The Legend of Qin: Astral Force Across the World

I don't understand what's wrong with authors these days? Why do they write stories set in ancient times, and instead of speaking like people from ancient times, they have to add modern vocabulary and internet slang? This one starts by calling someone "Brother Zheng" all the time, what's the point of that?

Author, you should at least consider the timeline and setting when writing Qin's Time. Hu's mother is clearly a woman from the northern frontier, and has absolutely no relation to Lady Mingzhu.

I wouldn't say anything if it were just a simple case of not accepting Chao Nuyao, but did it have to be this disgusting? Making Chao Nuyao a concubine of Ying Zheng and giving birth to Huhai is such an outrageous move! Many other Qin's Moon fanfictions also don't accept Chao Nuyao, but none are as disgusting as this! And in the end, Huhai's mother couldn't possibly be Chao Nuyao. Honestly, I really don't understand.

All these years have passed, and your writing style seems unchanged, still at the level you were when you wrote about villains. Keep in mind, almost ten years have passed since you wrote about villains, and to maintain such a stable writing level is truly remarkable. 🙄

Author, how did you manage to do this? Aside from the names being related to Qin's Moon, the characters' personalities have absolutely no connection to the Seven Kingdoms' situation, and none of the expected plot points are present. What kind of magical plot is it that the Yin Yang School F4 can just obediently follow the protagonist and engage in ambiguous relationships?

Well, the worst thing is to compare it to the Qin Dynasty. Of the states like Qin, Qi, Chu, Zhao, Han, Yan, and Wei, frankly, only Qin was decent. If you didn't ally with Qin, where else could you go? Even assuming you had the luck to outlive Qin for decades, then join Liu Bang in a rebellion and become a king of a different surname, it's fine as long as the protagonist is currying favor with Qin…

Are you trying to lick Ying Zheng's boots again? I'm sick of seeing it. And this Ying Zheng is also a time traveler. Aren't you afraid he'll destroy you first?

A group of Taoist masters got into a fight over taking a storyteller from a tavern as their apprentice 😰. Just because he plagiarized a prehistoric novel, they're suddenly so impressed… Does the author think all Taoists are just charlatans? I advise the author not to visit those Taoist temples with a thousand-year history when traveling; you'll get kicked out if you don't recognize them.

I don't accept negative reviews from Chao Nu Yao 🔨. Hu Hai couldn't possibly be Lady Mingzhu's child. Although it's not explicitly stated in Qin's Moon, Hu Hai is definitely related to the Hu Ji next to Touman because their eyes are the same and very distinctive. Hu Hai's eyes seem to be inherited from his mother.

I can't stand by and watch the author of this story who made the "Trendy Woman" have a child and then had someone else have one.