I Kidnapped the Timeline

I have read hundreds of chapters, so let me give you a brief review. The beholder has a different opinion and a wise man has wisdom. Generally speaking, the world view is very novel, it really has its own characteristics compared to the books of the same period, and it can arouse the readers' emotions to a certain extent, but the perception is quite contradictory. One is the human beings who are chosen by forces in various fields to play games. It is true that they have deliberately lost their intelligence. Everyone only knows how to endure hardships, and the public is always fooled, but it is understandable that the protagonist must save the world after all; the other one has weak leaders. In the domain alliance, wouldn't it be possible to support human beings and win-win cooperation with humans? There would be no choice to use kindness and power at the same time. However, it is understandable that after all, the protagonist must be smart and know how to unite with old fans, and the domain forces' IQ is biased; and from the hundreds of chapters I have read here, the significance of the existence of the Tongtian Road is not obvious. In general, although it does have a lot of flaws, the subject matter is novel and the imagination is wide open. It can be regarded as a novel that can be read.

(Full-length novels are not like short articles. You can use them in reverse order, as long as there is a clue to run through the whole text. Long novels themselves are easy to write loosely. It is usually necessary to highlight a subject, which is what we call the protagonist, to connect the whole text. Therefore, a single protagonist is usually continuously strengthened/emphasized as the core of the article to run through the whole text. Especially for modular articles composed of a large number of sub-stories, each story is like a bead, they are not a whole in themselves, so the beads become a necklace. The "line" becomes particularly important. For example, the most common "Infinite Flow" always revolves around a protagonist and is written from a subject's perspective, and the connection of each plot is very important, otherwise it will appear very scattered) This book starts well, and it is quite interesting in the early stages. The story slowly unfolds through the intersection of the daily line and the future line, and the interplay between the ease of daily life and the depression of reading emails in the future makes this book richer and more "three-dimensional". After being able to read the memories of each timeline in the middle period, the author gradually gave up on continuing the daily life. The main timeline passed by with almost no plot, and it was completely reduced to something that had to be mentioned to start the next plot. It lost its role of strengthening the core characters through daily life to connect the full text and adjust the emotion of the article. At this point, I have begun to write slowly. In the middle and later stages, the main body of the article was written as a "side story", and there was no need for the protagonist at all. The author said that it was to pave the way for the following article, but this kind of long description is actually not necessary at all. The summary style of reading the email before plus a little description is enough to make the supporting characters not monotonous. If you want to be more fleshed out, you can fully flesh them out through cooperation with the protagonist in the later stage. Writing five extra chapters in a large space in the main text has no meaning other than weakening the protagonist more and more, and judging from the subsequent plot, the large space here does not have any real use. At this time, we can tentatively think that the human race itself can be used as the protagonist/subject of the article to run through the entire article, but we must know that the human race itself is too big, it can only barely connect it, but it is difficult to make it compact. There is a reason why long novels usually choose a single protagonist instead of ethnic groups and beliefs as the core. The single protagonist itself has a strong sense of substitution, which not only makes the article closer, but also alleviates the fatigue caused by reading long novels to a certain extent. In the later stage, there is no plot, only a description of the historical background. And in order to slow down the development of the plot (it may also be that the writing cannot be controlled and is about to collapse), the only remaining protagonist/subject of the article at this time-the human race is directly weakened. Either there are not many miraculous artifacts all over the ground to grab (it may be that the author is too lazy to make up miracles, but this will make readers uncomfortable), or if you do grab them, they are just decorations and do not bring any development to the human race. You know, forcibly weakening the protagonist is a taboo in novels. Because readers will choose the protagonist of the article to take their place when reading, and it is inevitable to feel disgusted and disgusted when they are forcibly weakened. This is also the reason why Yan Yu Jiangnan already had a large number of loyal old fans, but when he wrote "Chen Yuan", he started to dissuade most readers. The article opens with a grandiose and compelling introduction, and people choose the protagonist to take their place, only to find themselves stabbed in the back. The only protagonist who appeared at the beginning of the article was killed when he was about to achieve his meritorious deeds and "hold his hand and grow old together" after going through many hardships. The person who killed him even had his wife pretend to be his identity and snatched his wife. Afterwards, he told you, "I didn't expect that, this is the real protagonist." Those who don't have a hobby or a weak mental capacity really can't eat this food. In the same way, although forcibly weakening the protagonist/subject of the article is not as strong, it is still the same. In the end, it even directly turned into a setting set to write about the background of the times. The human race was only used as an entry point and "camera" to write the setting set. Its own development and growth had no meaning. It was only "strengthened" when needed to write about the progress of the times. At this point, even the remaining protagonist/subject of the article is gone. This book is generally well written, but very scattered. Especially after giving up the main writing timeline, it seems a lot monotonous without daily adjustments. If you are following the update, you may not have a strong feeling because of the long delay. But if you finish reading it in one sitting, it is indeed a bit... Different people have different opinions. Everyone's opinions and ideas are different. I only represent my personal opinion. Maybe I will be a special case.

