Black Talisman

I read Chapter 10 and it was written very well for you. But the cultivation system is too scattered and I feel a little frustrated. I can't stand it anymore. What is the relationship between holding and breaking the holding and holding Qi in Naqi realm cultivation? And what kind of inspiration is there? What is it used for? What is it describing? I don't want you to give up the setting in a lengthy discussion, but I can't explain it at all.

The writing was pretty good, but I didn't like the setting where the male protagonist killed Qingmei when he first came up, so I left

After reading the training system, I had a vague feeling that it was too complicated. It is a good book, but it is probably a niche one. If the settings were written in a simple and easy-to-understand way, it would be easier to understand.

It's a good start, but don't be too slow to start or end at the end. Many novels feel like they have a different author as soon as they are published. The level plummeted, heading straight towards the routine text.

The more I look at it, the more depressed I become, that's all!

The setting is innovative and the writing is good. It is considered top-notch. I hope I can continue writing.

Not a demon, but better than a demon. Isn't this just a demon? Since you like excitement, it's better to follow through and become a villain instead of a human being. How cool it would be! I can also praise him for his magnanimity, what a villain.

Is this a pigeon? Unexpectedly, I saved up and entered the palace 🙂

There are really very few well-written dark novels, it's so hard to find, and I really like setting. I'm ecstatic about setting. It's such a good writing, but why am I so stuck...

After reading about ten chapters, I can't understand the Golden Finger and the training system. It's a thankless task for a new author.