Immortality: Starting from Taking Care of Taoist Brothers, Wives and Daughters

The character of the protagonist is, at best, indecisive, but at the worst, he is assertive and upright. This can be strengthened. The book is okay, basically all the female characters appear, including Tianling Genyi's daughter, but generally the female characters have Taoist companions. It's true that the Jian'an style is still there today, and the Wei Wu legacy will be passed down forever. I skipped watching, and the ending was a bit unfinished. I didn't like it very much. It felt like it was not a realistic ending, but more like a perfect ending. However, many people still fell to the lightning tribulation of the immortals, which was a bit regretful. Also, the sister-in-law and Daoyou Li were reincarnations of strong men, so they didn't need it. I felt that this setting just didn't want to be written further, and I wanted to find a strong and obedient person to complete the plot quickly.

The truth of the third picture is a problem. The husband hasn't come back to see her in half a year. He doesn't know that his daughter has water spirit roots. She is still raised in the mortal world. Isn't it okay to send her to the sect to practice? The author doesn't read the chapter reviews, so he won't make any changes?

Any one of my disciples has reached the crystallization stage, but the protagonist is still foundation building

It feels like it's worth watching, but don't be too smart. Just treat the protagonist as a yellow guy, and the characters in it will more or less have the aura of demotion, so you can watch it more comfortably. 🧐

I find that there are always authors who write like this, the title is family flow... The result is rejection of descendants the title Gou... The result is reckless the title is decisive in killing... The result is grinding and chirping What the hell?

I have done good deeds and accumulated good deeds throughout my life, so I should be allowed to read this book.

The problem is really big now. How many female supporting characters can you write in only 130,000 words? Writing about a harem is not expensive, writing about originality and writing about female supporting characters have to be done step by step... Sooner or later, you will collapse. If you just rely on adding female supporting characters to promote the plot, I can't imagine how much you will collapse when you reach 300,000 words. Even a platinum master can't control so many characters with so few words!

Do you have any similar book recommendations? Thanks!

If the male protagonist's level is not improved, Xiao Yun will become a golden elixir. Everything in the Xia family will be surnamed Xiao. Without force and wealth, it is just a piece of fish belly. The daughter's master can't protect the male protagonist, not to mention that he probably won't protect him. After watching it for a long time, I was wondering why Xiao Yun didn't slap the male protagonist to death, and then swallowed all his things. Even if she doesn't care about anything in the future, it will be enough for her to cultivate the golden elixir. Write more about the family's internal affairs. The appearance is very good, but if your realm doesn't have all these, it will look ridiculous and weak. Why not find a good rhythm, space out a period of time between each event point, and then the male protagonist can improve a little bit. Speaking of the latest, the level of the male protagonist must be at the level of the mid-stage foundation building, and then take it slowly. It has put the cart before the horse. Originally, you have to practice slowly one turn at a time. Do you have to practice thirty or fifty turns at a time? How will the family affairs be settled then? If the male protagonist is ignored for a long time and does not have absolute strength, he will definitely be ignored.

If you polish this topic a little more where it should be written, and then put it on a small website, it won't take off.

In the early stage of Jin Dan, he dared to offend so many Yuan Ying Jin Dan. Even Han Li, a lonely man, did not dare to be so crazy.

You made this genre popular, but you failed it yourself.

It is recommended to skip Chapter 163. The author did not know what he thought and suddenly gave the reader a shit. The protagonist and the villain were outwitted at the same time. The battle between immortal cultivators turned into a street gang fight. In short, this is a chapter with extremely poor logic, plot and writing. It makes people want to abandon the book.

Immortality begins with Cao Cao 😁

The level of cultivation has improved too slowly. Now they are all Nascent Soul level enemies. They may offend the Transformation God soon. You are still in the early stage of the Golden Core. You, the Nascent Soul Devourer, can't let yourself break through how awesome your little Golden Core is. It suppresses the protagonist too much. If you don't want the protagonist to improve too quickly, don't give the protagonist so many high-level enemies. You make the enemy so powerful and still suppress the protagonist.

My daughter and Liu Nianwei, if you don't accept them, I won't watch them.

The plot is a bit unreliable. How casual is it to get the Sacred Heart Art without even giving a basic golden finger, or a bug-like appearance. The skill of a book of original world text happens to be obtained by a neighbor, and it happens that the neighbor fails and gives it to the protagonist. It is so unreliable. It is just like winning 100 lottery tickets by a relative who is not the director. There is also a random test for Tianlinggen. . .

Forcing a plot where a sister-in-law awakens and her past life memories fly away, it deserves to end badly.

This introduction has attracted so many Taoist friends from Jian'an style and Cao Wei style 🙂

The length is too large, and the progress of the protagonist's cultivation is too slow, which feels like it will lose a lot of readers. The author still pays attention to everyone's comments. Of course, they are just comments.

This kind of book needs to be updated frequently, and it is the kind that has a large quantity and can be filled up, otherwise it will be easy to abandon the book, mainly because it is too novice and a bit expensive. I think there is nothing wrong with having a dungeon. It can speed up the protagonist's upgrade speed, and then go out to date girls like the clan leader, or the proud daughter of heaven. This will make the family's power stronger. Don't be too superficial. Too little information will make people lose interest in reading.

The author wants to write about the family well, so why not get to know the Sima family in Hanoi? Sima Fang is very good at raising his children. Sima Bada is a good person among men. More importantly, his three sons are all high-ranking officials in Cao Wei. The eldest son is with Cao Cao, the second son is with Cao Pi, and the third son is with Cao Zhi. Then the three sons were not affected by the battle between Cao and Wei. If they had not usurped the throne, the Sima family's reputation would be really good. These sons of yours are probably just dolphins that killed Liu Biao's sons.

It's written like a joke. Others only have resources. The protagonist said at the beginning that he has been practicing for more than 20 years and has nothing. Why do you have to practice in one place for more than 20 years without going out? You also say that you have great perseverance and perseverance.

This is the author's peak, right?

After reading more than ten chapters, I didn't see Goldfinger at first. I thought that Sister-in-Law would appear after I fell in love with her. When I got married, my sister-in-law did not appear. I thought it would happen after the first child was born. I didn't wait until the child was born. I thought that the Sacred Heart would give birth to a child, or the sister-in-law would have a spiritual root bonus. When the child detects the four spiritual roots, I can't stand it any longer. With the character and qualifications of the protagonist, why should I care? Gou also needs to be qualified! With no resources, no qualifications, and no plug-ins, even with the lifespan of the Sacred Heart Art, the four spiritual roots will not be able to rise in ten thousand years.

The account that finished the book was canceled like this.

I wrote about beautiful women but refused to accept them, so I had to write such disgusting plots. This is a hypocrite author.

I can't sign the contract. I'm so jealous every time I see these contract documents that I pee blood. Come and look at me. Why can't I sign the contract? Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

The word hypocrisy is really worthy of you, Taoist brother.

This author actually canceled his account