Journeying Across the Heavens from the Huashan Sword Sect

You've been writing books for ten years and you're still at this level, so you'd better treat this as a side job.

What the hell are the first three or four chapters about? Does anyone still like to see this kind of whole family being killed? Just start by saying that you have already learned the art from a teacher, right?

Dude, you are Zhu Tianwen. The beginning of the writing is too bad (Zhu Tianwen's story of traveling through you in each world is too inappropriate). The key point is that you have not explained clearly what you need to do in this world after traveling through time (such as how much plot destruction, becoming the world's number one force value, etc.) Before you can continue to travel to the next world. Such as the medium, such as a jade pendant. Bead. System or something And the beginning is too stupid. Just say that both parents died and were saved and became a disciple. You used five cards. You are too clever. And the parents lighting a fire is purely intellectual. A normal person should know that he cannot light a fire in this situation, right? ? ? You are forcibly creating conflict. This way of writing was 20 years ago. It is too outdated. Man, just find a class. It doesn't matter if you work part-time. If you want to work full-time and have good grades, you must change something. You don't change and you say your grades are not good. With your beginning, many people may have jumped right in after seeing your first few chapters.

This conversation is so weird that it took more than 40 years to produce.

This makes me feel like I'm reading an Internet article from 2008

Protagonist

I specially set a chapter to talk about it. It's so miserable at the beginning and so holy at the end. It's really a good technique.

The writing is really good and the author is very skilled I couldn't put it down during the Double Dragon part of the Tang Dynasty As a hypertensive patient, I stayed up late It's really good to read

I read two chapters and planned to withdraw, then I read the comments. I decided to continue watching.

Is there Huang Rong?😜