The author will lose interest if he deletes the post! Why can't everyone speak freely after paying money to watch? Isn't it just that in the past two months, the chapters have strayed from the theme and title of the book? If you don't review it carefully, you will delete the post! I won't say any more unpleasant words, they are stuck in my throat!

When I read 413, old fans joined the gang, what I read was not Feng Qi's love and righteousness, but the pity of Wei Wei and other fellow travelers, who were lonely and hidden in the timelines. In order to give the human race a chance to avoid being destroyed, the Scarlet colleagues knew that Star City would be destroyed, so they tried their best to endure loneliness and create opportunities for the protagonist to feedback to the main timeline. And what about the Lord of the Mists? He is alive and well fifteen hundred years later. When he is alive, that is his main timeline. Why would he always listen to you and help you? Just a memory?

The author thinks of "group portraits" and "group portraits", but group portraits are also on "the same stage" and the various "actors" are related. In other words, it is called a group portrait when everyone performs a play together. For example, the protagonist passes by an ant nest and throws some sugar away - and then carefully describes how the ants move the sugar, and uses the sugar to write hundreds of pictures. Is this a group portrait? Apparently not. This is my review of another book, and it would not be an exaggeration to include it in this one. Water is the biggest feature of this book. I can only say that newcomers should be cautious. This water includes, but is not limited to, writing water. That is, the same content may be copied and pasted several times (just different chapters) The plot is watery, there is nothing to say, and that is it now. Wait

The villain, Lao Mi, is so charming. I think Lao Mi would definitely have been the protagonist if Brother Qi hadn't appeared. The old fan has a clear main line and goal at the beginning. In order to save the people, he will do whatever it takes to save the people. He has superior intelligence and plans for 1500 years. During this period, there are constant adventures. Finally, after 1500 years, he becomes the overlord of the party. Maybe he will actually become a pillar god in the longer future. So old fans are more like the protagonists of traditional fantasy novels. Looking forward to the follow-up story of the old fan and the chess brother, the author does not want to knife my old fan (sharpening the knife) 🥺🥺

I don't quite understand, but this book is quite well written. The author has made up for all the pitfalls he made before, his characterization and narrative skills are very good, and there are no poisonous points. Why is it not ranked high? Some books that I think have a lot of bad points actually have better results＼(`Δ')/. The villain in the latest chapter made me have high blood pressure and I was so angry that I couldn't sleep. I can only say that the description was so good. And there are quite a few chapters that can arouse readers' emotions. It also has a sense of epicness, daily warmth, etc. So why is it not popular🔥•᷄ࡇ•᷅{"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"The Book Famine Terminator"}{"TopicId":"776819114 126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}{"TopicId":"827154568705802240","TopicName":"I kidnapped the timeline"}

To be honest, although the writing is depressing, it inexplicably made my blood boil😆 especially the first time reading the memory of the sacrifice line! Using flashback techniques, Feng Qi's determination to save the world is vividly expressed! After all, no matter how many sacrifice lines are ahead, no matter how many times you die generously! That's not Feng Qi himself. Just like how great you are in the future, it has nothing to do with you now. No matter how many times Feng Qi died on the sacrifice line and Feng Qi in the future, two people cannot understand the will to die generously! Only when Feng Qi himself becomes the sacrifice line can the author's Feng Qi truly have a soul! I have to say that writing such a work requires considerable effort and effort!

