books. Before I met you, I thought that Naruto fans could still be saved and there was still hope. After reading your book, my eyes darkened and my heart felt cold. It can be said that except for the title and the names of the people in it, the rest basically has nothing to do with Naruto. It's just a scam. Disgusting people come out again and again. When will Qidian launch a blacklisting function? 😭

This is true

The poison test is over. Don't be fooled by the introduction. The first two chapters are spent constantly emphasizing the reasons for lying flat and the character of lying flat. Then in the third chapter, the third chapter is super high-profile and kills Kakashi of the same age in front of the third generation and the pot king. With such a high profile, you still want to lie flat? Be funny. It took two chapters to emphasize it, but the third chapter ended up being a high-profile pretense. Some people say that if you don't keep a high profile, you will be killed by Kakashi, but this is not a question of whether to kill or not, but if the author wants to write a low-key story, he should not be targeted by the pot king as soon as he appears. If he is a low-profile and low-key car, he will be targeted and murdered by the pot king. So what is the point of writing a low-profile? It is not that the author is not allowed to write invincible stories, Aotianwen, but your character is a lie-flat, your sister, when you write Aotianwen, you should clearly state it in the introduction. Is it interesting to trick people into feeding poison?

Why send text?

The three golden chapters are all poisonous, and I have no desire to read on. Rating: garbage among garbage.

Who is reading such a shark-armed novel?

After reading your first chapter, I don't want to read it. If you want to lie down, don't go to ninja school. There should be ordinary people in Uchiha. Not all those who know chakra are ninjas. Kakashi will kill you even if you admit defeat. What did you write?

666 Graduation Assessment Directly requires killing people in public? Don't you consider the impact at all? What do other people think about Konoha's main attraction, at least on the surface? The protagonist is an Uchiha in the trash. How can an Uchiha want to kill a member of your clan in front of countless people? How can other wealthy clans want to kill an Uchiha in public today and tomorrow? I can only say that I went against the grain, not to mention it was for Kakashi! For a little Kakashi to turn the whole of Konoha into a village of blood mist, it was too outrageous and unpleasant. . . . .

I can't stand it anymore after reading a few pictures. In order to suppress Uchiha, Danzo killed the Uchiha clan openly in the academy. Even if he was from a foreign clan, he was still an Uchiha. You could secretly design to kill him, but openly... Is Danzo so stupid? Give the knife to someone else? Another author said that Danzo dared to assassinate the Hokage, and what else he didn't dare to do? The reason why the Third Hokage let Danzo go was because he needed Danzo's black glove and his classmates' feelings. Well, back to the above, if Danzo is so blatant, the Hokage will definitely bring him down. After all, he is a bastard, but he will not die, and the roots will be disbanded because Danzo has offended many families because of his roots. It is not just the Uchiha family that wants Danzo to die or step down. Many clan members such as Inocho, Shika, and Aburame are all in the roots. There are also those geniuses from unknown small families. Do you think the author did this voluntarily? Of course, is it voluntary? Especially because of the bugs, most of the Aburame clan went in. Now that you Danzo and Uchiha are killing people openly and openly, then if we are not as good as us, we can kill as many as we want. We will definitely use this opportunity to bring down Danzo. And you, Kakashi, are you suppressing the trolls? If you are not as good as the one with the tail end, win or kill. This is suppression and insult. In the end, your book will be ranked... The starting point is getting worse and worse.

A lot of words are used to instill and emphasize logic. One thing needs to be explained repeatedly from several perspectives, and a lot of words need to be explained in one sentence. "As everyone knows, the biggest illogicality is the author's protagonist himself, a commoner with no surname and no background, a low-level student at the bottom of the school, who married into the Uchiha family, the most powerful family, and became a rich fiancé.

I have been reading online articles for 10 years, and this is Shi. The author either just graduated from junior high school, or has very little experience. He needs writing skills but no writing skills, plots but no plot, and logic but no logic. It is better to let AI write it. Hurry up, kids.

It's a bit insulting that Kakashi kills the protagonist at the beginning.

The three views are quite to my liking, but the protagonist is too hard-pressed and the process is too clumsy. He also likes to trick the villains, forcing him to open at 55.

Kakashi later changed his gender and became the heroine, and also gave birth to a child for the hero, which was quite interesting and a good idea.

I can't stand the first two chapters anymore. You're an Uchiha who moved out of the clan, and you still want to get over it? ? ? Do you still imagine that your future economy and military power will depend on a commoner and a passerby from a small family? ? ? 😰😰😰

It's just rubbish! Still very cool! Such things are still there! Hurry up and close it! This protagonist's character is super poisonous! There is no plot at all!

It's actually pretty well written, and the plot is quite interesting. But later on, Kakashi becomes a woman, which is a bit unbearable.