Under One Person, I Became the Immortal Daying

Author, the character of your protagonist is not very good. Compared with Li Muxuan next door, he is far behind. Whether it is the sense of involvement or the character, he is just an ordinary person. Without the information difference of the time traveler, he is not as good as the indigenous people.

The three levels of reverse birth should be Zhang Sanfeng's Taoist song: Tell me to be upside down and I will be upside down, Upside down has its roots, One, three, three and one are upside down, Three and three overlap in the nine heavens. There are nine truths above the nine heavens, The nine truths return to one yuan. The number of yin and yang qi is created by nature. If you go with it, you will be ordinary and if you go against it, you will become an immortal. There is also: being obedient is ordinary, and being rebellious is immortal, just topsy-turvy in between.

If you can't write the character of Daying Immortal, why don't you change the character and write it? Originally, this character was considered a very high-level character in the readers' minds, but as a result, the time traveler you wrote was not good at everything, and the gap was too great.

One thing to say, when you become Zuo Ruotong, shouldn't the first thing you do is capture Wu Gensheng and become a Taoist companion?🙂

The personality charm, character, character, ability and even B-level are completely inferior to those of the original Zuo Sect Master. How lonely is this time traveling? It is better to give the protagonist a system to show off (in the latest episode, you actually want to hug Zhang Zhiwei and ask him to give advice to the protagonist?! In this way, you might as well take all the geniuses like Zhang Zhiwei, Zhang Huaiyi Wugensheng as apprentices when you time travel, and practice reverse life together. )

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes, and I don't even want to accept this Li Muxuan thing. It's really nondescript. However, it is true that the mixed-breed chicken Zuo Yu and the evil boy Li Muxuan are compatible. Not as good as Daying Immortal. He is really wronged and disgusting, Mr. Lu, who has lived a flawless life.

There is a saying that the master's character and character are not as good as those of the two apprentices next door (Lu Jin from The Eunuch and Li Muxuan who is still writing)

Shocked, Zuo Ruotong already exists, can Zhang Jingqing be far behind?

Now the three levels cannot reach the sky. The protagonist, who traveled so early in advance, didn't think about finding the 24-section Tongtian Valley. Let alone destroy it, read the inheritance in advance, directly create a new magical skill, recreate the new three levels of reverse life, and reopen a road to immortality, right?

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I don't understand the protagonist's character. Sometimes it feels like the original Zuo Ruotong. Sometimes it feels like the original Zuo Ruotong is the main character. Sometimes it feels like the time traveler is the main character. I don't know what the status of the protagonist is now.

I suspect it was written by AI. The characters are really blunt.

36 Thieves are still bugs. They are like a group of orphans, without fathers or mothers, very pitiful. After the state found them, they fed them, gave them drink, taught them, made them talented, and gave them some positions. They worked for a while, when the country was in crisis. Suddenly, some of the leading figures became sworn friends with the leader of the enemy's spy organization without any warning. Then they said that we were just lucky and that we were attracted to that person and didn't spread any information. Who believes this? It was not unfair at all for them to be hunted down.

Now even Twenty Four Monkey fans have come out

It feels like the plot is too strong... The original work accounts for too much!

After watching a few pictures, I kept using the original self-identification. I would like to ask if I should still use Zuo Yu in the future. 🙂 I want to change the narrator's title to Zuo Ruotong.

Change the title. You are writing Zuo Ruotong. You can still see the front, but what is behind it?