Panlong: The Second Path
盘龙之第二条路
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 681k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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269Chapters
2.3kRecommendations
6.1kFans
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You're writing this book too slowly. For fanfiction, you need to get into the theme faster. What's the theme of Panlong fanfiction? It's the mystery of laws/rules, the brilliance unfolding in those vast eleven divine planes/supreme planes. Since you're not writing original content, unless your writing style and imagination surpass the original, this book is in jeopardy with your slow pace.
The main theme of Panlong and other Panlong fanfictions is cultivation, but this book's theme is political struggle within the kingdom and between nations, with cultivation being secondary. I'm not saying this is bad, but personally, I feel that since the protagonist has such talent and cultivates quickly, wouldn't everything be solved by directly cultivating to the invincible Saint Realm or…
Who has the patience to read the part before Sacred Realm in Panlong fanfiction?
The pacing is too slow. It's fine if it's original content, but if it's fan fiction, many people will find it tedious and drop the book.
Why do you have to start writing about such a vast world from age 6? For example, most rebirth stories these days start from high school at the very least. Who wants to read about someone being reborn from the start of elementary school?
Other books start with a Shura or a god-level character. Your 300,000 words haven't even reached the Saint Realm yet, have they? I checked the table of contents and it's still in the Academy. It's too slow, really.
Looking at the table of contents, you're truly remarkable; you're still in the beginner's area, not even out of the academy yet. Oh well, I'll keep raising you until you reach the god realm, brothers, let me know, then I'll order more.
After reading over ten chapters, I just can't take it anymore! All the relatives are addressed with traditional Chinese honorifics like "Grandpa," "Uncle," and "Mom"—it feels so disjointed in Panlong! Plus, all sorts of irrelevant details and surnames are included! There's absolutely no sense of immersion! I suggest the author only keep three to five characters by name, and absolutely no surnames.
I'd like to hear your opinions on the mysteries of elements.
The original work did not fully describe the mysteries of the elements in each system. The protagonist of this book primarily cultivates the laws of darkness and lightning. Besides what's already mentioned in the book, I'd like to ask if you have any other thoughts.
300,000+ Words and still not a god 😰 Is this fanfiction?