The God of War Returns, but with a Yandere Girlfriend

Let's talk about the advantages first. The big fight scenes are well written, the supporting characters' IQs match their status, and there are also a few standout characters. The overall plot has no flaws, and there are occasional outstanding chapters. The shortcomings can be described in one word: they are different. The title of the book is about the return of the God of War, but it is not decisive enough, the pace is not fast enough, and it is not exciting enough. The worst thing is that the male protagonist is responsible for the funny plot, and the real character is completely defeated The title of the book also mentions a yandere girlfriend, this setting is completely superficial. The heroine didn't do anything that a yandere should do, she only used a hatchet to scare people. Moreover, the recent chapters also tend to become funny characters The plot style changes very quickly. In the first chapter, the supporting characters are bitter and angry, but in the next chapter they switch to the protagonist and they are laughing again. The sense of separation is too strong and it looks messy That's about it. In short, I advise the author to think carefully about what he is good at, and don't do inexplicable bad things.

The introduction of Invincible is really like the infinite flow in one sentence Introduction to persuade a bunch of people to retreat Foreign invasion, the fall of heaven and so on 🥵🥵 I can only say that your writing is really complicated

I haven't read the book yet, but the introduction is incredible.

First, I can play with my smartphone. Second, cats will eat when they are hungry and drink water when they are thirsty. Third, when it rains, the cat will run home. Fourth, Meow will sleep when he is sleepy. Fifth... Fifth personality, activate! 😡

I'm going, Baiyinmeng, I'm going, why is it the author himself?

It took more than two hours to read it. Some parts are quite amazing. It is an unexpected and exciting plot. It is a masterpiece.

The introduction looks very much like it was ten years ago

After reading the introduction, I found out that it turned out to be the God of War, the King of Soldiers, the Dragon King, and the Miracle Doctor. A domineering CEO dotes on his girlfriend. You must try it. I will first find a rope and reincarnate to remove the pollution.

I don't see any description of a yandere, it's just like selling sheep over dogs.

The ultimate crooked-mouthed dragon king, and the main character is his girlfriend's Tom Cat being played with between his hands? Such a plot?

Hello, are there any monthly packages available?

Brothers, because the operating officer of this book, his grandma, has been posting pictures, and I can't even see the comments, so I'm going to be a god for this one, and wait until I finish reading it.

There is no female protagonist in the character card and all are female supporting characters. It is hard to believe that the male protagonist is dedicated to his love.

Uh, is this operator posting pictures all the time just to increase the volume of comments? It's a bit disgusting, but I can't see the normal comments anymore, so I left. . .

Although I'm not sure, it's too miserable 🙂

The results are so bad, I can rank seventh in all bookings.

I ran out of books to read, so come back and read it again 😰

Is the author Maomao Xiaoyao?