Broken! I Have Become the Substitute of the Ancient God

A Western fantasy novel with a mysterious world view. Let's talk about the shortcomings first First, the rhythm of the writing is very strange. Various scenes in the pub, base, and school are transferred like the wind, but none of them leave a deep impression on people. The various plots of cases, drinking, and recruitment are taken turns but are not described in detail, giving it a sense of a running account. Second, the funny elements are a bit deliberate and inexplicable. One second, you are often immersed in the afterglow of the end of the case, and the next second, you will break into a piece of funny that is not very clever, neither embarrassing nor embarrassing, making the already too fast pace seem even more stretched. Third, there is a strong sense of separation between the plot and the background. Originally, the weird world after the acid rain and the short story before the protagonist and supporting characters felt quite serious, but then the description of the detachment, cases, etc. Was too childish, and it was completely unimaginable that this was what people in such a world view said and did. Fourth, there are too many "different pupils", and it is embarrassing to have different pupils come and go. In some places, there is no need to insert a novice-like description like "different pupils open". This is not how the sense of middle school is reflected. Advantages No system Summary, this is a novel that does not hide its faults (doesn't make any mistakes). I hope the author can make improvements.

I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist in this book?

I feel like I can be nourished, so don't let me nourish you to death (

The cover is exactly the same as that of Cataclysm Card King. After looking at it, I found that this book was published much later. The author can change the picture to avoid confusing readers and improve the uniqueness of the work.

The last sentence of the introduction seems to be an adaptation of Zhang Ailing's "But I can't overcome this little biting annoyance for a day. Life is like a gorgeous robe, covered with fleas."

What can I say? I can't tell the problem, but I just can't stand it.

7/10, I finished the walk and it felt pretty good. It's a pity that my current radio wave is not on this gram series. Because it is not on the radio wave, it is -3. I will add it to the bookshelf and wait until my taste changes to read it again.

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