Infinite Civilization Simulator

It's really outrageous. I just saw it finished today. After a long time of fussing about the last chapter, it's actually finished. This book itself is already very toxic. Everyone wants to see you simulate history, but when you return to reality, you start emotional drama and kicking the martial arts gym. You wrote nearly ten chapters, and finally started to simulate again. In the end, even computers have been developed in a century. It's really ridiculous. The score, the originally good subject had to be written in such a nonsensical way, even if it takes you a hundred years to simulate the electrical age, I wonder if you have developed so fast and there is so much content to write about during this period. You have written four or five chapters, and then you return to reality and are directly told that none of this is true. Then tell me, what is the excitement of returning to reality and changing history with the protagonist? It's a scam, isn't it? I was told that everything was just a game. It can only be said that times are progressing, and novice writers dare to write blind articles and post them to make money.

This book is indeed quite novel and to my liking, but it also has shortcomings. What are the shortcomings? That is a limited time chapter, there are quite a few. Your civilization simulator can indeed change the history of the real world where the protagonist lives. The protagonist wants to use his existing history to infer his own choices. This is true. We try to compress the time into one to two pages. Even if we want to lay out some foreshadowing, I will limit it to 1 It ends within 2 chapters. This novel starts talking about real things in chapter 31, and then it doesn't start talking about the simulator again until chapter 36. I know you are talking about foreshadowing, but it takes a lot of ink. Even if you divide chapters 31 to 36 into three paragraphs, it will be better than you can say in one breath. You have to feel comfortable after talking about six chapters of reality. I don't want to see how much your reality has changed. You can just talk about the end of chapter 1 to 2 of reality. Because you can't talk about reality too deeply. If you talk too deeply, you will easily enter a small dark room. So what I want to see is the protagonist's mentality as a gamer and the thoughts and ideas of a flower grower who grew up under the red flag. Transforming into ancient times, modern times or modern times, in this regard, the same sentence can be said, just end it with chapters 1 to 2. You told so many realistic stories from chapters 31 to 36 that I almost didn't let me give up this book. Your book is called Simulator. We see that your book is also about the reality in the simulator book. How is it going to develop? It doesn't matter if you don't have a sense of immersion. What's important is that the protagonist travels through time with the player's mentality, changes history, and doesn't make fun of it. Just like Liu Qiang buying melons, it's uncomfortable no matter how you look at it. The player's mentality is that he is not afraid of death. At worst, it will be restarted, but it does not mean that the player's mentality is a fool. I am a fun person. There are indeed fun people among players, but those who like to play simulators definitely belong to the textual research party and the plot party. You can have fun, but don't be too abrupt. Just go to the dog meat shop with you, and inexplicably say "Liu Qiang buys melons." How does this seem inconsistent? Qin Shihuang swept across Liuhe and unified the world before he had an accurate title. Then Qin Shihuang was destroyed by you. How did he pop up? It was also the kind of scale that weighs weights. How could it be the same as Liu Qiang buying melons? So at first glance, it seems inconsistent, and I suggest you don't have fun, don't make random jokes, and your book is not funny at all. This is what I think after reading more than 40 chapters of yours. This is how I am. If you have something to say, you can delete the post or block it. If you are not satisfied, you can delete the post or block it. Anyway, this is my idea. I have been blocked and deleted a lot for speaking out, but I can't change my faults. I still like to speak out. This book of yours should not be a joke or a joke, but give me the impact of different ideas on how to change history in a serious way. My belief as a player who is not afraid of death has made a breakthrough, so don't let me become a fun person. Let me reiterate again, especially your story about Liu Qiang buying melons. How does it seem inconsistent?

The northern minority that Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty faced was the Turks, not the Huns. During the Han Dynasty, the Huns in the south were included in the territory, and the northern Huns moved westward and were basically no longer in northern China.

I've skipped these pictures, but in the later plot, you insist on arranging that little fairy to be the heroine. If you don't write about this girl, your data will at least triple. This girl will dissuade many readers.

