Pirate: Luffy-Sensei, I Was Forced to Serve as a General

In my mind, One Piece should be like this, burning, laughing, and crying. Rather than becoming a blood-only theory, the answer is that with a good father, even a little kid can become the leader of a country. The author wrote it to me until the very end, and exposed all the disgusting plots in the later stages.

Pirates? Is there any more suitable teaching method than beating?

There is a saying, what can change the fate of pirates is not the glory of the king. With the liberation fighters, in the world of pirates, there is no need for the traditional king. What is needed is just the brainless cool writing that you look down on. What is the price of Nika? Nika can certainly bring salvation, but it must be born twenty years later, among the pirates who enter the new world at that time. No matter how many capable people there are before that, they are useless, let alone the Celestial Dragons, the rule of Kaido Serpent is impregnable. What pirates need now is not some scientific theoretical knowledge and moral line. In terms of technology, Bei Datou's archeology is enough for the whole world. In terms of military force, an army of ten thousand people is not as good as the poison gas bombs of third-rate scientists. Lulucia's brave resistance and then turning into a big pit is the best example. If you want to change this story with the help of Haoran's righteousness, the simplest thing is "Norma Kojiro". The muscles on his back form a German character, destroy all the Celestial Dragons and bring about a new order. What the pirates need most is a brainless and exciting story, unless you change the setting. As for joining the navy to bring about changes, I would describe it in four words as "rebellion on your knees". As long as you become a navy and get paid, you are an accomplice of the Tianlong people, and you need to be responsible for every drop of shampoo. The protagonist surrendered to the Celestial Dragon men just because his privacy and vest were stolen by the Garps. His mentors in history didn't even have the courage to go to jail. I don't agree with this kind of character anyway.

The front is okay. It's just that the idol comes out weird and I can't understand it.

It's a good book, but this is enough for anyone to think we look down upon it! Another 200... Not 400 chapters! ! !

Shen Nong read a chapter and a half here This book may be a forced plot flow

When I first opened the book at the beginning of the year, I was chasing your book. But when the plot reaches the point of meeting Robin on the Grand Line, the style of painting changes. It was originally a very passionate and touching story, but it suddenly fell in love. Although it didn't break down, it didn't look very exciting. Even so, relying on your setting of using Haoran's righteousness to release the Guili sword, you can still feel comfortable. In the end, after you fired off the light cannon to kill Blackbeard, you stopped updating it and thought you were a eunuch. I saw you started updating again a few days ago. When I came back to look at it, MD, this is the One Piece I want to watch. Why should I write about love when I have nothing to do? If you can write about layout, planning and GM, write more. Hurry up and update, don't squeeze in one chapter a day, my cat is even more diligent than you!

I think at least 80% of people are persuaded to quit by your name. Even if there is Wang Zhi in One Piece, it is only a negligible mention, and it does not affect the style at all. But since they are all written in fan fiction, the protagonist's name is the most common thing, so it does not mean that the world view allows it. The world view also allows perverted lolita rapists to appear, but do you dare to let him be the protagonist?

The writing is not smooth, and it feels like the pictures in my mind are going one after another, with a lot of space in between, like AI

It's a bit new, but it feels a bit inconsistent. It depends on the individual

I recently visited Tieba and learned that there are many ways to recommend Qidian, from new book storage to first round, second round, recommendation, and smart recommendation. There seem to be many other data requirements for collecting new books and reading them. The storage of new books for this book should end tomorrow, February 5th. There is probably no test pitch, but there should be a 100,000-word smart pitch. If you readers don't mind, please read a few more chapters, maybe you can save it. ——I beg you to reincarnate Hua Tuo, Bian Que, and Zhang Zhongjing! In addition, please give me your comments. With your words as a mirror, I still have the confidence to write a little better. In addition, learn from other authors and create a reader group, group number: 286032677. Ha, it's my first time to be a group leader. Everyone is welcome to bring a chair in and sit.