Under One Person, a Child's Life? I Am the Substitute Messenger!

It requires energy to be used, but it can only throw two or three punches. A page of Euler can't even hit it, so it's not a Platinum Star 😅

I was really speechless when I was caught. I have a background at the foot of the mountain and I also have a background in China. I was not decisive when I found out that I was caught. So what is the meaning of being such a genius as described to the protagonist before?

The male protagonist is so outrageous, he looks like he is still chatting even if he is about to be fucked to death. He is still wandering around with his junior sister. If that person takes care of Lu Linglong first, the male protagonist will have to feel guilty for the rest of his life.

Many one-person books have to conduct experiments on being caught without resistance 😥

The author said before that he wanted to kill Quan Xing, but ended up killing two of them. After a long time, he actually robbed Zhang Chulan and Lao Tianshi of the scene. In the end, Gong Qing succeeded in saving Tian Lao, and they ran away. The protagonist was highlighted as useless.

The part where I was caught was a bit toxic, and using Platinum Star consumed a lot of money, so I was a bit speechless.

When you were arrested, why didn't you break out the door if you felt something was wrong? Instead, we chatted with the driver, and during the fight later, after knocking the man down, we had to wait for him to zoom in? Can't we do it quickly? [Platinum Star slowly raises his fist], and then the classic plot, the villain is enlarged, speechless, the description of the battle is not very good, why are there interspersed inner descriptions in the middle, it is not crisp and clear

Being caught while riding in a car during this period made me speechless. . .

Some people think JOJO is good because it has the atmosphere of an anime, but if you write a novel and make it look like the animation, 99% of it will be psychological activities, and it will be purely disgusting.

After reading about 100 chapters, I guess the protagonist of this book only knows Dan Kung, Baji Quan and the Platinum Star from beginning to end. He does not learn new skills or eight magic skills, and there is no plot of a new stand-in, at least not in the chapters I have read so far. The plot follows the plot line, with some branch lines changed in the middle. However, the ending is back to the original work, bland, boring, and without a new plot line. It is completely copied from the original work, with at most one more protagonist as a supporting role. At first, I came here because of the setting of the stand-in, but then the more I read, the more boring I became. If you are reading a fanfic for the first time, you can check it out. For old readers, it will be almost as good as Luo Tian...

I'm speechless. Do you know the concept of achieving pure Yang in the inner alchemy method? ! I am an immortal who has attained the realm of refining gods and returning to emptiness! Only one step away from becoming a heavenly being! Hitting a stand-in that has just awakened? This stand-in just takes two steps back? !

That's it? He also said that he wanted to kill everyone, but this is the result?

There are a lot of bad reviews in the comment section. And they basically say the same thing. 😓The author won't change it?

I feel that the author wants to write a good story, and the subject matter is good, but the writing is not enough, and the plot design is also very poor. It almost follows the plot of the original book. There is a little originality in the early stage, but when I saw the plot of Biyou Village, I knew that this book must be eunuchs. The author's outline is really not good, there is too little originality, and it is really difficult to create a good plot from one person's story without enough writing skills and knowledge. It is a pity for this subject matter.

I don't know how long this book will last

Why do we need a Japanese anime body-protecting god?

It was okay, but the car ride was a bit toxic. The author might as well have changed the situation to the other party drugging the opponent, causing him to lose consciousness and then be tied up.

Just talk to your own people and just do it directly, and force the setting

It's so deliberate, and a bit verbose.

It's really boring to just think about making the protagonist pretend to be better.

When can the protagonist stop?

It's not like you just updated 3 pictures after they were put on the shelves. It's so easy to write them down like this.

It looks good, the setting is good, and it is linked to the setting of the original work. There is no stand-in or system plug-in suddenly appearing for no reason. The plot is a little slow (the stand-in shows its power later) but the logic is OK. The writing in the front is poor, especially the part about being kidnapped, with too many inexplicable dialogues. As for what I read in the comment section, they are all talking about how the substitute consumes a lot of money. The first is that there is not much Qi left at the end of the fight, and the substitute is summoned at the moment of life and death. The second is that the child has not practiced for long, and the third is that the substitute is not proficient in summoning and the cost is very high. Is it abnormal? It's logical. In short, I see that there is no consumption issue later.