Yakuza-Ryu Begins Liver Proficiency by Becoming a Healer

These conversations are so weird, I feel like my tea is full of tea.

How should I put it? There are too many adjectives. What can be said in two sentences is full of water in one chapter. Even after reading several chapters, it seems that I have not read it. It is not water, but adjectives. There is too much chicken soup. Most of the first chapter is full of them.

I feel that this author writes the book in a very written way. By the way, author, are you really not in the journalism industry? Or other similar jobs that involve writing a lot of written reports. I guess you write a lot of similar written reports in your daily work.

Primary school composition level writing style, straightforward narrative writing

This choice of words and sentences is similar to what I wrote using AI. It's logical

Is it possible that the current protagonist is actually the Gang Qi of Qi Control, but the internal structure of this Gang Qi needs to be dealt with by oneself. In other words, there can be two types of development: 1. The diamond structure that defends against penetrating force, which is hard; 2. The structure that can be used to defend against bludgeoning can be a bulletproof vest; 3) The diamond + vortex mode that dissipates force after it is completed; 4) The gravity mode, which loses weight when in contact with Gang Qi, etc. What do you think of my suggestion, author?

The content is not a big problem, although it is a bit exaggerated. The main problem is that the writing is too, how should I say, casual? It feels like the perspective keeps changing

I watched a little bit, and I felt that the dialogue was a bit too polite 😥

Why did you copy other books at the beginning (.-_-.)📘

Don't write so much chicken soup, you will soon get bored while reading it

I also think this conversation is too strange.

It doesn't look good🙂🙂

It's okay, but can the author unify the names of the protagonists? One moment is Lu Changan, the other is Lu Changan.

The writing style needs to be improved and is a bit stiff

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