Taboo of Immortality: Starting with Three Corpses and Five Ghosts

How can I put it, the realm is that of a fairy and a weird one, but the performance in the text seems to be martial arts plus fantasy, the plot seems to be a spy investigation, it is too tight, the characters are a bit messy, the sense of fragmentation is too strong, and the protagonist is also strange. I feel like the author should get an outline and sort it out. I really like the setting.

The author may not explain clearly, resulting in unclear reading of the main line, or confusion about why the main line suddenly changes, resulting in a confusing feeling when reading. This book was intended to be more supernatural at the beginning. The Three Corpse Insects were only used as a lead to push the protagonist to investigate and step into the fog. Therefore, the focus slowly transitioned from the Three Corpse Insects - Yinfa evil ways - the secrets of the sect. Of course, there is a relatively strong push in this process: The protagonist has not traveled through time and worshiped the evil sect for a long time. The purpose is always to gain a foothold in the world of immortality. He has no sense of belonging to either the Daoyan Sect or the Sanqing Sect. Performing the mission as an undercover agent of the Daoyan Sect is for the sake of the Daoyan Sect's pie, which will occupy half of the Sanqing Sect's resources in the future. As a low-level monk, you have to beware of the Daoyan Sect's empty promises, so after reporting the progress to your senior brother Xuan Qing, and realizing that Xuan Qing is trying to hide something, you must find out what is going on. If you are cheated, it will be too late to regret it. There is also feedback from readers that the protagonist is an undercover agent. Why is he not like most undercover agents, who will be discovered by the gang boss and forced by the police chief... This author has actually considered that this type of undercover agent is actually relatively ancient. , And later like some popular jokes on the Internet: Three years later, and three years later, the undercover agents became the boss; another example is "The Disciple"... In short, there are some successful undercover agents, and the focus or emphasis on characterization does not lie in the fact that the protagonist is always under duress. But the male protagonist in The Disciple is about to take over the role of the black actor, and the starting point is still too high. So in the initial setting, the protagonist successfully went undercover in the Sanqing Sect, but has not yet reached the level of taking over as the leader. Otherwise, he does not know everything about the internal affairs of the Sanqing Sect, which is really unreasonable.