I Am a Villain, Specializing in Revealing Npc's Trump Cards

I read the introduction and asked, does the life-size doll of a certain girl have many uses? Will there be feedback to the body when used?

After all, it's rough, so that's probably it for now.

The author is a migrant worker in a grassroots court. He has been very busy recently and has the provincial examination approaching, so he will put aside the novel for now. In fact, I have already written a detailed outline of five chapters. I will try to complete it this week before sending it out. It will be finished.

After looking at the first 10 or so pictures, I can see that there are no big mistakes, but there are still some minor problems. The author is very happy with the writing, and some places seem abrupt. The author of the paragraph can see it from his own perspective, but the reader finds it strange and fails to understand it immediately. The writing style is okay and the writing is fairly fluent. When you can't find any other books, you can take a look at this one. (Byd, I don't know if it's because I didn't pay attention or because the author didn't write about the world view. I don't know what it is when I see the lack of precision in the inconsistency. I hope the author can add some information about the world view in the post-chapter discussion)

After reading the first volume, it turns out that Ivan is very crucial. To be honest, the plot of the first volume is just average. The protagonist doesn't know why he wants to go to the depths. He doesn't feel like a god. The average boss and important characters are not introduced. It feels like a passerby. It's like you haven't watched it before. There is no real feeling at all.

I don't understand that the protagonist's vampire keeps killing vampires

The performance of this book is so poor that it has been cut by the author.

I'm a notorious prostitute, so I don't have a monthly ticket, so I'll give you a recommendation ticket.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ qaq, the author of Pujie also wanted to recommend it last time. Please read it more.

How should I put it? There is no main line, the meaning is a bit unclear, and the protagonist is a bit weak. It is recommended to reflect the panel and values.

There are some minor issues, but overall it's okay. I like the setting of the protagonist better. The worldview is okay, but some things are not explained clearly and not much is revealed. Maybe it's not time? In terms of plot, I haven't found any big highlights yet. I feel that it is mainly for the layout stage, and there are relatively few actual results. The author can write about the staged gains. There are some other things that I won't say much after seeing what others have said (personal opinions are for reference only) Finally... Does the author have a group?

I feel like the first volume lacks a bit of foreshadowing. The other clan leaders went from recovery to defeat too quickly, and their combat power levels are not obvious. It makes me feel that everyone except the miscellaneous fish can be beaten 50-50.

If nothing else goes wrong, this work should reach more than 10,000 orders after it is put on the shelves The world view is being built, a bit slow It is worth a look for old bookworms

The name of the book? I am considering changing the name of the contracted work. I still need to talk to the editor and change it after the year. The article is not on topic: Same as above, the author has been writing essays since he was a child and loves to go off topic. Well, at least revealing various secrets of NPCs and being a hated vampire is the main theme of this article. Blood-sucking problem: (Protagonist's mentality) I know that blood is good for vampires, hehe, but for various reasons, I don't want to suck it. Just like treating food you hate. Of course, if forced later, the protagonist will not hesitate to suck blood. I can't understand the first volume, it's too fast: Kowtow first, it is indeed my fault, I have tried my best to modify it without affecting the ending. The data in this volume affected the author's judgment, and he just wanted to end this chapter as soon as possible, so the plots related to important NPCs such as Tikov and the Mirror King were omitted, resulting in the character image not being established and the plot also seemed a bit abrupt. Questions about the first volume can be raised below in the future and I will reply. The positioning of the protagonist? Profit-oriented, attach importance to the little bat's ideas. The protagonist still has the outlook of a normal person and will not do anything too unscrupulous (probably?) The strength of the protagonist The protagonist does not have a combat-type profession. In his previous life, he was just a clerk (note-taker) in an office. Compared with himself, he might as well be called Little Bat. The following thoughts about the protagonist's combat power, in addition to shaking people, should be through the prop flow, using the player's advantage and golden fingers to collect a large number of unclean utensils, like Jin Shining in fate, relying on treasures to hit people... What are your feelings for your own family and the vampires? Without a trace of emotion, including sympathy. The family abandoned themselves (Secret Coffin), and because of the player's perspective, the vampires did not leave a good impression on the protagonist in the game.

It's rough, the setting is okay, if you're bored, you can take a look

After reading Chapter 5, the background of the protagonist turns out to be Man Bald.

What about the group? Why did you throw me out?