Pirate's Fury Snow Catastrophe

The protagonist's ability is so versatile, he has no shortcomings on the offensive end, and he is even better on the reconnaissance end. The entire rain (snow) tiger's art of freedom is also poor on the defensive end. Highly compressed snow is ice, and the control ability is not bad, but the speed is not that interesting. It is easy to be blown away by the wind when the elementalization is turned on. In the later stage, when the combat power is improved, it will be pushed all the way. But the key point is that the starting point of the protagonist's combat power is not low. He can instantly kill Ming Ge and play with Akainu. In this case, the combat power should be suppressed. Some people say that the combat power should not be suppressed. In the later stage, the protagonist keeps pushing and pushing and looking at Ganba, and it will be difficult to choose That's what I said to you, just listen to it, please don't take it seriously.

Snow is snow and ice is ice, so how can snow turn into ice?

What kind of ice can be made from good snow? Then just write about frozen fruit.

Regarding the problems reported by book friends, the order of names, paragraph length, text flow and other issues have been corrected. All book friends are welcome to report their opinions.

The description method of a fantasy novel seems awkward.

Ah, the paragraphs you wrote are too long and dense, which makes people have no desire to read them.

Is this a cover prototype? (

What I explained before means that there is not much content introduced or not much content introduced at all. When you look at the characters, your first impression is that the content of the novel is not good.

The first ten chapters feel too much and cumbersome, and from chapter 11 onwards they have little impact. The previous background can be covered in just two chapters. I wrote ten chapters about the crises and difficulties I encountered when I first crossed over. The country was broken, and the troubled prince ran out with his retainers and a small group of people. He also encountered obstacles along the way and finally escaped. I thought I was going to talk about how the protagonist overcame various difficulties bit by bit and gradually developed the entrepreneurial process. The result suddenly jumps to twelve years later. The protagonist has almost unified the North Sea. He is messing with Doflamingo as soon as he appears, and he also has py deals with the Navy and the World Government. I felt lonely reading the first ten chapters.

I'm personally picky about setting/plot/pacing, but I respect the author's ideas so I won't say anything else. Suggestions are: 1. For scene switching, it is best to leave blank lines between paragraphs. 2. When writing long sentences, word order/semantics must be checked; too many language errors can also affect the perception.

Nowadays, Wulaoxing's fantasy beast species are so popular, why don't any of them write about them? Is it simply because of their childhood?

The author's avatar looks like Senior Bai, so why don't you write about Xiuliao fan? , I found that Xiuliao, Lingjian Mountain and other fandoms are very rare. Is it a copyright issue or a popularity issue 😰

Why is the introduction not very detailed?

There is not a lot of content, and you will feel uncomfortable just by looking at the characters.

Although I didn't grab the red envelope, I still read and support