Don't Worry, the File Is Being Read.

It's a bit like the last book in the later period. Every character appears, but disappears very quickly. The protagonist is not sure, and it seems very watery. Author, you should change the outline. You can't use the routines of the previous book anymore. If you use a routine too much, it will lose interest. Next time, the protagonist may have more souls and more legions. There is no point in repeating it. And you reused the scope map of the previous book at the beginning, which limited the scope of your writing. Regular readers will have a rough idea of ​​what you are going to write.

As soon as boos appeared, everyone had already guessed the ending, but it was really embarrassing that you were still sensationalizing like crazy. The foreshadowing is very routine without any reversal.

No, brother, you have written so many books, most of them are eunuchs or unfinished. It stands to reason that you should learn some experience. The timeline book is very good. Why is it still like this?

I think the timeline written by the author is very good. It moved me to tears. It shows the author's skill. I hope the author can stick to it this time. Do you still remember the author of the following sentence?

Still an inner sentence! In the timeline, I have proven my strength by killing you with one sword. Write it well! The more updates you keep, the more people will become more and more confident! Don't be a eunuch! If I hadn't passed by today and looked around, I wouldn't have noticed that there are new books! (▼ Plate▼#)

After the second time as Li Tan. It's like pressing the acceleration button instantly. One time. Shenyi has become a younger brother. The big boss appears around Chapter 10. Then it will take a few chapters. The big boss was cleared. I feel like I'm not reading a novel. Instead, I'm reading the synopsis Tell the truth. The settings in the first 30 chapters are really good. Anything goes with the character. It's just that there are too many twists and turns around chapter 50 and are too sudden. It feels like there is no foreshadowing

The settings inside are so good, just put some of them in there

... The writing is okay, but the setting of the protagonist's multiple attempts to seize the body is quite awkward. It makes me feel like a pollution, a bit inhuman. I guess there is no female protagonist in the back. If there is, it will be very poisonous.

It felt okay at first, but it plummeted after Substitute Xia...

The protagonist's biggest wish at present is to pay 300,000 yuan to the daughter. Now that the Divine Legacy Team has memories of going back to the past, money shouldn't be a problem, right? You must know that many wishes are ultimately a lack of money. In my opinion, just randomly investigate a few people who are short of money, let the Divine Heritage Team control the killing of the protagonist, and then use the money to obtain the wish power. The news couldn't be suppressed any longer, so the Divine Legacy Team personally killed the reader. A city has a population of several million, right? At most half a month, at least hundreds of thousands of willing power. Why wasn't this done? Are there any restrictions that I don't see?

It's nothing if it's not finished, it's called breaking Jiji

I clicked in to watch the finale. Everyone is complaining about the bad ending. Is there anything you can say?

Just read it, step on it, and the free chapter will collapse.

The setting of this novel is very good. The writing is also good. All booked. No matter what. The author made the protagonist look like a fool. The protagonist is really unlikable 😭

The protagonist has no real character. When in danger, he is like a third grandson. He talks about reopening at every turn, but never realizes it. Every time he encounters something, he acts like a retarded person.

When I saw Chapter 8, I was confused by just one word! ! !

By the way, why did the Crown of Shadows fall? I kept raising it and it suddenly died...

Brother, please write whatever you want to write. The timeline is pretty good, but now it's eunuch. What's going on?

... Although, there is still a feeling of walking on the same old path.

Is the author still writing? It's better to settle it down. Don't let the next book be too unfinished or unfinished.

After (Timeline), I feel like the author is not in the mood

The timeline and the boss behind the scenes are really good Why don't you continue to write in this genre? It's so good Now you are a eunuch😡😡

It's a book about the timeline of gods, but it's a pity that the writing at the end was not satisfactory.

Raised to death😅

This is a short story. It's so short. I'm going to keep it up.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

{"NickName":"One strike, one strike","UserId":325123445} Boss! Have you determined when the new book will be released? Really looking forward to the boss's new book! 🥺🥺🥺

Why is this book so short of words? It's so boring?

I know that no one will follow a novel that doesn't have a fun start.

Why don't you write it? No! ! !