At Thirty, I Am Walking in the World

There is no problem with the three views. But what you wrote only has three views. Can't read any more.

The introduction should be written like this: no confusion at twenty, only thirty, starting at eight hundred, no loss at two thousand. . →_→

Qidian Orphanage is there for a reason

The writing is obviously good, but the various settings and the protagonist's behavior are written in such a way that it is a bit poisonous to leave all the main characters to others at the beginning.

World War Z is the most vicious movie, and Israel (the Jews) whitewashed the open-air prisons that besieged Palestine from the movie! That wall to keep out zombies is now the Palestinian Separation Wall!

10 Million to treat cerebral hemorrhage. OK OK. Goodbye

Come on, the vaccine... Don't my big flower grower have the ability to make it? It also depends on the protagonist to steal

After watching Jurassic, I no longer want to watch it. The author's writing style has some details and is very well controlled, but the reality is so poorly handled that I don't have any desire to continue reading.

The real world is poorly described. I can't read it at all.

The real-life plot is too stiff and the writing is too stiff. Is Meow Meow particularly beautiful? The little girl is cute, right? In addition, she suddenly shows off her wealth later, beats up bodyguards, buys a car, hires bodyguards, goes to Long's house to knock on the door, and Long's house even takes out a hidden gun. This series of plots makes people feel like it was written by another person. The first part is good, but the following plot is like a pure noob.

The side quests in the second world are a joke. Everyone knows the characteristics of the virus, so Jingran does not send the information back. Instead, he waits for his opponent to develop a vaccine for the virus and then grabs the vaccine before sending the vaccine home. Are all the country's scientific researchers dead, or are they just doing nothing?

The t800 can still feel the murderous aura 🙂 so fantasy

Children love each other every day, there must be something wrong with them!

The knife used to cut zombies is not poisonous.

A phone call will do the trick. There are no research laboratories in other countries. No sick people

He actually told his wife about the Lord God Pig God? What do you think? Chapter 2: One-person hard steel army. Let's not talk nonsense. You can completely escape from the deputy minister.

The plot of the protagonist stealing the vaccine could be written in a hundred chapters. You only need five or six chapters to finish it. The progress is too fast.

If your rank is too high, you will be lost if you enter.

It was good, but forcibly stealing the vaccine is really poisonous... Why not design a mission about the origin of the zombie virus conspiracy? Someone in the top management is a villain or something. Isn't this much more normal?

The plot of the main world is a mess

With so many options to increase your strength, you choose the Blade Warrior physique? Being half human, half vampire?

The pressure imposed by this master god is too high, and it looks like he wants his employees to die. And readers all know that the protagonist will definitely win in the future. That arena is really poorly designed, you can just skip it

This novel made me feel twenty years younger. I really didn't expect that in 2024, there would still be people writing this kind of thing