Human Beings Are in a State of Deception, and Immortality Begins with the Secret Book of Origami

The most annoying thing is that the protagonist's spiritual root is poor. For those who cultivate immortality, the protagonist must have the worst spiritual root. Everyone else is good, but the protagonist is poor, and then the protagonist slaps other people in the face.

The concept of this book was good at the beginning, but unfortunately the plot in the later stages made me uncomfortable. What most readers who want to spend money want to read are no longer the boring harems of the past. I would rather see good inspiration and a good cultivation system. This undoubtedly requires effort and brainpower. It doesn't mean that Monk doesn't have a female protagonist. For example, I like the character Ling Luo very much. But most readers don't like female supporting characters who are too thoughtful, or women who put profits first. Most of the women in the fairy tales admire the strong, and there is not much true love. I can understand that, but readers would prefer to be like-minded Taoists who can go on together, rather than being scheming, burdensome, and tool people who seek to protect your strength and interests. Maybe my view is too utilitarian, but I can also accept it purely emotionally. But the process of cultivating immortal novels is the process of the protagonist growing up. When you see the protagonist, you can't help but want to be attached to him. Then, the powerful family monopolizes resources and monopolizes everything. When you see the unstoppable genius, you want to get married. Many of the protagonists just go along with the flow. I think this is the boy who slays the dragon and eventually becomes the evil dragon. Since ancient times, aristocratic families have always put family interests above all else. They only want to exploit the lower class and treat them like weeds. This may be the trend of the development of human society's civilization, but most people, especially the common people at the bottom, deeply hate them. Then, the highlight of this book is the practice of paper-tying skills. The system is fascinating, but the sublimation is a little too fast and it collapses in the later stage. A better way is to explore the paper avatar, paper clone, paper man training, paper warrior, City God system, and Ziwei Emperor system in detail. You can also add some, paper man carrying coffin, ghost bride, ghost marriage, hell underworld, and ten palaces of Yama. The final result is to become the Son of Heaven, Emperor Fengdu, or Emperor Ziwei. It sublimated too quickly in the early stage, and couldn't hold it back in the later stage. I feel that if you follow this path step by step, it will be a good book. It is always surrounded by women and involves too many causes and effects, so it will not become a great book.

1. How ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt an uneasy feeling in my heart. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult decision: go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. There is no trouble in life. Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as the only old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! Just... Making a choice is really, really, hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky; thinking about this, I am speechless. . . But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.

Stop writing fucking emotional dramas. If you don't know how to write, then don't forcefully write them.

Where did the origami god come from? Where does the driving energy come from. It's not that you are a dog, it just bites people, right? Not to be arrogant, many people have written about origami before, but they always showed four beauties with just one mouth. The first battle is Guan Yu Monkey's.

It's boring, wandering around a group of women. If you don't write about women, you can't write a book. Just go to a women's channel.

Alas, the author always brings in private stuff. If you like Fate so much, you might as well write a Fate fanfic. It always affects my perception. 🔨

I specially ordered a chapter for evaluation. The pace is too slow, not only slow. Let me tell you that the main character is training in the Taoist temple and said he is going to play a game. Then he started to take action after thirty or forty chapters. From the beginning of the game to the end of the game and the subsequent character shock, another fifty or sixty chapters have passed. It can write more than 100 chapters for a game. Like the other book I am reading, it just starts with two or three chapters to prepare for the game and ends with the game at most 20 or 30 chapters. He can write more than 100 chapters.

It's hard to keep watching. Most of the content in each picture is to highlight how strong the protagonist is, and is filled with a lot of dialogue from passers-by, first questioning, and then being slapped in the face. Continuous cycle

Mu Lin: Go to practice, meditate, produce results, fight, be belittled, get slapped in the face instantly, friends are surprised, repeat the cycle, and the book is complete.

