Dou Po Zhi Topped the Lin Xiu Yahao

In addition to the Garma Empire, Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, Queen Medusa, Little Medical Fairy, Qinglin, Fallen Heart Flame, and Canaan Academy in Battle of the Sky, will these places be written about? No matter how beautifully written it is, don't you get tired of seeing all the Dou Po fans following the same routine? I am not tired of writing books, but I am tired of reading books.

The emotional drama is poorly written, and the protagonist is so wretched. Just delete the latest chapter. Don't write if you don't know how to write, the characters will be ruined for you.

If you want to play poison with me, you might as well just lick Xiao Yan. In that case, you will be fine no matter how you give Xiao Yan something.

The author, the subject matter is quite innovative, but why does it feel like the protagonist is like a gangster? The latest chapter, asking for directions, feels very obscene.

Unless there are heavens interspersed in the middle, people like you will be in the same group later. Others become more tired when they see it, because the routines are all the same, not just the Tagore Desert of the Jama Empire. Qinglian Earth Heart Fire Fallen Heart Flame and so on. You can guess, what should you do next? Aesthetic fatigue, since you are writing fan fiction, you are just practicing for fun anyway. Or earn some royalties, after all, this thing is not very profitable. Then you might as well intersperse more heavens. And it can directly delete some unnecessary emotions. Like other people writing a fanfic, oh my god, there are five or six hundred pictures of the main character still fighting the king. Dou Huang. I can't stand it at all. I have read their reviews, and the monthly pass is not as good as Zhutianliu.

It's rare for an author to have so many people criticize him after writing only fifty chapters. It's really rare.

Don't you understand intersectional narratives? Xiao Yan Has Xiao Yan's Adventure Your protagonist has his own adventure and then has an encounter. Wouldn't your range be wider this way?

It's still a synopsis... I'm gone, buddy, it's a long way to go. I wish you better and better.

To put it bluntly, I feel like my writing is not as good as mine 🥵 It's too childish.

Find a job in a factory. You are not suitable for writing novels. It is a waste of time and life.

I read the introduction and saw Chapter 18. The progress was very fast. I felt that it was the same as reading the outline. There was also something wrong with the character of the protagonist. The Lezi people were not Lezi people. Instead, they felt a bit forced to be dissatisfied, so the dialogue between the characters looked very awkward. It is being recommended. I hope the author can pay attention to it, otherwise it will be easy to discourage readers. I can only add it to the bookshelf first and wait for a while to take a look.

Look at you*. You thought you were a Dou Po fan, but it turns out it's nothing like that.

The protagonist has a mentality of playing games. This kind of modern urban novel is okay, but if you write fantasy novels, you can only be discouraged.

There are dozens in one chapter,,, Lin Xiuya,,, you use the names to make up the numbers

Brother, how dare you make a move. 😰

What nonsense is written on the back?

Author, you'd better go into the factory and drill screws.