Ling Tianzhi

The author's two books are both good in conception and writing. At least above average level at the starting point. The only problem is that the rhythm is not very good. The protagonists of both books have powerful golden fingers from the beginning and can kill monsters at many levels early on. The protagonist is always calm and confident. The author is very good at writing about victory, but not good at writing about failure. This is the author's biggest problem! There is no sweetness without bitterness, no peak without pitfalls, and no reversal without danger. The protagonist is always calm and confident. But a protagonist who is too perfect will never be as lovable as someone with some flaws. I hope the author's next book will be better.

I really like Xiao Hei's book. Because of Baboon's introduction, I have been reading the previous one for a long time. For a long-time reader, there is almost nothing sadder than seeing this news in today's updated chapter. I feel very sorry, really, really sorry. If I were a wealthy person, I would be willing to give tens of millions of dollars to books that can bring me spiritual happiness. Unfortunately, I am not. All I can do is subscribe. I have no position to blame the author. I understand that the author is a full-time writer and has started a new book. My request is that if I really want to start a new book and have no time to pay attention to this one (of course I will definitely read and subscribe to the new book), can I not finish this one? What I mean is don't make hasty conclusions. Even if it's an annual update, Xiao Hei may not be able to prosper one day in the future. Then look back at this book? There is a long time to come, so please don't shut down all possibilities at once, but let readers leave some thoughts. The stories and plots in the book are blank slates and fresh in the readers' minds, and they are finished as soon as they are written. So I hope that if Xiao Hei is going to start a new book, he won't make a hasty conclusion here, and just follow the original plan. It doesn't matter if he takes his time. Another thing I want to add is that I was lazy before and I should have said it earlier. Xiao Hei cares too much about the dissatisfaction of readers. For example, the chapters in the previous book where Little Freeman was the lord were said to have received a lot of bad reviews. Xiao Hei always came out to explain this and that, and there was really no need to change the writing method for the readers. Readers who think there is no problem there will not come forward to speak out. Moreover, the online literary world is quite impetuous now. Many of these readers are spoiled by the author. Just follow your original intention. Stay in a good mood.

Damn, can't you change Chapter 5? I have mentioned it several times. When I read Chapter 5 several times, I saw that the typos had not been corrected and I was not in the mood to read on. Don't you accept this little suggestion?