Practice the Burning Jue at the Beginning of Dou Po

Alchemy Saint, Alchemy Saint, what are you doing with a white-haired old man?

The writing is really childish, and it seems to be full of useless nonsense. It's like a primary school student's work. It doesn't look good. I hate it.

The beginning is not bad, but there is too much nonsense. In some places, it is enough to explain it once. Why do you need to explain it repeatedly? It can be explained in one sentence, but it needs to be said several times in subsequent articles.

There is really a lot of nonsense, but it's a pity that this is the beginning. I jump to chapters 15 and 16 at the beginning, and it takes chapters 6 and 7 to absorb the strange fire. This is the most chapters I have read in the fanfic.

What did you write? It's a lot of nonsense, just like writing a running account. Let's not talk about anything else, but let's talk about whether the bunch of parentheses can be deleted. It's very uncomfortable to watch.

Gives me a feeling that it's hard to be coherent, I don't know why

There are so many typos in primary school students' literature. How dare you write a book?

Rubbish novel, it's so annoying to read.

There is too much nonsense and too much explanation. It makes me feel uncomfortable just watching it.

So damn watery. Forty or fifty were not left. Wu is frank.

I read ten chapters. The first few chapters are about the white-haired old man (Sage of Dan Yuan) and the latter chapters are about the saint of Dan Yuan (the white-haired old man). Why are you leaving this cement horse? Every sentence is there. It's really disgusting.

Author, do you have no other plug-ins besides Burning Techniques?

The plot is okay, but there is too much nonsense. I have to write two chapters for what was originally a few sentences. The word count is too low.

There are a lot of typos and it doesn't look smooth.

Why is there no more Douluo fandom?

Isn't it a harem? The author will delete the book if he doesn't respond to suggestions

Don't abandon the book. The author will update it soon.

Guys, if you have quality needs for Dou Po fan fiction, you can read this book "Dou Po: Adoptive Mother Yun Yun, Exiting the Yunlan Sect at the Beginning". The author of this book updates at least 8,000 times a day, and the volume will increase quickly, but remember not to read the introduction. The introduction can only be modified after seven days. This is the previous introduction (you will feel fragmented after reading the book)

Why isn't it updated today? Author

It's a pity, it's been more than 100 chapters and I haven't signed a contract yet. It's understandable that I have no motivation.

If the author doesn't update it, I will unplug it.