Dragon🙂

Why does the protagonist think that the basic astronomical knowledge he heard in his previous life will know more about various celestial bodies than the evil god or other void races who can cross the stars and rivers? I'm fascinated by this without an explanation (´･_･`) There is a kind of ancient time travel novel where the protagonist uses five thousand years of Chinese culture to crush the beauty of tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years of history in other worlds🌚

Why are there so many little troubles in the past? What age has it been? These are all poisonous points.

There are over 150 chapters in this weird novel, and the main character has never been really weird. . . Isn't this just a campus romance written under a strange skin?

This book was a writing failure. I had always suppressed the protagonist. When the protagonist's level was low, various high-level characters appeared. However, I slowly improved the protagonist's strength. When alien gods appeared, I had no choice but to turn on the halo to make the protagonist super-speed up (obtain the status of the God of Life). The guide The result is that the short-term improvement is too great, as if the level has been broken, as if level 5 jumps directly to level 10, and now I don't even know what skills the protagonist has, and the attribute panel can't be displayed easily. The God of Life alone has derived so many cool operations, how can the panel be displayed? There are too many life-derived skills to count. How does it count as a skill if the protagonist uses his life authority to spawn and cultivate creatures? Like implantation? Animal taming? Or a creation? Create? Is the protagonist's paper-man clone technique already a biological version of the technique? Use genetically cultivated clones to replace consciousness with paper man clones? And how does aura nuclear fusion count as a skill? Wait, the liver experience, which was still slow at first, suddenly unfolded in a few chapters with all the plots derived from the super-speeding up of life, and the style of the painting completely changed.

Luo Liba Suo kept saying it during the battle, and then his opponent broke through, and passers-by were shocked, and then he said it again. Don't know hydrology? If you pull out the protagonist panel and write a few chapters, it will be better than your method. In the previous article, the main character was always flirting with others, and he was inseparable from a student of the same age. Fuck.

This person has already told the advantages and disadvantages of this book and the author's own writing habits

It was good in the early days. Recently, I really don't want to watch it anymore. Ever since I played the East China Sea Kingdom, it has become more and more boring. Every day I update it, there are a lot of explanations about why the protagonist is so awesome, why he is so awesome, and how he can become even more awesome after he is so awesome. Every day, there are these chattering words going back and forth, and there is no plot at all.

What is written at the end? I couldn't stand it after writing a hundred pictures. It was a waste of my money. The world of demons and monsters was written as love and love by you. It caused a conflict with some passers-by who had no IQ. The conflict was just one or two pieces. My money is not money, right?

It's beautiful^ω^, thank you for the authorｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

What about the weird monster? Keep talking about love, pretending to be cool, I'm here to be weird and scary, what are you writing about, it's a waste of my money

It was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more watery later on.

After taking it, this novel was not bad at first, but Chapters 88 and 89 turned out to be extremely poisonous and killed me directly.

It's such a stupid setting. They actually practice together.

This is the first time I have read a book in its entirety in two years. The beginning was okay, but the ending felt too subpar, which lowered the book's grade.

Why have the two new books been taken off the shelves? I still keep it on the bookshelf, but as soon as I look at it, all the books are gone 🤔

I have a lot of ideas and I'm fully booked now. I look forward to writing a lot.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! ! ! I haven't seen such an imaginative novel in a long time! It's good to read, but the writing is a bit strong 👍🏻. If it were too watery, I might have given up on the book. Fortunately, the plot of the novel is still good. It's just that the protagonist's cheating is too big, and he is invincible in the world in just a few years. In fact, the world is so big, the protagonist's cheating will be slower, the plot will be more interesting, and there is a lot to describe about the protagonist Mu Lin's cheating... I really like the protagonist Mu Lin's thoughts on the power of the fantasy world later. Dimension expansion, suppressing the end of the world with one person's power, writing his own myth of human ancestors, and building his own heaven and earth... I look forward to the author's next novel being more interesting and exciting, and more imaginative. It also makes the protagonist's hacking speed slower. The speed-running plot feels too fast, and it is not enough to read! !

The highlights are in line with the introduction, and the development of Gold Finger is very thoughtful!

More updates, very smooth! Come on.