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: The author is a person who is good at enriching the image and color of supporting characters. I didn't expect that this book is deeper. Lin Qi, Lu Yue, Sucker, Li Xingchen on the human side, and the King of Mist and Yin Ling on the alien side. It made me understand that there is no complete judgment of good and evil, it is all for the future of one's own race. Especially Miwu and Lin Qi. As one of the final bosses in multiple timelines, the King of Mist is decisive, ruthless and rational, and can give up anything in order to revive the race. However, after meeting Feng Qi, for the first time, such a big demon king who destroyed mankind put down his ideals and reason. This kind of brotherhood shocked me. I remembered that Feng Qi once said to Mi Wu: "What will you do if I want your life?", But the old fan only said: "I owe you a life to begin with, take it as you please." This kind of open-mindedness and emotion is shocking! And Lin Qi, at first he only took the initiative to approach Yin Ling (a foreigner) for the overall situation of Brother Qi, but gradually he was attracted by this girl, and finally had to give up this relationship for the sake of the righteousness of the human race. Watching Yin Ling die in his arms to save him, Cai Gou, Cai Gou, I can't beat you anymore. Two poor people who were responsible for the fate of each race met together and had the only time of happiness and freedom. This love is so precious. Although it can only be given up for the sake of justice, it will always be the most beautiful memory of the two of them.

In fact, I think it is more appropriate for the flesh and blood sacrifice to be secretly sold in Destiny City. It will spread faster and it can cut leeks repeatedly to provide resources for the development of the human race. Of course, the premise is that the cracked version is spread.

A very potential worldview setting, especially the process of obtaining the truth by searching history in the future is very attractive. However, after the protagonist can read his own memory in the later period, the author spends a lot of ink describing the sacrifice of the protagonist in the current timeline. I personally feel that this part of the content is rarely "refreshing", and this part of the content is getting longer and longer every time.

Feng Qi is really determined and strong... In every timeline, he can persevere to the end for the future of mankind, even to the death. If it were me, I might just take my merits and wait to die...! After all, Feng Qi in other timelines is really dead when he dies, and there is no such thing as merged memory. For the Fengqi players who no longer travel through time, this mortal future is too heavy. Speaking of which, can the protagonist save some scientific research information that can be used by the Scarlet Academy of Science and not publish it? If he has saved enough (for example, if he travels ten times and remembers a little bit each time that is useful), he can join Scarlet, so that he will not be marginalized by Scarlet because he cannot produce scientific research results after joining.

Slow updates are a flaw! ! ! After raising it for a long time, I came back and saw that there are still so many chapters! Come on, author!

Open the sacrifice line a. After 1000 years, purchase a large amount of the knowledge accumulated by each race in the later period. At the sacrifice line b, sell it back in the early stage to form compound profits. Q: Will it be expensive to buy knowledge? A: Take the neutral Thunder tribe as an example. The knowledge of the Thunder tribe after 1500 years is indeed very expensive, but the knowledge after 1000 years is not expensive. A: No. It can only be sold to neutral races that are not bordering each other and have been inspected for 1500 years . Q: Will it be thankless and just a one-time transaction? A: It's not a one-time sale. It can be sold in batches. In the year of dawn, the knowledge of the Thunder tribe will be sold for 100 years . In the year of dawn, the knowledge of the Thunder tribe for 200 years will be sold (taking into account the development of the Thunder tribe itself) It can also be used to control the development of the Thunder tribe and form dependence on the human race . Q: Do all races value knowledge more than anything else, lest you find a weakness? All races do not sell knowledge A: No. Refer to the points mentioned by the author of this book. First of all, Destiny City is a du city. People here lose money every day. Even miracles will be sold in a hurry, and there are many fake miracles. You can see the patriarch selling his clan members on the corridors . Based on the background, we can find those gamblers who lost their money after 1500 and buy their expired knowledge at a high price. They will definitely sell it. Q: Will the gambler who can sell knowledge only exist after 1500 years? Isn't there already in the main timeline? A: Of course, there are some. At this time, you need to buy selectively. The easiest ones to start with are the races that are very rich in the main timeline and end up in ruins .

Here comes another golden alliance! Author, please don't disappoint the boss. Please read more 😏

