National Fortune Fox Fairy, I Will Lead the Empress to Cultivate Immortality

It's a bit cool, but I also know what I wrote wrong. However, you still have to bite the bullet and write it, you can't cut it off. And if I want to be recommended, there should be another chance. So I hope friends who are watching and will watch. If any errors are pointed out, the author will accept them seriously. But, why don't you be gentler? Don't want to break the defense|･ω･｀)

If the author wants to write silly and sweet articles, there is no problem. You can follow that style of writing, but the problem is that sometimes the sentences are really inconsistent. You can use this as a practice to polish your writing, and then write a book seriously.

I think the author could read some male videos. When written this way, boys will look uncomfortable. My suggestion is to make the male protagonist stronger and smarter. The male protagonist you write the way you are now is a jerk. If you write a harem story, the girls should be weaker, otherwise they will be very poisonous.

How can I put it this way? It feels a bit uncomfortable to watch. In the early stage, the man is on top of the woman, and in the later stage, the woman is on top of the man. What about chasing his wife in the crematorium?

The protagonist is like a puppet on a string, without any thoughts of his own. The empress can calculate and knead her as much as she wants. The plot I am currently watching is: Empress, I am going to plot against the protagonist. Protagonist, ah, I have been plotted. I am angry. Empress, you can't be angry. Protagonist, ah, I am not angry anymore. I have no thoughts of my own.

When I saw Chapter 6, there was the female protagonist Lily, and the male protagonist was telling passers-by and the male co-star how he became the female emperor. I couldn't hold myself back.

I read the article before going to bed, and now that I can't sleep, I suddenly want to write a book review. I was attracted by the title of the book because I like foxes. The protagonist looks like a native, very childish, indeed a little fox. He has no independent opinions, is indecisive, and even talks about being a genius. At present, it seems that he is always on the decline, and his relationship with the empress is not equal. He puts his sword on his neck at every turn, talks about cooperation, and throws away all his chips, but does not eat any of the cakes on the other side. I got married to the empress, but I didn't even touch her body on the wedding night! As a result, the protagonist was given alms to a high-ranking palace maid so that the protagonist and the palace maid could get married! ? ! ?（💩，，……，，），2，2（2，），，（2，） It was the first time I killed an enemy in the bandit camp. I felt a little bit mature in my character and a little pretentious, but it was pretty good. He was besieged again, his blood was burned, and his future talents and paths were blocked. Then the 2nd guy came to rescue him, gave him a few bottles of medicine, and went down the steps. Marry Miss Luo, and then send Miss Luo to the empress as a female official. Emmmm, in short, my impression of the protagonist so far is that he bullies the weak and fears the strong and always suffers. He can bully mortals, but he cannot defeat eunuchs. He was running away and being beaten all the time, and the empress kept clamoring to catch him, break his legs, crush his bones and throw away ashes (perhaps for the sake of chasing her husband in the future?). I'm actually quite surprised that I can watch the latest chapter. Putting aside the poisonous points, it's not that I can't stand it. The author knows that this kind of deflated protagonist is no longer popular. In other words, deflated protagonists are okay, but the protagonist cannot be so stupid and weak. Nowadays, being depressed is often a sign of wanting to promote before suppressing. If you are slapped, it doesn't mean you have to slap it back, but you should at least grit your teeth so that the slap hurts. If this fox hadn't been the protagonist, he would have been transformed into a fur coat. I hope that the protagonist will grow up in the future, be responsible, passionate, and more mature. I also hope that the author can continue to write. This can be regarded as accumulating experience. This is the first time I have ever thought of writing a book review in the middle of the night. I will continue reading. Come on, author 🌹

I posted the wrong channel. Please modify it a bit and it will be better to send a female channel.

I always feel that the pace is a bit too fast. I left so quickly. Isn't the relationship with the empress well written? (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

Come on✺◟(*❛ัᴗ❛ั*)◞✺

Can the author add two more pages today? I give you all my recommendation votes.

"Hmph, Yuluo will snatch Xiaobai back from her sister!!!"

What to say about the protagonist, I feel like I have no brains. A primary school student is still at the level of a primary school student. All the opportunities given by the system are given to the empress. The protagonist has nothing to gain. The empress does not have a good impression of the protagonist. The so-called good impression comes from the charm. In terms of behavior, it is the aura of the protagonist. Otherwise, the little fox will kill him if he gets the thing. The protagonist still has expectations during the period of being tortured. Others will put a sword to your neck and threaten you. You say in your heart and mouth that you are not afraid of death, but you are actually threatened. The protagonist does not have distinctive personality traits, but only follows the development of the main plot. This book is just for training, but don't make any system to give things to the protagonist in the future. The protagonist can't use them. They are for others to use. Even if they are given to women, they must have a brain. Originally, it was well written that the protagonist will serve as a totem of luck in the court, and the state's enshrinement is almost worthy of the protagonist's treatment. However, the protagonist used to give things for free. This is in the hope that the empress will rise to strength, and then the husband-chasing crematorium will give things to the protagonist, and will it cause a sister to fight for her husband?

Can the author add two more pages today?

Pursuing reading is very important, as it is related to the performance of a new book. Whether a book can be written down, the most important thing is to read it. Although I won't cut it even if my grades are not good. But I hope all readers will give it a chance, collect a little bit, and read it later! Otherwise, if you don't have results, you really won't be able to make updates! Woo, you will eat dirt. Please!

Suddenly I remembered this book. I missed it!

I'm so troubled. Any novel can make me remember it for a long time. I miss you and give it a reward.