Rebirth of Huo Yuhao, Spanning Thousands of Years

In the fantasy world, strength is king. No force is of any use. Only forces that can provide authors with resources for growth in the early and mid-term are useful. Once you grow up, your power becomes dispensable. The love brain in Loveland is not just talk. If you get Bibi Dong Qian Renxue. Say a few more words to Xue'er and Dong'er. They wish they could pack up the entire Wuhun Palace and send it to you.

Yuhao was the man of Pope Bibi Dong, the husband of the Empress Qian Renxue of the Wuhun Empire, the companion of the Snow Emperor, the husband of Zhu Zhuqing, the husband of Ning Rongrong, the holy son who matched Hu Liena, the childhood sweetheart of Xiao Wu, the master of A Yin, the other half of the soul beast co-owner, the lover of the three-eyed golden beast, Shui Bing'er, Huo Wu's teacher, Tang Yuehua's boss, Dugu Yan's boyfriend, and Bo Saixi's husband.

This book is full of ideas and the writing is concise and not verbose. But the key is that it is too thoughtful. The author has developed too many plot elements, which are too beyond the scope of the original novel. And in just twenty or thirty chapters, the protagonist has experienced too many things, and the author has thrown out too many settings. The plot progresses too fast and seems too crowded. If you are writing an ordinary original fantasy novel, or a fanfic of the Harry Potter novels, then I congratulate the author, he will definitely get results. But unfortunately, the author you write is a Douluo fan, so I am not very optimistic about this book. The problem is that this is a Douluo fan, and it lies in this subject matter. Even if they are the same readers, when they read books with different themes, they have different expectations before opening the book. When reading Harry Potter fanfics, readers generally have higher inner expectations, demanding higher quality and more novel content. Opening the book with this mentality makes it easier to accept the new ideas and elements thrown out by the author, and let themselves follow the author's ideas, because they expect the author to show him what kind of magical world it will show him. Moreover, because Harry Potter itself has almost become a recognized masterpiece of modern novels, and its literariness is widely recognized, so no matter how in-depth the writing is, no one will think it tastes wrong. But it's different when reading Douluo, because everyone generally despises the original Douluo. Although it is popular, it is purely the popularity of Xiaobai's novel. Although many people find it enjoyable to read, if you ask who thinks Douluo's novel is nutritious, if you ask ten people, eleven people will shake their heads. In the fandom of this type of book, if the plot progresses too fast and throws out too many elements that are rarely seen in the original work, and the plot is too bloated, readers will feel tired, impatient, and find it difficult to read. Because everyone clicks into this book with the idea of ​​​​relaxing and having fun, they will naturally reject content that fails to achieve their goals. Even if the writing is actually good, they will naturally feel that these things are a bit redundant and unnecessary. The plot and setting elements in Douluo books are too densely arranged, which means that readers who come in at the point of violation and want to relax are destined to suffer. I hope the author will consider my suggestions carefully and slow down the pace in subsequent writing, and not involve too many things that are not in Dou Yi's original novel. It can involve the content of Dou Er, but if you write too much about the interaction between Huo Yuhao and characters who did not appear in the original work during Dou I, this so-called innovative plot will not actually do any good for the performance of your book. Although there will definitely be people who will speak in support and say they like it, but believe me, there must be far more people who don't like it than people who like it. And they may not even leave a comment before rowing away.

Does the author have multiple female protagonists? I feel that Huo Yuhao is not suitable for multiple female protagonists. In the first few chapters, when I saw him running after butterflies, I felt that he could just be Wang Donger.

Although there are several books on this subject, it is more acceptable to start with nothing and rely entirely on yourself. And I hope you can write better and better. Create your own characteristics.

The little Yakuza is not a good thing. Xiao Huo was trained like a dog. His teacher Yi Lao was tortured to death. Killed Wang Qiu'er and Wang Dong'er. Tang Wutong was turned into a puppet. He also collected his mother's soul as a backup. He was still tortured to death by the eyes of ice and fire. Xiao Huo's time-traveling fight would be a kindness if he didn't crush him to ashes🤒

How can you be tripped up by a woman when you have a career that is so important to do big things? Concentrate your energy and resources to first raise yourself to be number one in the world. You are number one in the world. It is not direct. I don't eat beef and then cultivate to the point of overthrowing the world of gods. Let alone ordinary practitioners, you can even be the god of Douluo. For example, the most direct god king of life, I am Zeus.

It probably looks like this. It should be more neutral. There is also something wrong with the feathery tentacles. You can search for moth tentacles and make some assumptions.

Royal Sister Tianmeng and Loli Ice Emperor

Dear author, I have only one request, don't show Wang Dong, don't show Wang Dong

I don't have a good impression of this white-eyed wolf at all. For a man I've known for only two months, I betrayed the Wuhun Palace that raised her, betrayed the teacher who taught her, the place that raised her and the teacher who taught her are not as important as a man I've known for only two months.

After taking it, I still have a white ring on my head and two more 😅😅

Don't turn it on too high. If the rhythm is relaxed, you can write for a long time.

Not bad. I hope the author can work harder. According to this writing style and plot rhythm, he can write better.

Does the author plan to have a single female protagonist? In fact, it is okay to arrange two female protagonists based on the author's writing style, and it does not need to be determined in the early stage. The Douluo book I followed before was also a good idea, but the author said at the beginning that there would be only one female protagonist, but the traffic did not increase. The writing is good, I am quite looking forward to the emotional line, but most authors are a mess when it comes to writing emotions.

What I wrote above basically has nothing to do with the original work. The various settings are completely different from the original work. Huo Yuhao, who has no soul ring at age 10, uses a soul guide bottle to fight against a level 60 soul emperor. The self-created exercises and self-created soul skills at the beginning are really hard to read. They are all fantasy floor tiles. You still have to cultivate immortality, but you don't want people to play it, and you add things that are not in the original work, which looks nondescript. The most important thing is that it doesn't have the spirit master atmosphere of Douluo Continent. The scenes of fighting with spirit rings, Yang Miaomiao is really hard to say. Without her parents at the beginning, she can still be innocent with the protagonist. I really don't know what to say about this character.

Recommend the book, Peerless Tang Sect: Ice Limits. Welcome all the big guys to come and taste it. Click on the avatar to see it. I wish the author to become a high-quality product as soon as possible. (can be deleted)