Regarding these recent chapters, my overall reading experience was okay. I didn't want to say much at first, but I also didn't want the author to receive too much negative feedback, so I came to cheer him up. Being able to dare to try different ways and write something different, I think it must have been carefully considered. Judging from the results, it is worth encouraging. As for the "dispersion" or "digression" that some people feel, I think on the one hand it is a common problem when reading serial novels; On the other hand, in these group portrait scenes, especially in the later stages, the presence of the protagonist (and even several other familiar supporting characters) is indeed a bit too weak (so weak that it gives a sense of déjà vu). My personal acceptance of this is okay, but I think it may not be particularly comfortable for some readers who pursue a stronger sense of immersion in the protagonist. In the past few hundred years, there should be a lot of content that can be written about the protagonist, old fans and others that can be used to intersperse and reconcile. These can appropriately relieve a certain "fatigue" of readers. At the same time, I feel that in the later stages of writing these stories, it is inevitable that they will feel a bit monotonous or routine. Maybe something different? I don't know what I want to see... This "sense of change" may be a stronger change in perspective - such as writing about the life-long enemy of a certain human race god of war, that is, the life of a foreign race. In this way, the space can be reduced and the perspective can be supplemented. It can also be the process of the fall of an ordinary person, it can be the story of a girl growing up to be a mother, it can be an ordinary life, or it can be mediocre. (This is the majority, but it feels difficult to write) At the same time, from the perspective of the first few people, I seem to be less able to glimpse changes in the overall situation, or a sense of historical weight (am I asking too much, cough cough). Of course, the most important thing is the connection between these branch lines and the main line. If there are some surprises that can be "realized" immediately, I believe the reader's experience will be better. It was written casually before going to bed. It is quite informal, so I just read it casually without taking it seriously. Anyway, come on!

Suddenly it occurred to me that if the protagonist leveled up to the point where he could kill all the monsters in the future, would there be no more monsters?

Squeezing a generation, paving the way for future generations, and bearing infamy for several generations I really think Ji He deserves a character card. After all, he has merits and demerits, but according to future generations,

Don't read this book, this author is just out of context🐶, return my Xiaoyou😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The idea is very good. I have one suggestion. The author always adds a lot of memories, settings, conjectures, and introductions at every moment. For example, when I saw the battle line to the future city recently, it was just one battle. I added a lot of supplementary notes, explanations, conjectures, and introductions to character memories. This kind of writing greatly affects the reader's sense of rhythm in reading the book. Often there is no progress in the plot at all after reading a chapter, which greatly affects the reading experience. When I first read more than 100 chapters of this book, I wanted to order all of it, but the more I read these chapters recently, the less I wanted to read them. I hope the author can optimize the writing style.

Feelings I found this book from the rankings. I ordered it for the first time when I saw it was on the shelves and then pirated it and came back to catch up on the latest chapter. I have been following it for about a year. From the surprise at the beginning to the exhaustion in the middle, it feels very strange There is a volume about group portraits in the middle, which I feel is quite good but it is a pity not to write it later. Some people say why write something like this if you don't write about the protagonist. I feel that this kind of group portrait enriches the image of the protagonist The idea of ​​the timeline is very innovative but the author The control is not very good, giving people a feeling of stacking of important events in the timeline, without writing the characteristics of each timeline and the characteristics of the new characters The author later wrote a volume that can be made with new characters, new twists and new events. The whole book is divided into 15 volumes and 1600 chapters. Because each inheritance is a new beginning, many differences can be written. Old characters can be downplayed and unimportant timeline settings can be cancelled. The compact arrangement is the audience point of online literature. Timeline This book is very good in the early stage, but tired in the middle stage, and has a hasty ending in the later stage. Overall, it is 6 points

I have read Chapter 307 and saw an important bug When humans send all their high-end combat power to the front line, so many fish can still leak into the net. And from Tianshu's experience, we can see that human combat power is seriously insufficient and consumes a lot of money. 1. Human combat power is not enough to fully confront the domain, but it can defend multiple roads to the sky at the same time, and even one team can replace the elite team of the domain clan, which shows that self-protection is more than enough. 2. There will also be internal friction between domains 3. The domains are preparing to fight against natural disasters, but humans are using their own combat power to consume the strength of the domains The best decision is to shrink the defense line and leave a part of the area to let the domain creatures consume internally. Humanity has great potential for development and high-end combat power. The only thing missing is technology. As long as they are monolithic and the fishing nets are tightened to prevent fish from leaking out, the situation will be like that of the Qin Dynasty and the Six Kingdoms. The difference is that there are natural disasters on their heads and there are countless races in the domain. They all have different ideas for the survival of their own race. For survival, they will not directly start a large-scale war with humans. At this time, under the protection of high-end combat power, human beings can develop with peace of mind and snowball. ★The key point is that this bug can be fixed, that is, the high-end decision-making level of human beings has been infiltrated by the A clan (single or multiple clans). Tongtian Road is a pit dug for the strength of humans and other fields. Sending high-end human combat forces to Tongtian Road is a clever move to consume the power of humans and other fields in one fell swoop.

Can you please stop worrying about your inconsequential role? I've given all my monthly votes for An An An to follow the main line. Who would want to read this if I haven't had any nutrition for so long?

