Longevity: My Cultivation Is Bound to Bear Fruit

The book is perfectly fine, but I personally hope it has a bit of a harem element. Not for any other reason than that after reaching the Golden Core stage, I can use the offspring for bloodline experiments.

I hope this one is more rigorous, unlike the last one which had a disjointed and haphazard writing style in the later stages. A faster leveling up in the early stages is fine, but a slower leveling up in the later stages is also acceptable. Many novels these days have very slow leveling up at the beginning, but then it becomes very fast in the middle and later stages; it gets boring after a while.

Are prices too high? A basic pill costs 300 spirit stones.

Body-refining techniques consume magical power to provide protection? Are you trying to eat my brain?

Before it was published, I wrote a fairly complete story. After it was published, I wrote about different things in a jumbled mess, with inexplicable tasks and dry content. Bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review!

Honestly, I've read quite a few novels like this, and they're all the same. They cause a ruckus in the early stages of Qi Refining. What's the point of this cheat? Are they really all written by AI?

There's a part I don't understand about the apprenticeship for alchemy. The protagonist knows the alchemy master, and his father also knows him—they're the son of an old friend. In this situation, why does he have to save up all the money before becoming an apprentice?

The ending of the previous book, "The Unofficial Cultivator," was a bit off; I didn't quite understand it.

The author is an experienced writer, so why does it keep switching between Zhang Yishan and Liu Yishan? And then Liu and Lin?

The new book isn't as well-written as the previous one; the writing style seems to have regressed.