The Legend of Qin: Astral Force Across the World

I don't understand what's wrong with the current author? Why write a novel with an ancient background? Just don't speak in the way ancient people speak. Instead, you have to add some modern vocabulary and Internet memes. The beginning of the article is about Brother Zheng. What is this?

Author, when you write about Qin, you should also look at the timeline and settings. Hu's mother is obviously a Hu girl outside the Great Wall, and she has a far-fetched relationship with Mrs. Mingzhu.

I always say that if it was just a succubus, I wouldn't say anything, but does he have to be so disgusting? To have the Chao Banshee be Ying Zheng's concubine and give birth to Hu Hai is such a defiant operation. It can be said that there are many other Qin Shitong humanities that do not accept the Chao Banshee, but they are not as disgusting as him! In the end, there's no way Hu Hai's mother is a trendy banshee. To be honest, I don't understand

After so many years, I feel that the writing style has not changed much. It is still at the same level as when I was writing villains. You must know that almost ten years have passed since you became a villain, and you can still maintain such a stable writing level. You are also a talent🙄

Author, how did you do it? Except for the name being related to the Qin Dynasty, the characters and the situation of the Seven Kingdoms have no connection at all, and there is no plot at all. What kind of magical plot is Yin Yang Family F4 able to follow the protagonist and have an affair honestly?

What can I say, everything is afraid of comparison. During the Yingzheng period, Qin, Qi, Chu, Zhao, Han, Yan, and Wei were countries. To put it bluntly, Qin was still decent. If you don't surrender to Qin, where will you go? If you don't surrender to Qin, assuming you have that fate, can you survive for decades to win the government, and then rebel against Liu Bang and become a king with a different surname? As long as the protagonist is seeking profit and status, it doesn't matter if he licks Yingzheng. But the protagonist must not refill the Qin Dynasty. Whoever likes to do such a thankless thing can do it.

Aren't you planning to lick Ying Zheng again? It's really disgusting. Moreover, this Ying Zheng is also a time traveler, isn't he afraid of killing you first?

A group of Taoist bosses got into a fight over taking a storyteller kid from a restaurant as an apprentice 😰. Just because I copied an ancient novel, I was impressed... In the author's eyes, Taoists are all charlatans, right? I advise the author not to go to those Taoist temples that have thousands of years of heritage when traveling, otherwise you will be kicked out

Bad review of No Tide Banshee 🔨, Hu Hai cannot be the child of Lady Mingzhu. Although Qin Shi Mingyue did not say it clearly, Hu Hai is definitely related to Hu Ji next to Tou Man, because the eyes of the two are the same and very special. Hu Hai's eyes feel like they are inherited from his mother.

I can't stand what the author thinks of letting a trendy succubus give birth to someone else's child.