I Use Folk Games to Become a God

Author, your writing style is not as good as that of the game console author. Don't copy blindly. The first thing you need to know is that in addition to what readers want to read, there are also things that readers should never read! ! ! The author of Game Console is already on his fourth book, and compared to ordinary people, he should have certain attainments and understanding in the field of classical mythology before writing a book. Therefore, you cannot compare with his writing skills and skills. However, his first, second and third early books have problems with plot rhythm, super stream of consciousness in the middle and later stages, and too much space to introduce non-plot content. He has experienced it, so you should not step on these pitfalls. Basically you can pass. What you need to prioritize now is that there are no problems with characterization, writing, and plot rhythm, and that you should expand yourself by reading more.

(My folk game console) He started as a corpse stitcher They all entered the game The writing was okay But the fighting and fighting techniques were too bland Basically there were not many fighting and fighting scenes I don't know what your book will be like

Apart from the Qidian official and the author, I am the first post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good friend.

The writing is good, the writing is imaginative, and the protagonist has to find ways to learn other things besides making incense. He doesn't want to think of other ways after being rejected once. In the game world, the protagonist can spend money, beg people, or use his knowledge in exchange.

This is what I mean when I suffer a disaster

Does anyone really call a cousin a cousin?

Only two updates will be released?

This type, this type of opening, seems to be gradually increasing in number. The author has some unique small innovations of his own, and the integration of various elements is okay. There are no major flaws so far. The ability to describe the story is passable, and overall it is okay.

I've almost finished reading it, and I feel pretty good about it.

It can be regarded as a replacement for the game console. There are only 2 chapters every day on the game console, and it is a replacement here. ✒️Writing: I just hope the author's writing and character can be strengthened.

Author, your story has a good sense of immersion, but the pace is too slow.