Douluo Dalu: I Make My Own Martial Spirit

Brother, listen to my advice and just write more than 80 reopenings now. It's too blunt. It's really awkward and blunt. Maybe the plot is not coherent or something. The writing is okay, but the details need to be polished. I will re-open a new book. With your foundation, I should be able to write a little better. The system should not be too exaggerated, and the system's plot should not be too much. Just You just need to be an assistant who provides cheats to push the plot. If you want the protagonist to know other knowledge, you don't have to ask the system. You can just make a word search template. You can do the task or not. There shouldn't be too much interaction between the system and the protagonist. At the beginning, the soul of the original character will be directly inherited by Soul Transmitter. , The original character has a martial spirit, and his own soul is a martial soul, and the system gives him a martial soul. This way, it will be smoother. If he wants to be a more selfish protagonist, then add a fusion template, kill people, take the martial soul and blood, use it as material, push the martial soul directly up, and the soul should not be too strange. It's weird, I haven't seen the original plot, but I can't stand it if I've seen it. To be honest, it's troublesome to write Dou San, and it's not troublesome even if it's not troublesome. If the entry point is better written, it will be smoother. It's really awkward to write hard. The subject matter is okay, and the creativity is good. I really don't want to waste this subject matter. Brother, please open another one

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Author, is your emotional sustenance too toxic? Let me ask you, if someone robs you of your bloodline and your chance in life, you still want to help them beat your own father and grandfather. Don't you think it's ridiculous? Can you think more normally? 🥵

Judging from the introduction, it is full of bugs. At this time, the will of the world is already Tang Hao. Dou San Tang Shenwang can be said to be a success. If there is no golden finger, let's just go to sleep.

I endured the clone kissing Gu Yue in the previous chapter 118. Later, you came to the independent clone and gave all the Golden Dragon King martial arts and souls to the clone. Who is the protagonist? It's really just me who is green, right?

There is Yao Lao in the Endless Fire Realm, but Master Jade is missing in the God Realm The Fire Realm is set up on the border, attracting the abyss to be a human being Ascend the great source of Qi, and the ten thousand year plan of the Tang Shenwang Guard the great thousand to ensure peace, pure and pure Tang Sanshao fell in the valley, the cold wind blows, and the spring and autumn cicadas chirp when the young boy returns. The stone man in Danghun Mountain sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders the demon to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love cannot match the persistence of tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. I knew at an early age that the world would be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero in the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. Thousands of times of hard work and painstaking efforts cast iron, and exhaustive efforts are devoted to forging a sword. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven.

In fan fiction, the protagonist is even more shameless, and you are the only one in the family.

Huo Yuhao is the last struggle of Douluo Will. Unfortunately, he was treated as a dog by Tang Fozu. Tang Hao completely replaced Douluo Will.

Author, there is a big loophole in your current setting. In the Douluo series, you cannot practice without innate soul power. The protagonist can practice the skills given by the system, but how do you explain it? How could the two people who adopted the protagonist not be curious? I hope it can only be improved.

Ah, it's all systematic. It's also a talent to write this book like this.

During the Legend of the Dragon King, the God Realm was taken away by a wave of time and space turbulence because Tang San and the God of Destruction competed for the central authority of the God Realm. How could it be that Tang San was still looking at the fog in the God Realm in the first chapter? The main plot at this time should be Tang San's ten thousand year plan. The Douluo series are, in order, "Douluo Dalu", "Peerless Tang Sect", "Divine World Gaiden", "Legend of the Dragon King", "Ultimate Douluo", "Tang Sect Heroes" and "Rebirth of Tang San". But it's disgusting. The more I write about it, the worse it is for Tang San's character. The extra chapter actually said that Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong fell in love with Yu Xiaogang because of Qian Xunji's illusion. I really laughed, what kind of illusion can't even be discovered by a god like Shura God. Anyway, the more you look at it, you will feel that Tang San is the epitome of Zhang Wei in real life, and everyone knows it when they criticize Tang San. 🤫🤫🤫{"TopicId":"571344545023983616","TopicName":"Douluo Dalu"}{"TopicId":"874395939430465536","TopicName":"Peerless Tang Sect"}

I remember that the Douluo Sanxing Douluo Forest was fenced off, and outsiders couldn't enter at all.

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I have summarized everyone's feedback and made some adjustments to the previous content. I would like to ask all readers who have read this book to read the latest chapters. This is really important for new books.