Hogwarts: the Omniscient Grimoire

The author is obviously not familiar with various settings in the original books, and mistakes can be seen from time to time. For example, the Wolfsbane potion is drunk a week in advance. In the plot, the author seems to think that it is drunk on the same day. The Triwizard Tournament is also made so that other colleges come to Hogwarts at the beginning of the semester. But these mistakes can be tolerated. The writing is still good, not too bad, and it is a good book.

It's intermittent, and it feels like writing a novel. The creativity is good, and the characters have a bit of soul, but there are only a few. The setting of special characters is unclear, the language is messy, the parts that should be long are too short, and the parts that should be short are too long, and it feels like it will be discontinued.

Don't have a female protagonist, it's too cliché to have a female protagonist, I raise the banner for no cp! ! !

If the author doesn't explain it first, who is the heroine? This is very important. Author, you don't want to speculate in stocks, do you?

Controlling the fierce fire and extinguishing it in the water, this part really embarrassed me 😅

Brother, there is a female protagonist 🙂

Note: A large number of secondary equipment are privately owned.

There are many idioms, such as the Weasley brothers inventing the dung egg

I want to write something different, but in general.

Harry Potter is indeed not suitable for multiple heroines. If the heroine is Luna, she likes someone who is willing to accompany her to explore those illusory things. She chose Rolf Scamander, Newt's grandson, because he is willing to accompany her to go around the world to find things like the Curved Horned Beast and the Stalker that were invented by her father. At the same time, his family is knowledgeable and knows a lot about magical creatures. Mainly because Xenophilius Lovegood was such a jerk, he cheated his daughter and lied to her since childhood. Finally, he couldn't bear to see Luna and his wife running around and chose to tell the truth, so Luna gave up completely.

I hope the heroine is Ginny. Single or multiple characters are fine. Can't find a few books about her heroine.

At first I was quite interested because the male protagonist is an Aboriginal, but when I saw Chapter 10, Hermione mentioned her period in public. . . . . So low, so disgusting

It's very good. It has the flavor of a wizard's fairy tale. I hope I can finish it.

Seriously private, and really bland and untroubled

Guess how many words this book has! I bet 300,000!

A very nice Harry Potter novel

It actually started writing when Harry was in second grade, which is a bit novel.

Author, don't play with fire🙅🏻‍♂️