Ah? How Did My Wife Come True?

The front part is okay, but the back part is crotchless The back plot is inexplicable The update is slow The above comments only represent my personal views

The fairy grass at the beginning of the book and the ordinary grass behind it, especially the story of Shushan, made me nervous. Let's talk about the advantages first: the author's description of the emotional drama is really good and very delicate. But the shortcomings are also the same. While the previous emotional scenes are too good, the writing power of the story seems a bit stretched compared to the layout. It can be seen that I want to express what I think, but the writing feels like self-pleasure 😥. It also downplays the image of the heroine portrayed earlier, and it feels like neither three nor four nor good nor bad. Not to mention ugly, it is not that eye-catching, and tasteless. Not only did the image of a certain heroine fail to be deepened, but the image of other heroines was also weakened. This is also a point that is difficult to grasp for many female protagonists. I also felt this way when I read the movie next door, The Empress, in the later stages. Let me talk about my personal opinion again. I think the focus should be on the interaction between the male and female protagonists, rather than on what the male protagonist does. The female protagonist is watching and thinking about it, and it feels like the female protagonist is being marginalized as the story develops.

It's really a template for my exclusive dream game.

The author has ideas and the subject matter is innovative, but when I open the simulator, I always give some God's perspective, and the third-party psychological activities have a strong sense of violation, which makes it awkward no matter how you look at it.

This book is so good. It's really the only White Moonlight I've read in the past three years! Why can't I move up the rankings? Come on! Such a great book! It can't be buried!

I've been feeling a bit depressed lately and want to read novels alone. You all should delete the starting point.

Gu Jiangming is a time traveler. He actually has no reincarnation in this world. The reincarnation that Mi Changsheng joined was actually his own body, for this person who should not exist. So countless world lines were formed, which also gave Gu Jiangming the function of transforming various cards, and the ability to archive or not archive the world. Because it is essentially the world exploration carried out by Gu Jiangming himself, but it is displayed in a simulated way. So if he inherits his own things under corresponding circumstances, Gu Jiangming will adapt very quickly. (These settings will be explained one by one in the book, please ignore those who deliberately set the pace.)

Brother, please, please give me another chapter, not much, just one chapter🤌, a short chapter🤌 is fine, please, I will never run away again, brother, I am really itchy, please, I am obedient, I will never make trouble again in the future🤐, please, brother🙏, please update me with one chapter, my body is itching to death now, please. 🙏, Brother, please give me one more update for the last time. I beg you, brother, I will give you whatever you want. Just update me a little more. It's like there are ants crawling in my body now. It's so itchy. Brother, please update me. The last time, I swear✋, it's really the last time...

Gu Jiangming, Jiujiu, Wang Qinghe, and Long tide are all in the same timeline of reincarnation simulation (present world) The existing world lines are seventy years ago (Wang Qinghe), three hundred years ago (Jiujiu), and ten thousand years ago (Long tide, Wang Qinghe). Don't ask when the current timeline is. The current timeline is the normal timeline, and Gu Jiangming can only push back the normal timeline of reincarnation.

Is the author the reincarnation of Lao Deng, or is he invaded by an alien demon from the software next door 😍

It's a bit hard to pursue now (let me explain that I am fully committed to save my life). The main world view is not deepened, and the character creation is getting more and more outrageous. According to the way the appearance is written, the dragon girl should treat the male protagonist as a friend, and she is a bit dull. But now she robs the male protagonist, which is not in line with her behavior. After all, in the chapter of Heaven and Earth, the protagonist is together with Wang Qinghe and does not do anything outrageous. Gusu Bird is a pure suffering master, and it feels like she has been writing about reincarnation. , There is not much written about it in this world, then the organization founded by Gusu Bird is in vain, and Wang Qinghe's family is not reflected. There are more and more female protagonists, and the relationship between the characters is getting worse and worse. Some people are only worthy of appearing once, and their combat power It also collapsed. People who have survived for thousands of years do not seem to be pure clowns on the Shushan side. They have never changed history from the future. It is hard to understand how Gu Nianliu survived when the spiritual energy of the world began to decline and the Shushan era ended. Just my personal opinion, and the Gusu Bird, it's really miserable

Shushan's spirit is very good, but the second time he came, it became a joke, and the focus became the opening of the harem. What happened in the Six Dynasties? It was just a private plan!

At first glance, I thought it was not very good. After reading the second chapter, I realized that my appreciation ability was not very good.

The writers on Maozhan generally have more than enough talent but not enough in nature.

I couldn't watch it since the beginning of Chapter 100. Literary youth fell ill, and in order to describe a scene that he thought was grand, he kept laying the groundwork and lost his brain. I don't need to give examples of a certain plot being brainless, because every plot starting from Chapter 100 is brainless.

Now the whole plot has collapsed. The whole story is full of logical contradictions. I really can't stand it anymore.

Long tide

Jiujiu Official Picture

The writing was very good at the beginning. The true love between a man and a woman reincarnated as a transvestite was very touching, and the protagonist was very likable. Later, the story of the scholar who won the top prize in high school was also touching, and I shed tears while reading it. But after that, there were more and more women, making the protagonist's previous character become a joke. The touching background that was originally established shattered like a mirror. The subsequent plot also turned into a bloody soap opera before the VIP chapter, and it no longer had the original purity and refinement. I'm so moved that I can never come back, it's really...

Several copies of this book written at about the same time have been discontinued, and they are all on my bookshelf 🤔.

As title. What is the difference between fraud and fraud?

The last one was a mess, and this one is still a mess 😅

It's really just one sentence, a fantasy but a bit of practice.

Why are there so many negative reviews? I think it looks good. Can you guys compete in a healthy way?

No matter how many people criticize you in the future, I will always support you based on the touch that the first story brought to me and the spirit of Shushan.

Two hundred and forty minutes

No matter how well the previous simulation lines are written, it will be more difficult when the actual operation returns to Shushan. Alas, what a pity.

The first part was okay, but the later part got worse and worse.

Author, you wrote "I Picked Up a Life Simulator", it was my lost youth😭