Wudong: Starting from the Five Tigers Broken Door Knife

Not only does it suppress the realm, but it even insults the name genius 🥱🥱🥱 and even puts it in there to show off and slap in the face. Do you dare to write the same old routine of novels from 10 years ago?

First of all, the writing style of this fanfic is good. The dialogues between the characters are not trivial. The character creation of the protagonist is also decisive, calm and not greasy. However, the talent of the protagonist is very impressive. At the age of 17, he first reached the seventh level of body tempering, and later the ninth level of body tempering. What kind of martial arts is Xiao Yan? This talent is placed next door to Dou Po Ru If it were the start of the Xiao family, the 16-year-old coming-of-age ceremony could not reach the seventh level of fighting spirit that can still be qualified for cultivation, and was directly kicked out by the family. The martial arts protagonist group's cultivation speed is very fast. Brother Dongzi, Qingtan, Lin Yan, Ying Huanhuan, Ling Qingzhu and others all have an average of just over 20. Looking back, the Dou Po next door is equivalent to a Dou Sheng in his early twenties. When writing a martial arts fanfic, especially if the protagonist is older than Dong Zi, it is easy to overwrite the plot if you over-level it. This is because the martial arts protagonist group's training speed is so unbelievable. For example, the protagonist is now 17 years old and is worthy of Di Yuan. Dong Zi Brother Zi is 17 years old, he is in the middle stage of Tianyuan Realm, and he has a Tianyin Talisman Master. In the same year, he has attained the Great Perfection of Yuan Dan. From 18 to 19 years old, he has created the Third Realm. At the age of 20, he has fought against the Four Yuan Nirvana and added a Four Seal Tianfu Master. At the age of 20, you are suppressing him so hard now. How can you let the protagonist "reasonably" keep up with the pace of the martial arts protagonist group? It's impossible to cheat and force the game. If you cheat and force the game, it would be better to set the protagonist's talent to be more acceptable from the beginning.

For fan works, there is no need for you, the author, to make it like the original work where every time you change the map, there will be a sworn enemy. If you calculate carefully, when you first join the Black Tiger Gang, you will become a sworn enemy with the gang next door. Then you join the Crazy Blade Martial Arts Hall and have a mortal enemy with the Xie Lei family. These two are inevitable, but the Blood Clothes Sect in Yancheng and the Han family are a bit deliberate. There is no need for the main character in the fan work to be the same as the main character in the original work. This seems to naturally attract enemies, and the protagonist always fights across levels. To be honest, this is rarely done in fan fiction. You are writing the fan fiction as if it were the original work, and every time you get stuck, you will break through. And don't be too stingy. Just be on the same level as the geniuses of the high-level dynasties in the original work. You'll be tired of watching them fight over the top.

Believe it or not, this book has been forcibly creating contradictions. Are the Xie family members of Ye Dalong? Because something keeps targeting the protagonist, it's very speechless and unreasonable. A man who is the first in hunting is still obsessed with it, which is inexplicable. Also, the Lin family has acquired Tiemuzhuang, and the Xie family doesn't care, they just come to find the protagonist Fang, right? Where's the brain?

Author, don't you, your golden finger, arrange a path for the protagonist? 😎

I just said that the author of this book suppressed the protagonist's realm and told me to shut up. Did I say anything else? Why would you write a book if you have such a bad temper?

Chapter 60: Cai Diyuan Realm, it's such a waste

Why did it suddenly stop updating? ? You don't know how to cut it 😰

The first obsession with hunting is inexplicable, and I am really speechless that I still have this obsession. The conflict with the Xie family is also the same. Ye Helong, a collaborator of the Xie family, the Xie family would care so much and forcefully create conflicts.

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With this upgrade speed, you might as well just write a sentence: 10 years later, the protagonist will be able to break through the Yuan Dan realm, and Lin Dong will reach the ancestral realm. This goal is normal based on your current upgrade speed.

According to you, Lin Dong has broken through the Fu Zu, and you have just entered the Nirvana realm.

It takes more than 100 chapters to reach the Yuan Dan realm, and I don't know how many chapters it will take to reach the next realm.

Author, don't stress, it's only 60 chapters to reach the Earth Element Realm

It's so long-winded. It's not as fast as writing a fanfic to update the original novel.

Not bad. As for the realm issue, the plot is indeed a bit slow. Moreover, you said in the book that Lin Dong feels that the protagonist is better than him now. Well, maybe those people are talking about the realm issue. If you make the plot faster and more exciting, and add a female protagonist, that's almost it.

Update, the author updates more chapters a day!

Looking at it now, it's not bad. Can the author reveal whether he will accept Huanhuan? If I accept it, I can run away in advance. I simply cannot accept the separation of the original couple.

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1. Who is the heroine? 2. The protagonist currently has a very yin physique (is it as strong as Qing Tan's), and will gain a very yang physique after refining the token. Will the two merge?

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