The Heavens: the Road to the Myth System

How to say it? Reading these chapters written by the author, I felt that although the intention was very high at the beginning, I started reading from the two setting introductions in front of the first chapter. At first the benefits were great, but after reading it I felt it was too wordy. There is also the protagonist's character, which doesn't feel like he is following the path of a saint. It's just that the author said that he followed the path of a saint. The writing style of these emotions feels very bland. There is nothing to entice people to read. If anything, it's the author's setting. However, I can't read it without the settings alone.

This land is not easy to cultivate, and there is too much water behind it, which floods the fields.

Since you have decided to open a new book, at least write this one well so that it won't be like the last one, Halo. Here are some tips for the author, which are summed up after reading so many fanfics. 1. There must be something of your own in it. There is no point in copying the original work. For example, in the Zhetian fanfic, there is the stage of Zhan Dao and the five internal organs. And the secret to resurrecting several lives. And at least the logic shouldn't conflict too much. 2. Don't be a clone, don't have semen in your head, don't fall in love with a girl you meet. This is very important. Anyone who dared to play like this was scolded. I personally suggest that one or two female protagonists are suitable, even if you don't accept them. If you don't have the self-confidence to engage in a romantic relationship, then don't engage in it. 3. In terms of language and wording style, the closer to the original work, the better. Don't include too many buzzwords in the dialogue between the characters. Things like Barbie having sex will be very dramatic. Don't be too kneeling or too nanny to the protagonist. 4. Try to come up with something new. Several popular fanfics nowadays, such as the Evil King and the Zhetian fanfic, for example, the timeline of the beginning of the Taikoo Enlightenment basically does not always follow the protagonist group, but will be very early. It is also relatively easy to intersperse some copies and characters of your own design. There are too many bells, cauldrons, swords and mirrors such as Taoist tools, so it might be better to use something different. Or join a force, cooperate with the Forbidden Zone Supreme, or something like that. For example, the Bald Immortal Emperor is from the Western religion. There is also the book Zhe Tian Tong Humanities that follows the ancient religion of the Sun. You can refer to it.

Likes to lick Ye Fan and his followers, but their grades won't be much better, can't they walk independently?

Your book probably won't survive. Because your setting for the protagonist is too high, but if you, the author, can't write a sage, don't blame everyone for complaining.

Chendong's approach is outdated. Piecing things together, have you trained yourself into a trumpet like Chendong? How many times have you iterated on your current starting point? People who are serious will write about seekers. What others write is a distillation of someone else's stuff into one's own. Have you written down all the rubbish? Turn yourself into someone else.

Looking at your profile, I thought it would take off directly, but it turned out not to be the case.

If I don't talk about anything else, let's just talk about your introduction 1. What the hell, old man, I came here looking for a book, and I really couldn't stand it when I saw you. This type of writing is very important, look at what you wrote. And your wording is also very inappropriate. Forget it, I won't be a bad guest anymore.

1. Sure enough, I guessed it right. After reading the introduction, I thought that I had a system of my own. I went to the heavens to complete my own path, rather than to pick up other people's wisdom and practice other people's systems (isn't this the upgrade stream of the heavens)! 2. At the beginning, you said you wanted to be a Taoist ancestor and establish a sect, but then you turned around and joined Lingxu Cave to open up the sea of ​​suffering. It really made me dodge. I thought you were so awesome, at least as good as the saint who covers the sky. But it turns out that you are a whiteboard player and you are still pretending in front of Ye Fan's classmates. I really have three rooms and one living room. You are still a wage earner and you dare to lure people to work for you. From what you said, I thought you were a shareholder of the company. But in the end, you don't have any money and you still have to work for others. It's really embarrassing😅

I couldn't stand it after reading the first two chapters. Chun Chun is a self-indulgent protagonist who is as good as a saint. I didn't notice it at all 😒

The intention is too high and too empty, resulting in no sense of substitution. Moreover, I don't think there is anything good about becoming a saint? Can sages live forever? Can you transcend? I remember when Meng Ruishenji wrote the book Yang Shen, the protagonist Hong Yi's ideal was that everyone was like a dragon, but many people criticized him in the comment area. Facts have proved that the opinion in the comment section is correct. The protagonist is a self-absorbed tyrant who either kills or eats his enemies and does not allow any contrary opinions. The protagonist in the ending didn't make everyone look like a dragon Your achievement as a sage is also very unreliable.

When writing fantasy, don't write Japanese comics. They are not compatible at all. Fantasy novels mixed with Japanese comics are almost impossible to complete, and they will drive away people who hate Japanese comics. Anyway, I am one

1. This book is the flow of all heavens and all realms. If so, then there will be a common system of all heavens and all realms (this is inevitable, otherwise it cannot be divided in detail. The author originally mentioned it later, because now it seems to be two worlds, but in fact it is still the first world.) 2. It is stated at the beginning that the protagonist takes the path of sages because he wants to establish a sect, pass down the orthodoxy, and be at ease (so personal battles are only among them) A small part of it is more about the development of orthodoxy in each world. The early stage is farming, because it involves all the worlds. Since this is involved, a larger map must be set up to cover all of it. ) 3. The author swears here that it is not intentional. In fact, the path taken by the protagonist is like this. If the spell is not written carefully in the early stage, it will be even more unclear when you enter the big map of the heavens and all the worlds. 4. The world envisioned by the author (1. Fantasy world: Covering the Sky, Perfection, Holy Ruins, Devouring the Starry Sky, Fighting to Break the Sky, Emperor Zun, Immortality Realm, Tomb of the Gods, Mu Shen Ji, and Primordial World are branch worlds 2. Comprehensive comic world: Pirates, Naruto, Dragon Ball, Fairy Tail, Pokemon, and Moon are all leisure and entertainment worlds, expanding the map 3. Main mission, big map: Mythical World (The author stated in advance that the mainstream system of the world will not be named in advance. If you have any ideas, you can leave a message in the comment area. There are more than ten levels, so I won't disclose them for now, but the setting is that each stage must have a Dao Fruit, and a Dao Fruit is a concept. Although this setting is old-fashioned, it is easy to use, and the fan fiction setting is too complicated, so I will not include names in the early stage. I will follow it later. ))

Starting from Chapter 1, I started writing boring instructions for Goldfinger.

Specifically for the protagonist, the mythical land, the level is suddenly lowered.

Author, you can refer to "All Heavens : Become Invincible from the Time of Pulling the Coffin in Kowloon", but you cannot imitate others 😁

Is there a female protagonist? I gave up some books

Grass! It's your book! Let's first talk about whether he will steal the wife of the original protagonist! I just saw your heroine's color chart in the last book! Just block it and not watch it

The intention is too high, but the rhythm, plot, foreshadowing, setting... Are simply messed up. In short, I want too much, but I can't grasp it.

The ideas and creativity are good, but the writing style is immature, and some parts are indeed... How should I put it, anyway, I can't watch it in a row, I can't read it in a skip.

It's just disgusting to accept the yin-yang saint. Taking the enemy into your subordinates is an old routine many years ago. When it was popular back then, I felt very uncomfortable with it. Now you still write this kind of plot like this, which is just disgusting.

Where I am is reality. What else is a mythical world divided into? What a civilized place, it sucks

There is too much nonsense in the whole article, it is all nonsense

So fucking ink stains, no, so damn good that I can sleep

Just don't write about the heroine. I'm tired of reading it. What kind of heroine does Zhu Tianwen write? I'm bored.

Is Wang Ming already out? Where is Bogu?

Ask for advice online! The author wants to make progress! ! !