Black Talisman

I've read 10 chapters and it's well-written, but the cultivation system is too scattered, making it a bit frustrating to read and I can't continue. What's the connection between Qi Gathering Realm cultivation, Breaking Through Qi Gathering, and Qi Gathering? And what's the use of that spiritual energy? What is it used for? And what is it described? I didn't ask you to give a long explanation of the settings, but you can't leave it completely unexplained.

The writing is alright, quite good, but the trope of the male lead killing his childhood sweetheart right off the bat isn't to my liking, so I'm leaving.

After reading about the cultivation system, I felt it was quite vague and too complicated. It's a good book, but probably for a niche audience. If the setting were written in a simpler and more understandable way, it would be easier to comprehend.

The beginning is good, but hopefully it won't end weakly. Many novels seem to change authors as soon as they're published. The quality drops drastically, heading straight for formulaic stories.

The more I look at it, the more depressed I feel. Oh well!

The premise is original, and the writing is excellent; it's quite outstanding. I hope you continue writing.

Not a demon, yet worse than a demon—isn't that what a demon is? Since you like excitement, why not go all the way and become a villain, not even human? How awesome would that be! I could even praise your frankness—what a true villain.

So, they're just going to back out now? I never thought I'd actually get in after saving it up for so long! 🙂

Well-written dark fantasy stories are so rare, they're hard to find. And I really love the premise, a true fantasy enthusiast! This is totally my cup of tea, how could it be such a disappointment...

After reading about ten chapters, the concepts of "golden finger" (cheat code) and cultivation system are still unclear. For a new author, this is a thankless task.