Perfect World: Lord of Halo

I think the writing is quite good, the writing style is okay, and the most important thing is that Golden Finger has new ideas. I particularly hate systematic articles. I don't understand why so many people like to read systematic articles.

I recommend skipping the part about Ishimura because it feels like you're being poisoned. It feels like this book currently uses the protagonist to set off Shi Hao. It would be more convenient to just give the protagonist to Shi Hao. A common problem in perfect fanfiction. It was written and written in the end.

The halo talent is said to be a skill to cover up. This brain circuit is really unbelievable. Look at the original Shi Hao who was robbed of the skill by a bunch of big guys, but no one wanted the Supreme Bone. Only those without talent need it, but are you afraid of those without talent? It is of no use if those high-level people rob you of your talent. At most, they will steal it for the younger generation. It is really not like that. Others have a lot of first-generation bones in their own families. But you said that your technique can be used by everyone. Who can you rob if you don't want to rob it? You are really speechless. With such a brain circuit, even if Chongtong is so defiant, people all over the world will not come around to rob it. However, Shi Hao took one of the Ten Fierce Techniques and everyone came to rob it.

I think even if you are writing fan fiction, you should respect the original work😄. If you have read the original work and then look at the emotional lines in the fan fiction, you will feel very uncomfortable. The heroine can accept things that have nothing to do with No. 10. If you accept them randomly, I think it will be a bit difficult!

Yue'e is really a failure. Even the female God of War should be better. Yue'e is an ordinary girl and she becomes the heroine inexplicably just because she is pretty for free. Which female cultivator doesn't become more and more beautiful? This is a role that holds the protagonist back.

I really don't understand why the author wanted to write the character Yue'e. Is there any significance? Is it to highlight the outstanding qualities of the protagonist? And I remember you said there are three heroines, is she one? If you think about it, since she has no strength, she should be accompanied by a little bit like this, and like each other a little bit. What does it mean when you write like this?

6 Characters and 4 female protagonists. As a normal human being, I really don't have the desire to click in and watch 😒 Can Shen Nong tell me?

It's not interesting, the original work is just a lot of little yellow stuff.

At the beginning, there was a person named Shi Yunying, saying that the protagonist was worthy of being his child, and then it was Jiang Yun, and Jiang Li again, and what, your father's surname is Shi, your surname is Jiang, and in the barbaric era, give me the word "instructor", it's too ridiculous.

I want to see Yun Xi Yue Chan, but I have no interest in this Yue Chan😅

The protagonist is really a loser. He only needs talent but no talent. The author is still desperate to level up.

Just don't create a harem for me. I'm not here to see the harem

Since the double undercover, there is no perfect fanfic

As for women, the writing is disgusting and pedantic. One second she is a pervert, and the next she is said to be mentally strong and in sage mode.

The women the author writes about are all failures, but later on he really becomes attracted to a woman when he sees one.

He also recruits female protagonists randomly, even if his cultivation is not enough, why do he always want women? Shi Hao reluctantly married Yun Xi only when he was at his peak, and the Immortal King's giant reunited with Huo Ling'er, but it was a passing incident.

During dungeon time, the protagonist's senior brothers and sisters are of no use at all. They eat the protagonist, listen to the protagonist's sermons, and share the protagonist's precious medicine. It's better to act alone.

Very good, looking forward to the follow-up, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, it doesn't matter how many heroines there are, the main thing is to be interesting 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

First of all, using an ax feels disgusting, because the protagonist wants to write new ideas, but the writing skills and imagination are not enough. There are almost 200 pictures. The ax is just a decoration and is basically never used in fighting.

Come on

The author should start over and rewrite, there is nothing new, it is like watching Shadow No. 10, Everything is the same, you can accept Yunxi, why there is not much change, just follow the original work, there are so many things to write about the aura, Shenxi, Dongtian, Hualing, various realms to create a halo, blood, treasure, alchemy, weapon refining, You can create a halo for runes and other symbols. It mainly depends on novelty and imagination. At the beginning, the halo can absorb the divine will of items, such as the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique halo plate. In the end, it only absorbs mineral veins and Tao Yun. You have always emphasized that the halo is a talent, not an auxiliary. The protagonist is used as an auxiliary from the beginning to the end.

Chapter 140, I'm still in the cave, I can't stand it anymore

The writing is pretty good, I'll give it a try first.

Well, please collect it! Please recommend! Please invest!

I thought this book would not be updated

It's a bit confusing to read, it's about formations, and alchemy. I went to this state of kung fu in the morning, but after more than a hundred chapters, it's still a cave. Are you planning to follow Shi Hao's state slowly?

I have completely forgotten the previous plot doi😅

So in the character introduction, Liu Shen is the heroine. Is she the heroine?

It's really over, almost 300 chapters are still in the lower realm, and the writing of the eight giant poisons is still lacking.

Are there any eunuchs here? , And a corpse suddenly exploded. When will the new book be released?