The Fire Virtue Immortal Clan

This protagonist often "laughs". He laughs many times in one chapter and laughs in every chapter. Does he have some disease? Does his facial muscles twitch when he talks?

After a brief look, if the level of the whole text persists, you can inherit Qinglian's mantle. It just so happens that he is useless, but it is best to deal with the panel thing and hide it, otherwise there is a high probability that the writing will be crooked in the future, and the style of painting will not have that flavor. The intention determines the upper limit of the book.

There is a book about water virtue, and it is also a proficiency panel.

There are too many narrations, and they are too long-winded. What can be said in a few sentences is repeated over and over again for a long paragraph.

The protagonist has such a strong spiritual body, why not find more women to have more children, and pass on the spiritual body and integrate it into the family bloodline?

Let me express my opinion. The advantage of this book is that the level of the book is relatively fast. Many of these proficiency writings are slow in level. I was anxious to death after reading it. This can be said to be very good, and it is also a reason for reading it now. The disadvantage is that your combat description is more uncomfortable for me, but I don't know what the uncomfortable point is. It just feels like it is hasty and does not have the visual sense of fighting. Also, are your talents and magical powers just used to practice weapons? I haven't seen you use it in a fight. Don't you have any special spells or something in your Yuan Ying Kung Fu? It's the same as the ordinary skills, it's just that you can cultivate to the Nascent Soul. I haven't seen you write clearly about many things. I don't know how many years have passed. I haven't seen it. Also, your family is still a first-level spiritual vein. Your family has 4 foundations. The descendants of the family have not seen you write about talented people. You are the most talented person in the family. You have to write about the family after a while. This is a family article. Now it's a bit like you took the family to fly. I haven't seen many other character descriptions. Finally, are there any other families who practice immortality? The Xuanjian Clan doesn't want it. I can't stand it

This book cannot be said to be poorly written, but it can only be said to be very average. There are a few places that are a little bit dramatic. In the early stage, dozens of Qi-training monks fought in a melee. Both sides were about the same strength. Even the other party took the initiative to attack the protagonist's family, but in the end the battle ended with zero losses. Destroy all the enemies. Moreover, if there is a slight conflict later, the family will have to be exterminated. There are only a few foundation-building forces in that area. The protagonist has destroyed two of them as soon as he breaks through. He is also planning to destroy the third family. It will not be destroyed for hundreds of years. All of them will die as soon as the protagonist comes...

There must be spiritual objects to break through the foundation building, There must be spiritual objects to break through the golden elixir, There must be spiritual objects to break through the Nascent Soul, This world of cultivation is really rich in materials, on average there is one strong foundation building expert within a few hundred miles, If someone else breaks through, two people will die. The protagonist's family is full of luck. It's hard to die even if you want to.

I have some doubts, can this group of robbery cultivators open their own market? If there are craftsmen, normally they would not be willing to come here. After all, as mentioned before, craftsmen are not willing to come to such a harsh environment, so the prices of things are a bit high. Don't most tribulation cultivators just grab a handful and get rich?

Is the probability of having spiritual roots too high? There is one in five ordinary people, or one in ten. This probability is too high. Normally, 1/10000 should be more normal.