I Am Getting Achievements in Rules and Ghost Talk

Kneel down and endure the humiliation 🙂 Who is disgusting 🙂 Where did the foreigner come from when he wrote a novel about riding a horse and kneeling down, 🐶 He didn't even read it,

There is poison in the front and water in the back. The plot progress is as slow as constipation. If you are following the update, congratulations. You may even forget the name of the protagonist.

Everyone, please read the new book. Thank you all.

Is the author in-house or direct? Does internal investment require an outline?

Author, if this book is deleted and the next one is deleted, there are several serious problems. One, 39-47, where did the protagonist go? The supporting role is not important, the protagonist should be highlighted Second, the protagonist is too passive, what should be done proactively, what should be obtained in the end, satisfaction and a sense of gain. Three, can the protagonist be remembered so far? What are the characteristics, high IQ to break the situation, strength? Background? Nothing Four, the description of conflict is too stupid, it would be better not to write conflict Five, what is the use of golden fingers? At present, a copy is almost finished and nothing has been written. It is not recommended.

The more I read, the more confused I became. There were weird rules and achievement systems in the front, but once I got to the second part, they were all gone. It was so long to write.