Abnormal Sign

There is something wrong with the author's thinking. When he goes to kill people, the protagonist agrees to kill them with just one sentence. He also talks about the trolley problem. There is no trolley problem here at all. It's just because the protagonist has extraordinary abilities and treats ordinary people as ants. Others say that he will kill 300 people without any evidence or evidence. The protagonist does not question or seek verification, and is only confused about whether to kill or not. The trolley problem? Pooh! If someone like the author is allowed to be a judge, I don't know how many people will die unjustly!

The first priority is to press the protagonist. In a foundation-style novel, but the contained object has no corresponding strength. In fact, it is an urban superpower in the skin of the foundation. In one, the villain is too poorly drawn. The protagonist's backer is ignored. The villain's backer is extremely protective. If you say one thing or another, you should change the protagonist. There is less writing on wits. Why is there still a fight of wits if you don't have the writing power? Just like a cat and a tiger.

The setting is good, the protagonist is too naive, and the people above are stupid. The sister named Song and his father couldn't see anything clever. They both pointed out that the protagonist was a humanoid entity, a future god, and could continue national-level research, but no measures were taken yet? Oh my god, in the end, someone named Liu can still retaliate openly and openly? Oh my God, I am speechless. As mentioned earlier, the person surnamed Song has a great family background, and the director surnamed Sun is so powerful. Everyone can see that the protagonist is a humanoid entity, and everyone brags about how powerful he is, but in the end, everyone is forced to quit. The logic problem is too big. I want to know what the author thinks.

The protagonist is given an SSR-level ability, but the protagonist is overpowered and the supporting character is killed. The simplest question is that a random biology book from nowhere can unlock 2%. How about the textbooks and materials that are everywhere in the university and are ignored? Just find a dormitory, sit in the classroom for 10 minutes, and crush the little guy without any brains, and then be made into a cunning villain named Boos?

This giant company is really a failure. The organization that responds to extraordinary crises at the national level is still bureaucratic. The protagonist is disgusting and I am disgusted. I don't know why the author wrote this. There is a sense of separation from the setting. The whole world is in danger, and the front line of dealing with the crisis is still dealing with aristocratic families fighting for power and profit. Is it interesting to impose a plot? I don't know how to describe it.

The other supporting characters can be used casually, and there is no cost at all. The protagonist will die after just a little use, and the classics overwhelm the protagonist. I didn't read it later, so I don't know if the modification is permanent. At first, the holder was modified. From the author's description, he is still alive. I don't know how he survived. It would be even weaker if it were temporary.

The plug-in is quite powerful, but it's just a matter of not overpowering the protagonist. Someone else can pick up a spiritual tool and make the protagonist miserable. The organization responsible for fighting the entity also has all kinds of intrigues. I thought it was an organization similar to a foundation or the Blue and White Society. I didn't expect that a big company or director can influence the organization. It's just a grassroots team.

The introduction describes billions of extraordinary monsters, some of which are still unkillable. You, the human race, should all perish, right?

What kind of fool is that Song Yang? He keeps bragging about how smart he is, but he doesn't help at all from the beginning to the end. It can be seen from the beginning that he has no emotional intelligence. He keeps saying smart, where is the smart? He has nothing but grades and is called smart.

In the first three chapters, normal people may have brainstormed when encountering this situation. The protagonist gave me a feeling of unresponsiveness. It was a matter of description.

You're already a sophomore in college. People of this age are basically very mature. If a friend dies, there will indeed be that desperate feeling in the passion at that time. But after a while, that feeling will subside a lot

This modifier is not used correctly. What's wrong with changing blood pressure, bone density, and vision? Ask a medical student, The blood supply to the brain is cut off, bioelectrical abnormalities are combined with epilepsy, internal blood vessel bleeding, and gland overload occur all at once, and 99 of a hundred lives will be lost.

I actually came across such a beautiful book, but it's a pity that the number of words is too few. At first, I thought it was a crazy science fiction film, but after reading it, I felt that it was not crazy. Come on update

The writing is bad, the world framework is okay

Only entities can fight against entities, so the protagonist who can fight against entities is undoubtedly the entity.

π Will not be calculated. Exhaustion means that there is no circle, that is, a figure with equal lengths from one point to other points. The definition of a circle is set arbitrarily. As long as this condition is met, an irrational number can be calculated. This irrational number is π. In other words, due to condition a, proposition b is naturally true. If you conclude that proposition b is false, it means that a is wrong, but a is a condition, not a hypothesis. I don't know if you, the author, can understand it.

It is really difficult to create a passionate and explosive character in a novel that requires an intellectual protagonist. Such a powerful plug-in but I don't know how to use it, it feels like it was written by a high school student.

The first ten chapters are jelly grass, and the second chapter is food and grass.

Do wise men still need to grow? ? ? ? ? ?

Damn it, there's a new book! ! ! ! Waiting after the disaster! ! ! !

Wc, the author actually published a new book

The previous plot was okay, but why did I turn on the plot mode while writing it? I haven't read more than 20 chapters in total, and today I read 5 consecutive chapters and they are still talking about fighting guerrillas. It seems that the plot in the back frame will not be too complicated, because I feel that the author's ink is not enough, and I have to add water to change the number of words.

The writing is also great! ! ! Strong support

Come on, come on, come on, come on, it's not enough

I have tried my best to vote monthly