I skipped through a few chapters. Author, why don't you delete the real-world plot? The main character looks like a retard. Just write the plot of the simulator specifically. Changes in the real world can be briefly mentioned, or don't write about the interaction between the protagonist and other characters, just write about historical changes.

There is a beauty in missing a brain. Is this performance art?

The productivity of science and technology determines the lethality. The result of the intrusion of science and technology is why history still develops as it was before and why there are still so-called border enemies. The world feedback from the British who started the industrial revolution is that the sun never sets on the empire, leave you alone

The logic is completely wrong, and crazy criticism also has internal logic. This novel has no logic at all, and I can't find the thread. Goodbye.

You want to laugh me to death, right? Originally, your book had a lot of flaws, but in the end, a crazy woman took advantage of the fact that the male protagonist, a top swordsman who had practiced swordsmanship and was skilled in swordsmanship, was pinned down and bitten by a dog. You can't even maintain your standards, and your crappy book isn't even good writing.

There are two players who are a bit toxic, why should we add one more?

Don't you even know the audience for your book? I came here to see you. I was attracted by your title. You gave me an urban cool article. I feel inexplicable. The key point is that you also wrote four. The plot is very cliché and the character of the heroine. She was originally a good girl, but she fell apart. Most of them are here to change history. Your heroine can be a mediator, or the tool is too dominant.

Keep writing simulations, brother, and don't worry about your urban cool articles. I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away.

How come there are still BBC reporters who dare to interview you, implying that you have not yet unified the earth in modern times? Not leading the earth? Then you write a novel about market trade?

The part about assassinating Qin can be abandoned. Although there may be others without Ying Zheng, it is only a possibility!

There are no loopholes in the plot so far, and the twists are amazing, but I'm afraid you won't be able to handle it later. How do you explain various paradoxes?

After the chapter about the little fairy, my feelings about it took a turn for the worse. I couldn't stand it anymore.

? ? ? What the hell has turned into a city for no reason?

The introduction has the feel of a studio article

The poison is really over. It's not a group-traveling game. If you add a new player to a game as important as changing history, could it be that I just changed the history and you change it back? It's really baffling.

Fang Meiqi's character is not likeable

It's quite exciting to read. It seems that the bookworm of more than ten years is already considered to be a top-grade book. Nowadays, young readers prefer Long Aotian's opening with more tomatoes?

If you can't control the city, don't write. Just write the simulation well.

Can you please get rid of that green tea whore, the little slutty heroine? 😁😁 I really want to know what kind of mentality the author has to write such an EX heroine, "The senior is ignoring her", I really want to yue 😥😥 Only straight men like this kind of green tea. In reality, when I meet this kind of green tea whore, I will really take two big dicks over and let her spiral into the sky.

I can't stand it when I see the introduction. Compulsory education was introduced during the Warring States Period. What a super-long Aotian brainless novel. Knowledge is in the hands of the nobles, productivity is insufficient, and 99% of people are illiterate. You don't even meet the prerequisites. You take the lead in compulsory education. The system completes the prerequisites with one click, right? 😅

The writing is okay, but there is too little. The collision of current thoughts and past thoughts is expressed in the form of a game, which feels like a novel experience.

There were Huns in the fifth year of Zhenguan, Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty? ? ?

It's quite refreshing, but the prerequisite is to store your brain first. What I personally find annoying is that some of the protagonist's speech patterns and behaviors are too dramatic. I can understand that the author wants to write something more relaxed and funny, but this really destroys the sense of immersion. Readers of historical texts are generally very strict and old-fashioned, so they have higher requirements in this regard. To be honest, the author's writing style is suitable for writing urban science fiction.

Let's talk about the author [When you talk like this, it's hard for people to feel involved]

The simulator is gone. I hate simulator stories, physical time travel or soul time travel are better than this.

At most it will lower your intelligence a little bit, which is pretty good now that food and grass are hard to find.