Finished spreading flowers! ! I have finished chasing it after so long, but I still feel a little unsatisfied. How can I put it, the timeline left a lot of impressions on me, Feng Qi, old fans, Mu Qing... It's really great! Very touching! I don't know how many cold and lifeless nights or one sunny afternoon I was completely moved by each character. Give me back my tears! ! (Clap on the table. JPG) In the end, this book really left me with a lot of good times. I hope that book friends who will read this book in the future can be patient and read it, and you will not be disappointed (I just feel that it is a bit stretched in the later period, but it is okay). The shaping of each character is excellent, at least in my opinion, it is first-class (Wang's affirmation. JPG)! ! That's all. I hope Zhanzhan will work hard and code quickly. I hope your next book will be better, come on!

Unexpected harvest

The concept of "time cycle" is not unfamiliar to the public. The philosopher Nietzsche once mentioned the theory of eternal recurrence. In the movie "Miss Peregrine's Castle", in order to avoid the man-eating monster, he always only lives on the same day. In this book, it is an alternative time loop. The protagonist lives in the past and tries to discover the truth of the future through time simulations. Of course, he has to go through seemingly useless time loops again and again, but what if? Aren't we also looking for a 'just in case' when we live?

The timing of the Dawn Army's rebellion was unclear, and the explanation of the later setting gave me a "left and right brain fight", causing it to be in the 21st century at one time and the 22nd century at the other. 😵 I think the time frame of the Dawn Army rebellion led by Mu Qing and Mu Yao should be within the 21st century 40s or 50s. However, in the later stage, when I looked back and saw the protagonist saying to Mu Yao for the second time: "I have been waiting for you for 113 years," I felt something was wrong. Then I went back and looked at the early settings, which burned my CPU. Mu Yao's escape from trouble actually happened 113 years in the future, that is, within the twenty-second century. This means that Mu Yao's contact with Mu Qing and the subsequent Dawn Army rebellion led by the two of them can only occur in the 22nd century. The problem is that the early plot told me that "shortly" after the protagonist's untimely death (in the 21st century), Mu Qing and Mu Yao led the Dawn Army to rebel. Also, the birth of Bai Tong (Mu Qing's clone) depends on the transplantation of scarlet rune crystals in Mu Qing's body after her death. This means that unless Mu Qing dies, Bai Tong cannot be born. However, in the later plot, Mu Qing was not killed by history (death in battle), and Bai Tong failed to appear (regardless of whether the protagonist solved the problem of the Silver Moon clan). This is completely disconnected from the cause and effect chain of "Mu Qing died in battle - Bai Tong was born" in the early stage. In addition, there are also logical loopholes in the plot related to Mu Yao. The protagonist has obviously restarted the timeline and obtained some of Mu Yao's memories, but failed to convey this information to Mu Yao who visited Bai Tong in the future through Wei Wei after the restart, so as to facilitate an earlier reveal of the truth. However, the author felt "no" and simply denied this possibility. After the protagonist asked Wei Wei to make a tentative inquiry (without using memory), he hastily shelved the setting. It was not until later that the protagonist waited for 113 years and was in his twilight years before he could use this part of his memory to convince Mu Yao. In addition, the early plot showed that Mu Yao had visited Bai Tong at least before the invasion of the Silver Moon tribe in 2076, but later it was said that she did not escape and return to the human world until 2136, which is difficult to justify.

I've read dozens of chapters, it's pretty good. I'll continue reading when I have time after get off work.

In the office, Feng Qi was sitting in front of the computer and processing documents carefully. He didn't notice that the door that was originally closed opened a gap, and a head with purple hair and purple eyes stuck in. He stared at Feng Qi closely, the expression on his face seemed a little shy. After a while, Feng Qi finally felt a little uncomfortable. He raised his head and saw the Lord of Mist at the door. "Old fan? Why are you here." The Lord of Mist stood at the door hesitating, and walked to Feng Qi tangledly: "I have something to tell you." Feng Qi looked at the Lord of Mist in front of him, always feeling that today's old fan was very strange, but old fans never act like this. The Lord of Mist took a deep breath: "Let's go get the certificate." After saying this, the Lord of Mist lowered his head. Feng Qi saw the old fan's face flushed, and his mind went blank. The Lord of the Mist waited for a while but did not hear Feng Qi's reply. He slowly raised his head and saw Feng Qi's calm eyes and thought, "Sure enough." After receiving no reply, Old Master turned around and prepared to leave, "Wait a minute, what certificate do you want to get?" "Good brother certificate."

Fengqi