Love Apartment: It Begins When I Pick Up a Rich Heiress

How much money does the protagonist have in the latest chapter? Or is he still relying on the meager sums he made in the previous chapters to marry her? He's always smiling and not in a hurry. The key is, you don't even have Zhanbo's abilities! Are you planning to rely entirely on the woman's sacrifices to make her insist on marrying you?

Finally found someone like Wanyu to be the female lead, keep it up!

Why would a capitalist's daughter fall for a poor loser like you? In the original drama, she broke up with Zhanbo, saying it was for her ideals; she wanted to study design in Milan. But studying design doesn't require a breakup, especially since Zhanbo was willing to go with her. Frankly, it means she didn't love him anymore. A rich girl liking a poor boy? It's a joke. That's why I've never liked the character Wanyu.

Lovely Wanyu

Wanyu

It's clearly written by a female author; there's no career storyline in over 20 chapters.

The author clearly has no concept of the characters' heights. There's a scene in the original series where Lu Ziqiao and Guan Gu Shenqi compare heights. Guan Gu is at most 185cm, and Lu Ziqiao is around 180cm. Yet, the male characters you wrote are all 190cm tall! And the most ridiculous thing is that you wrote Wan Yu is 170cm and weighs less than 90kg? Do you know what that means?

It's much better than that book "South Wind Passes By," which was much more enjoyable to read. The male lead's personality is like a tragic hero; he shouldn't have been forced into "iPartment." Reading over 60 chapters of that book was incredibly painful.

Hmmm, it's a little awkward.

Reading your novel broke me down, not because it's particularly well-written, but because *iPartment* is a show I watched growing up. Looking back now, my life seems like a complete mess—no friends, no money, nothing. I'm stuck in the past, unable to move on, and I long for a few close friends.