Play a Supporting Role as a Mortal

The biggest failure of the anime to include the Demonic Path is that you actually followed it by writing that first of all there are not many disciples who go to the Bloody Forbidden Land to participate. Secondly, it is impossible for Spirit Beast Mountain to take the risk of killing a few Qi-training disciples because the survival rate in the Bloody Forbidden Land is already low. Anime is trying to hit itself in the foot with a stone, but you actually hit yourself in the foot with a stone as well.

At the beginning, they were quarreling like shrews... Jirjiwawai😓You go quickly, you go quickly, I won't go, I won't go

The Yan family rebelled against Lingshou Mountain, so how come Tianbao also rebelled against you? The Yan family is not qualified to enter the bloody trial.

To treat Junior Sister Zhou, I have to cultivate myself well, give up all love, and go to the Sea of ​​Stars. There is such a big problem, and I have to sign a life and death contract with a rag from the Yan family. I can't understand it, and I'm disgusted. Is this blocking the rest of my life, or the rest of my life for tens of thousands of years?

Wearing the skin of a mortal, writing a romantic plot

In the first chapter, I was disgusted to death. A large group of brothers and sisters are jealous, what cowards, you don't want it, don't go, I won't go, what the fuck! Is this a romantic urban romance drama?

I can't stand the loneliness on the road to immortality. With a glass heart, go back and die as a mortal as soon as possible.

I don't understand the whole unfounded plot of cheating on a monk. In this case, you either have to practice hard, run away and mess up the sea of ​​stars, and come back to kill him after you are successful in practice, or you can find an opportunity to trap him, such as a formation, a powerful talisman, etc. What are you still doing here? The villain has no brains either. A remnant of the Qianzhu Sect has taken refuge in the devil's path and has never entered the Bloody Forbidden Land. He shows up in an upright manner and suddenly wants to kill a disciple of the same level who has no grievances or enmities against him. Is he afraid that he will not be exposed quickly enough? A single monk would just rely on a few words from others to kill the disciple of another single monk who was stronger than him. He would do it openly and then join the devil. Why, you don't want fame and others don't want face? Then one gained the reputation of killing his fellow disciples, and the other gained the reputation of being weak and someone who could be bullied. Where is the brain? Can't you kill secretly? Although it is a novel, it still requires basic logical thinking. According to your logic, you can send as many foundation builders as there are monks in each faction to persuade them to join the devil. First, there is no benefit, and second, there is no evidence to get the truth, and there is nothing. Then I believe it and surrender. How can this special cat have such a crazy brain? How can he get the settlement? Quite poisonous

First, the emotional drama of this book is a failure. The last few pictures have made it clear that I am planning to write a story about eunuchs, but the details of the emotional scenes that make people look awkward are all pretentious and neither good nor bad. Second, the nanny went too far. In addition to paying for it, Han Li didn't get any herbs, and he had to buy them himself. Third, the protagonist caused a huge butterfly effect, but the delusional main line has not changed much. Fourth, in the capital section, Han Li was emotionally opposed to running away, losing the essence of his original character. Fifth, the protagonist seems to be planning constantly, but in fact he deceives countless people and is plotted against himself in various ways. I want to write about kindness, but it actually does a lot of harm to people. I want to write about the high road and fight for it, but I run around for various things. Such a big golden finger, in the end, I can only level up a little faster than Han Li. Such a big golden finger, I just lose the life skills of cultivating immortals. In a fight, you can kill instantly with a sneak attack, and you can get to the point where you are exposed. What's the point of being sneaky in the first place? ? Fifth, as an author, words are often misspelled. It seems that it is not an accident, but a lack of recognition of the words at all. In addition, this book has a lot of ideas, especially Goldfinger, which is very eye-catching, and many plots are also quite exciting. Come on, author, it's best to be clear about the protagonist's thoughts. Stop being so shaky and unclear. If you don't accept women, don't write emotional scenes about women.

The first chapter made me sick!

The male protagonist's cultivation of immortality has been in vain. He doesn't even dare to have a woman. He's such a coward.

You are destined to hit the street, and the title of the book will dissuade 90% or more of the readers!

Does the protagonist have low self-esteem? He even dares to ask for a woman who likes him, he is afraid of this and that, and he also has a golden finger, which really embarrasses the time traveler.

It's no brainer to even dare to take out the Little Foundation Establishment Pill.

The golden-fingered protagonist is too cowardly to like a woman, and he is really not as good as Han Li.

The protagonist is not a man's trash at all, I won't watch it anymore

She gets distracted during the fight, the plot is bloody, and she cries. Chapter 67: The heroine can't help during the fight Zhou Xinrui, who was in pain, looked like a sculpture, unresponsive. 😥😥😥We are already in the foundation building stage, and this is the reaction? What a delicate white lotus

Why is it a system again? Why are you everywhere, system?

If you want to cultivate immortality, cultivate yourself well and don't engage in fantasy.

Where is Douluo? Why is it different from what the introduction says?

It's very well written. Please stop writing.

No need to question, your IQ is really low.

Author, if you can't design a cheat finger, why do you need to use the system?

Tiannan No.1 Sports Center came to visit

It looked good from the front. You went to Yanjiabao even though you knew it was a trap. You even suppressed the formation of the core in the early stage of foundation building. You hit Fei Wangchan with one blow and ran away easily. Wasn't it just because of your fire bomb technique that was more than ten times more powerful that you were so good? To be honest, I felt like I was a fighting force.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

This book is extremely poisonous, a bloody forbidden area, and has the ability to sneak attack. Senior Brother Yan insisted on standing up and protecting the junior sister he didn't know. The junior sister wanted to die. The protagonist insisted on protecting him and was seriously injured. As a result, the junior sister committed suicide. The protagonist is simply mentally retarded. In the world of immortality, even if there is a system, it will not last long.