The Road to Immortality: Starting from the Talisman Master

If you want to take risks, you will end up selling dog meat over someone else's head. It's too divisive to say that you are serious but not so 😅

Imitation is imitation. It is much different from the one in the fast food restaurant. I will practice more and read a few more books before writing. The four different things I wrote are quite speechless 🙄

Is rebirth the effect of elixirs? ? ? Are you sure there won't be a bug? ? ? Nonsense! ! !

The consumption of combat mana is extremely unreasonable. There is a source of spiritual energy that consumes 70% of the mana at once... Use your brain. The meridians of the body are outputted like this at will. It is not broken... Think about what it would be like if the whole country's army squeezes a highway... The battle is particularly boring. There are too many cross-borders... Millions of tanks with thick defenses. A thousand-yuan armor-piercing rocket launcher can solve the problem. Don't engage in five-element restraint. Electric shock, corona, electric anesthesia, water kerato... It requires IQ, but the IQ is not high, and the plot is unreasonable. I don't understand why cross-border combat forces are always airborne. The protagonist is smart, but he is not stupid! Mortals are excellent because they are more reasonable and have many tricks. The protagonist's skills are top-notch but actually... They are just upstream. Their fights are exciting, they have many tricks and use less poison...

Come on, it's very well written. I like to read it. I want to read more, but it's not enough.

They are all copied from evergreen stories. It stands to reason that the young ones are better than the old ones But the logic does not make sense and the plot is blunt. Alas

I've also read everyone's questions, and I'll pay more attention to them in the future. I don't have much experience with the first book, so I hope you can give me more advice.

Well written and worth reading. I hope the author will update more every day

Too many other people describe it from the first point of view, especially the two chapters of the sneak attack and the killing part. I feel that after waiting for two chapters in one day, the protagonist does not even appear, and the skills and other things are forgotten. I still don't realize that there are some wrong words in the previous chapters. I have been reading these two chapters for a long time. I am inexplicably tired and time-consuming. I hope the author can correct the writing. The psychological description under the main line of the story should not always be contradictory. It is not about word count, but personal writing habits. I understand it unconsciously, but I hope the author can use more condensed language. I like the story very much, please support the author.

The writing is okay. Come on, please write more.

There was a slight uproar, but the traces of imitation were too heavy.

In what era did trash literature begin?

The writing is good, but is it too much to make the protagonist cheat at any time?

Suddenly available? Why not update more?