In Love Apartment, the System Makes Me Cultivate Immortality

Is this book still about Wanyu as the female lead?

After reading a few chapters, I don't quite understand why the protagonist would be so dismissive of the opportunity to cultivate immortality due to a system error! It's so frustrating! Getting a tenfold return is clearly a way to gain favor and profit! The protagonist is still so conflicted; otherwise, don't write a story with multiple female leads!

There's a cow hidden inside Hu Yifei's body, hahaha!

Your novel was unappealing to me; I only read it because of the nostalgia it evoked from the TV series. But you made the male lead a young man just about to start university. Aren't all the characters in *iPartment* older than him? It's not about the age gap; even writing him as a recent graduate would have been much better.

Your pacing is incredibly slow! You've already reached 200 chapters, and you've only confirmed one female lead, Lin Wanyu. The others are still in the works. This harem... I don't even know where the harem is going. Currently, there are only five female characters confirmed as part of a harem. One is already confirmed. The other four are still in the works.

Ideally, we should capture them all at once. Hu Yifei, Tang Youyou, Qin Yumo, Cheng Meijia, Lin Wanyu, Nuolan, Weiwei, Xinling, Zhuge Dasheng, Zhuge Dali, Curry Sauce, and if possible, add Sha Lele from "The Elite of Troublesome Affairs," Ouyang Mofei, and Jin Ruoyu. As for Lisa, she's optional. You could be like Mr. Yi, voluntarily capturing them all.

If the author doesn't work harder, even piracy won't get anyone to copy it.

Please, author, include some nicer pictures in the chapters! 😂

Seriously, the problems keep piling up towards the end. Stop taking in every single woman, okay? It's turning into a harem novel! They're giving the male lead a pure love persona, but it's hypocritical. Two or four female leads are enough; for Wan Yu, isn't that just a form of cuckoldry? 🤔 It really felt so strange towards the end.

The premise of a single, virgin man at the beginning usually implies that the author is also a virgin.