Tokyo Starts with Conquering the Mind-Reading Lady

The protagonist is too passive and is suppressed by the heroine everywhere. It is obvious that the protagonist saved the girl 1 and helped the heroine's family a lot, but he still has to be threatened and manipulated by the two heroines, especially the second heroine. With a little effort, the protagonist immediately gave in and had no temper. I was speechless. Before I saw the hero saving people, I thought the hero was a Sigma man. However, after the second heroine appeared, he immediately softened.

I've read a few films, and it turns out that the hero's friend and the hero's roles are almost the same. Do you want to write a dual-protagonist?

Harem novel written with two male protagonists?

Purely empiricism, if I post in the comment area that I want to innovate or write something a little different, the probability of making a mess is very high, and I suffer greatly from it. Because it is very important for authors to restrain unnecessary expressions. Many people do not have this consciousness.

The biggest flaw of this book is that the male protagonist is a chicken friend, which simply affects the reading experience.

Very good, wouldn't the author consider signing a contract? Still haven't signed yet?

Chapter 52 is simply incredible, hahaha! What a great review!

I only have one year left to live. It is completely incomprehensible to accept a system that can change and waste time on opening a dessert shop to make money.

After watching it, it seems like I haven't read anything at all.

The male protagonist you described does not look like a humble father to his daughter at all, but more like a bastard who is afraid of being thrown into the Gulf of Tokyo and has infinite patience. As long as he does not die, he will be humiliated no matter what. Anyway, life is better than death Fathers also have a bottom line and dignity.

The scene between the second female lead and the male lead made the male lead fall in love. Let's see what happens next.

I finished reading it in one night and will give you some comments The male protagonist's character is that of a classic Japanese light novel. He saved Liuli's life but still has to be so judgmental, like a strict wife. However, Liuli is not bad anyway, and he asked the hero to quit smoking with one request. The male protagonist doesn't owe Suzune anything. He was trained like a dog just because he was found in a bird body. Suzune is currently the least likable character. There is no sweet plot and no exciting xp. If you write Mrs. Jindai, I believe more people will like it. The heroine with the best impression at the moment is Amamiya. In addition, I don't know what the purpose of my sister Rii is until now. I only know that she is a facially paralyzed, gentle woman.

It can still be swallowed, and no poisonous spots can be seen in the front for the time being.

Don't keep books! Can you give me some follow-up reading? Otherwise, it's really not good. It's already 130,000 words.

In the front, I can only say that I can barely read it, but in the back, it gradually starts to look that way, making it more comfortable to watch.