Black Urn

I read Chapter 10 and it was written very well for you. But the cultivation system is too scattered and I feel a little frustrated. I can't stand it anymore. What is the relationship between holding and breaking the holding and holding Qi in Naqi realm cultivation? And what kind of inspiration is there? What is it used for? What is it describing? I don't want you to give up the setting in a lengthy discussion, but I can't explain it at all.

The writing was pretty good, but I didn't like the setting where the male protagonist killed Qingmei when he first came up, so I left

It's a good start, but don't be too slow to start or end at the end. Many novels feel like they have a different author as soon as they are published. The level plummeted, heading straight towards the routine text.

After reading the training system, I had a vague feeling that it was too complicated. It is a good book, but it is probably a niche one. If the settings were written in a simple and easy-to-understand way, it would be easier to understand.

The more I look at it, the more depressed I become, that's all!

The setting is innovative and the writing is good. It is considered top-notch. I hope I can continue writing.

Not a demon, but better than a demon. Isn't this just a demon? Since you like excitement, it's better to follow through and become a villain instead of a human being. How cool it would be! I can also praise him for his magnanimity, what a villain.

After reading about ten chapters, I can't understand the Golden Finger and the training system. It's a thankless task for a new author.

Is this a pigeon? Unexpectedly, I saved up and entered the palace 🙂

There are really very few well-written dark novels, it's so hard to find, and I really like setting. I'm ecstatic about setting. It's such a good writing, but why am I so stuck...

The cultivation method written by the author is indeed complicated and cannot be obtained.

This is the eunuch. The setting is pretty good.

In fact, the story is good and the writing is good. However, with the current market environment like this, will the author still publish a new book?

What on earth is this persistence and practice? I feel very unhappy if I don't understand it.

Everyone seems to have a vague understanding of persistence and breaking of persistence. In fact, I alluded to it in Chapters 2, 5, 25, and 40: Persistence is the formula for your behavior, and it is also a condition for gaining strength. It is also a cage that hinders yourself, so you have to break it. For example: "Donghua Yueqing" accepts Qi, holds the pure spirit and protects the body. In daily life, one must deliberately avoid impurity. This is the formula. To break the shackles is to break the shackles that imprison oneself (the book does not describe how to break this steadfastness, because it doesn't matter whether the Naqi is broken or not. If it must be broken, the heart will be pure and uncontaminated. It doesn't matter if the heart is pure and the body is dirty.) When you break the steadfastness, you will be in direct contact with the Tao, and it will be easier to realize the Tao. Your cultivation will grow much faster, and it will be easier to break through. It's just that the first and second realms have little to do with enlightenment. If you don't break it, you won't break it. It's no big deal. It has not been written clearly before, mainly because the protagonist himself does not know it, and it would be too blunt to just throw away the setting. This time, let's write it clearly through Yuanzhu's appearance.

I feel that each character has his own characteristics, and his daily IQ is basically online.

I think it looks good but the levels are too vague. If the level could be clearly stated at the beginning, it would feel more popular.

The plot of the story is bland and understandable in the early stage. Merits can be taken away at will, which is unreasonable. The new disciples have no way out at all. They must be the disciples of the big family.

Can you please explain the training system in detail? I feel a little confused. After reading the first dozen chapters, how can I see how powerful this golden finger is?

Not bad, not bad, I wrote something new

Isn't this introduction very clear about dark literature? Why are there so many bad things about this and that in the comment area? Is it because you don't know what black text is?🤔

As a new attempt, it is already very good. Thank you everyone for your support and suggestions for Heilu. I hope the author can continue to adhere to this love. See you again 🐷✌️❤️

In this book, the male protagonist is portrayed as having a 90% share of the blame. He just picked up the book and continues to write like this. Judging from the writing style, he is probably not a newcomer. Of course, he may never write another book in the future, which means he is not suitable for eating this bowl of rice.

Good book, but unfortunately there are too few of them. I hope I don't need eunuchs.

The beginning is quite good, but it is difficult to read, and the setting is new. It is not like a novice article, and I forgot about the author. Come on!

Come on, author, I hope to keep updating 😍

@{"NickName":"","UserId":320205174} Brother, you are suitable for writing a book. If you are talented, just write about Xianxia. Change the author's name. It is easy to remember. The five poor are similar. You can't do the six poor. Write about the clone seizing the body flow, or the peeping flow, the rebirth seizing the body flow, Xianjia, Xianyu and the like. Clone, see if I can have infinite clones through my cultivation of immortality, seize the body to search for the dead genius. Peeping, peeking into the fairy road, there are actually many things that can be written, and everyone who peeps has some chance. Similar to your style, the author of Xianxianjia. If not, change the author's name. The most important thing is to be simple and easy to remember.

It's not very clear. The realm is also blurred, so I gave up the book.

. . . I recently read one of the worst books with the first two chapters. The other one is by an old author of Wizarding World War.

From the introduction, I still have a clear conscience 😁