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Zhen Fu

Lin Wanqing

Shen Bixin

Qingyanyu

The plug-ins in this book are useless, with a lot of legacies, but they are of no use against the enemy, such as the Variety Spirit. This is because the enemy is too strong, but it cannot fight back, which gives people the impression that it is not powerful. In addition, in terms of cultivation, the Nine Yang Body is divided into nine parts. Once Zhen Fu leaves, it is equivalent to not being opened. In addition, the plot of Zhen Fu is also the same. The protagonist has no protection period, right?

Chu Yunshu

Although Xia Changge also started weakly, he had his own trump card! And this variety is really hard to describe! I can't stand the plot about Zhen Fu forcing her to sign a meal 🙂

Lin Wanqing

When I read this book and thought about what I was fed, I had to say "what a death"!

Auntie, this is my uncle. Sister-in-law, I am my brother. Sister-in-law, I am my brother. Cousin, I am my cousin.

I've finally started a new book, don't let it fall by the wayside this time!

The more married women the better 🤓

The book is still barely good, and the topic selection is not good. It's almost equivalent to clickbait. If you were lucky enough to have no eunuchs, most of the early and mid-term games would have been spent on dead people. The plot is straight forward, not bad, and not exciting enough. In short, come on, if you haven't written it well, then write an article you like.

One thing to say, it looks like it is on the level of fairy grass My younger brother's Golden Finger Variety Spirit is real, it is not as good as any reborn person, but when I think about it, if the Variety Spirit is really powerful, there will be no problem with the protagonist The character description is also quite good. At least I personally feel that there is no suffocating operation by that character.

No, can this also be level 5? There is not much originality in the works. What is the current scoring standard and starting point?

The first order of 259 is too miserable. The pace is too slow and I can't hit the point in my daily writing. You have to grasp the details carefully. What can be touched upon in one stroke and what can be described in detail. Once done, you can still get up.

It's quite interesting to watch. By taking advantage of the destiny's children and "taking care" of their beauty to advance the plot, it is not afraid of being too fast and there is enough meat to eat. It will be very interesting in the early stage. But again, do the children of destiny have to die near the protagonist? Otherwise, once they develop, the protagonist will be incomparable. It can be patched appropriately to make it easier to use. The rationalization of the plot is followed by the type of the protagonist. By upgrading and optimizing in this way, the type becomes a consumable. It is debatable whether the subsequent outline is enough to support the plot and not appear homogeneous. But as far as the opening is concerned, for LSP, it is still very good-looking. For readers who pursue cool stories, the upgrade is extremely slow, which is almost boring.

The protagonist's positioning is very clear, he just eats and drinks

Is it original and easy to write 😁

When I saw other books being promoted, I was so jealous that I peeed blood. Why didn't I recommend it? Come and take a look at me, come and take a look at me, woo woo woo...

Lost randomly

If you are short of books, come and read my book, Family Cultivation of Immortals. If you have read it, then continue if it suits you. If not, discard it. Comment as you like, no comments will be deleted.

Why is it gone? What about the rise of watching? Eunuch

I still like the Immortal Cultivation Family.

I heard the author said that the initial target was so low. I decided not to buy the Douluo imitation book last time because it was good. Writing a book also depends on your destiny.