My Undead Is Getting More and More Wrong

The ideas are pretty good. Just reading the introduction makes me want to read more. However, the content of the article is a bit cumbersome and the writing style is bland. The fighting part is lacking, and each chapter can express less worldview and effective content. But other than that it's pretty good. Looking forward to the author's next book

Slip away, the conversation between people can write a chapter

Forget about this Bai Yu being the protagonist, just let this buzz buzz go on forever

You haven't finished writing more than forty chapters of a game?

The author is also a slut, and the subject matter is so good that you will have the desire to read further.

It feels like playing. There was no sense of crisis at all. It's like a kid playing house!

I feel like the plot is bland.

I saw a mecha in the introduction. Could it be that the green mental skeleton was highlighted?

It's a good idea, but it's a different story as you read on. It's a pity.

I've read the first few chapters, it's okay, you can check it out👀

The plot is bland and the characters lack personality.

Call Shennong🥱

It is recommended that the author changes the refresh settings. It is better to set more copies.

It can only be said that it was a coincidence - I just came across your book in the morning, and you put it on the shelf in the evening (눈_눈) (because you had no money) and you couldn't catch up on it. After nearly one hundred and fifty chapters, my feeling is: the basic ideas are good, but other parts are not formed and I don't care. There are a few issues that I cannot but mention. In terms of narrative, this book gave me the feeling of being as plain as water - moving straight along the timeline, without any foreshadowing or narrative traps and other techniques. When the protagonist encounters something, he just ignores it, and there is no suspense at all. The story is smooth sailing, let alone problems such as the slow narrative rhythm above it. In terms of setting, the "undead" on the three skulls of the protagonist can be called a gimmick - although you know that they are imitating Ultraman Gundam Cardcaptor Sakura, you wouldn't treat them as real Gundams, right? I haven't seen you mention any relevant discussion about the common problems of undead creatures, such as fear of light. In this case, the logic of the whole story would be valid if three slimes were substituted. So, what's so unique about skulls? The last little question is, in my opinion, the reaction of the audience in the serious competition is a bit too high. Of course there must be side descriptions, but too much may be self-defeating. Because of financial resources, I can't pursue it anymore. I wish it will get better and better.