Panlong: The Second Path

Your progress in writing this book is too slow. You should get into the theme of the fanfic quickly. What is the theme of the Panlong fanfic? It is the mystery of the laws/rules that are wonderfully performed in the vast eleven divine planes/supreme planes. You are not original. No matter how you write, unless your writing style and imagination can surpass originality, otherwise your slow progress will make this book a bit suspenseful.

The theme of Panlong and other Panlong fans is cultivation, but the theme of this book is the political struggle within the kingdom and the struggle between countries, and cultivation is only secondary. I'm not saying it's not good to write like this, but I personally feel that since the protagonist has good talents and fast cultivation speed, wouldn't everything be solved after he directly cultivates professionally to become invincible in the holy realm or become a god? Why waste time on intrigues? Can a novice fight against an old fox? Moreover, writing these political characters is too simple. This is a Panlong fan! What is the greatest charm of Panlong? It's a clear hierarchy of cultivation. What readers are looking at is the process of cultivation. Which reader reads Panlong for the political struggle? Moreover, the struggle in this book is not wonderfully written!

Who among Panlong fans has the patience to watch Sanctuary before?

The pace is too slow. If you are original, there is no problem, but if you are a fan, many people will think it is too long-winded and abandon the book.

In such a macroscopic world, why do you start writing when you are 6 years old? For example, the current rebirth articles start at least from high school. Who wants to see you reborn from elementary school?

Other books start with Shura and start with God level. Your 300,000 words haven't reached the Holy Land yet. I looked at the catalog and it's still in the academy. It's too slow. It's really

After looking at the catalog, you are really good. You are still in the novice zone and haven't even left the academy. Forget it, I will continue to raise you before you become a god. When will you reach the god level? Brothers, please give me a thumbs up. I will order more.

After reading more than ten chapters, I just can't stand it! A group of relatives still use Chinese-style honorifics such as "Grandpa," "Uncle," and "Mom." This appears in Panlong and is too divisive! There are also all kinds of irrelevant content and irrelevant surnames written down! There is no sense of substitution at all! It is recommended that the author only keep three or five names of characters, and be sure to include surnames. Their surnames have nothing to do with the protagonists and have nothing to do with readers! Let the protagonist's grandfather and uncle die if they are capable of death, and just save them for later! Changing the names of the parents to "Father, Mother" gives the protagonist the motivation or pressure to put aside all kinds of parental shortcomings as soon as possible! We all have grandpas, so don't describe too much about the academy! As concise as it is concise, jump to level nine or the holy realm quickly! It's so uncomfortable!

In the original work, most of the mysteries of the elements of each system are not fully covered. The protagonist of this book mainly practices the laws of darkness and thunder. In addition to what has been mentioned in the book, I would like to ask you what other thoughts you have

More than 300,000 words have not yet become a god 😰 Is this a fanfic?