Naruto: Starting with a Gacha Mobile Game

To be honest, until now, I have not seen any fan fiction in which the protagonist immediately integrated the Uchiha and annihilated F4 after acquiring the Eternal Eye. It was obviously an invincible force in the early stage, but it was just dawdling.

The original work, Naruto mobile game, Naruto OL, Ultra Storm, as long as there is a prototype For example: Ultimate Storm-Otsutsuki Toneri (Tenshenggan) Naruto mobile game-Senju Tobirama (Drifting Samurai) Naruto OL-Uchiha Izuna (If it is convenient, please indicate which game it is in front, so I can find it.)

I thought that I would stop eating beef after I got the S-nin, but after watching it I realized that I still didn't change the plot and continued to cower. Who likes to watch Naruto and read conspiracy theories? Real guns and swords are the most interesting. I won't write it if it is on the shelf.

I really liked this book, but when I saw a man created from the void to fight against and suppress the protagonist, I lost interest in it. This is not how Invincible novels are written. Invincible novels can also be very long and enjoyable without suppressing the protagonist. For example, Pei Tu Gou has a good book, and Dr. Chen, and there is also one called Starting from a Perfect World. For example, the vest element of this book is very good. It is very enjoyable to write. The vest is also one of the core elements of the Tenseigan. This aspect of the vest is much more interesting than writing about Hyuga Natsu Void Tenseigan versus the protagonist.

Why did you give Hinata Natsu the reincarnation eye to use for the Six Paths? Not worth it at all. Is it convenient for you to waste so much pen and ink? It will take a long time to build this thing. It feels like losing a watermelon and picking up sesame seeds.

Um? Does the author want to write a group portrait or multiple protagonists? Take control of it. Don't ☝🤓: Hey~ I did all the sex work, and then I was fucked by Peng Peng.

Why do some people always think that Sasuke's Kaleidoscope is weak? According to the never-extinguishing characteristic of black flame, it is not a conceptual power in any novel. That's it for the Hokage. In a fight, a 10-second death effect will be applied to you. It cannot be removed unless you move the part. Isn't this weak?

Create a god from the void? Why is Ri Xiangxia doing this? If you want to say that she relied on her own planning and hard work to complete her genes and obtain the chakra of the reincarnation eye and ascend to godhood, then that's no problem. But look at Gouba, what you wrote is a Gouba thing? Just send a deus ex machina to the old man with a plug-in, right? Are Ri Xiangxia's efforts and rewards proportional to this? Is Hamura so anxious? Knowing that he was just a mutilated Otsutsuki, he directly found a Hyuga clan member to kill him? None of the old men in the Six Paths are so outrageous. Others are just trying to reincarnate their own son's chakra. Why don't you just call me "the one who reveals destiny?" What? Do you also have a plug-in for Shiren's Eyeless Prophecy? In short, either change it, or let her expose the reincarnation chakra when she encounters danger in the third battle and be noticed by the protagonist, and then be killed by the protagonist and hit GG. Otherwise, I really can't stand it anymore. When I saw Hamura coming down, I knew he was going to cheat Hinata Xia, but that's not how he did it. You should at least let Hamura observe it, and you have to give the rationale for Hamura's cheating on Hinata Xia.

I originally wanted to subscribe, but before it was released, I felt that Hinata Natsu would be cheating and trying to overpower the protagonist. Later, Hinata Natsu relied on the author's will to cheat, and the protagonist had cheats and struggled to fight, so I was a little afraid to watch it.

What is this Rixiang Xia? This is the protagonist. I've been writing and haven't figured out how to strengthen it. Can anyone tell me what this character is for?