An Old Friend Departed with a Sword

The advantage is that the characters are distinct and the daily parts are interesting, but the pace is too slow from the plot to the characters. For martial arts, in terms of martial arts, online novels should learn more from Jin Yong, and the adventure and conflict golden finger aspects should be arranged to highlight the uniqueness of the protagonist. As far as online novels are concerned, rhythm and refreshing feeling are still very important, and this part should be copied and learned from. In terms of martial arts, I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is down-to-earth and has the correct three views. He is a very suitable image of a prodigal son in martial arts. Although it can be seen that the author wants to write about the growth of the character, a character with obvious shortcomings such as laziness, lack of focus, and lack of goals is not suitable to stay at the bottom of his arc for too long. He should start shaping his arc and transformation early rather than just waiting to die all day long. Regardless of whether it is internal or external, the character needs to be given a push for action first, so that the character can grow while keeping the reader from being too boring. Actually, there are too few serious martial arts nowadays, and it's rare to find one that's relevant. I hope the author can write better and better, keep at it.

Say less, monthly tickets are more than these 😁

Kang Long Zhang Zhi Gang Zhi Yang, a girl won't grow a beard after practicing it, right?

Recently, my writing has become more and more biased, and the protagonist is no longer there. Are you planning to write about two protagonists? It's a bit of a waste of time. Think about the female characters you wrote earlier. Linghu Ying works for the government and has the opportunity to meet in the world. The other two, Guo Xiaolian, have to continue working in a noodle shop after their enemies die. Little Stutterer is an ordinary person who cannot run around in this world. After spending so much time in the past, she probably won't have a chance to appear in the future.

If I hadn't posted a bunch of comments that I wanted to cut the book, my monthly ticket would have been at least doubled.

The writing is actually quite good, but the pace is too slow.

The book is a good book, and the supporting characters are vivid, but the progress is a bit slow. The main protagonist should not have a golden finger. I am not sure whether the sword spirit is an old man or not, but he only appears in half a chapter. The protagonist's character is clever, cunning and a bit lazy. He is passive in martial arts training. I don't know if there will be any opportunities to change in the future. Now that I have read Chapter 40, the protagonist has no clear goal of whether to take the public exam or join a sect. He has been feeling groggy all day long. I hope the author will decide on it soon. This can be regarded as the main plot.

Imagine a character carrying five swords in a sword case. The first sword: The gentleman's sword is an ordinary long sword. The second sword: The soft sword that wraps around the fingers is a soft sword The third sword: The Yaoyang Sword is made of fiberglass, with diodes inside and ultra-high lumens, blinding the opponent's eyes. The fourth sword: Spray Sword, a powerful shotgun. You can understand the power and range at close range. The Fifth Sword: The Killing Sword (the whole body has a ghostly light and is composed of radioactive elements such as uranium, radium, and pottery. Once this sword is released, both the enemy and us will be killed.)

Looks good, love to read, write more

The layout of the writing is very suitable for online articles. The style should be serious when it should be serious and when it should be skinny, it will not make you tired of reading it alone. It can be regarded as an electronic mustard If you can ensure a stable two chapters a day, one chapter is 2000, make a relationship and get some popularity and try to put it on the shelf.