
When People Are in Douluo, All Goddesses Collapse
人在斗罗,女神全崩
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- Completed
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- 901k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I was speechless after watching it, and I just felt like I was suffering from embarrassment. The poisonous point of diary novels is that they will inevitably self-destruct and travel through time at the beginning, or they will call a certain female wife from the beginning and write a lot of female names to say "I love you". What do you think a strange female would think when she sees something like this? The favorability factor is definitely negative. Regarding diary novels, I suggest you read how they wrote them. That book is called Zongwu, "Resurrection from the Dead in the Beginning", and what they wrote is much better than yours 😅
Damn it, this first chapter made me sick. It's okay to be so obscene if you don't know the existence of the diary copy, but it's still so obscene if you know it 😅
It doesn't matter if the diary is obscene, the key is to show it to others. Is this some kind of exhibitionism? 🤭
The protagonist is so wretched that I can't relate to it at all.
The reporting items are missing a category of "reducing intelligence, mentally handicapped"
Author, I see you are handsome, graceful, like a tree in the wind, young and rich, brave and mighty, invincible in the world, the best in the universe, a lonely master, invulnerable, the only one who respects you, the jade-faced gentleman, the benevolent invincible, the brave without fear, the indestructible, the wise and the mighty, the brave He is a hero among chivalrous people, a dragon and a phoenix among men, he is affectionate and righteous, courageous and colorful, unparalleled in the world, cool and handsome, a role model for people, honest and trustworthy, generous in conversation, and personable, but why not update more 🙂🙂🙂
A bit difficult to stretch
The biggest attraction of this type of article is the spoilers and the deception of Tang Sanyu Xiaogang. It doesn't matter if he is invincible, but it must be funny or disgusting. Anyway, it is to prevent the disgusting characters in the original work from having an easy time, to make up for some regrets in the original work, and to relieve some poor people who were still kept in the dark until the end. If you can watch the emotional line, I definitely advocate taking it all. After all, the harem is mentioned at the beginning. I also like to watch this kind of thing. However, the description of the emotional drama can be more delicate, at least not greasy, or even just be an RBQ. If it is not handled well, it is better to reduce the writing in this aspect, like Teddy It's really useless to leave seeds everywhere. After all, the psychological changes in this aspect are also a highlight. The world view of Love Continent is that the strong man has only one wife. Each one is matched with CP one by one. Of course, it is okay to accept them all, but most characters will not accept polygamy from the beginning. The process of psychological transformation is also one of the highlights. And it doesn't matter if you are just talking about it in the diary. In reality, if you are serious about relationships and are definitely one of the harems, you will prefer and take her away. At least I feel that this kind of character should be more in line with the views of most readers and more popular, right? Otherwise, she would be ambiguous with everyone and leave seeds everywhere. Just because she is the protagonist, other female characters would lose their minds and change. What is the difference between Tang Sanyu, Xiaogang and others? The cricket in the diary is a highlight. I don't say how honest it is in reality, but at least don't engage in double standards. What I want to see is to expose the ugly faces of the dog characters in the original work, rather than creating a "protagonist" who is more philandering than Dai Mubai, more teddy than Ma Hongjun, more double-standarded than Tang San, and more shameless than Yu Xiaogang, and then relies on the halo of the protagonist to do more excessive things. And it's really a bit loose. The premise of fan fiction is to be sophisticated. Only by adapting to the original settings and then changing the magic will you feel a sense of substitution. Only when you torture three people will you be happy. The level is really good. Innate soul power of level 8 and 9 is basically the qualification for title. Full innate soul power is less than title Douluo. Of course, I will just talk about my personal feelings. It is estimated that the author cannot read them all. Readers filter novels, and novels also filter readers. I will look at it later. If the whole book has this style, it can only be said that it is not suitable for me.
It's a bit poisonous, and its combat power collapses. Swallowing the Starry Sky Planet Level is equal to Contra! How much fake wine did you have to drink to write such a retarded plot? 🙂 Planet level one has 1 million kilograms of itself, 1 million kilograms of force, and at least 4 times the force. The total is 8 million kilograms, not counting the additional attributes of breaking through the planet level. Can Douluo God King hit 8 million kilograms?
When writing a diary, just write a diary. Why do you write pig's feet like an sp?
Don't ask if anyone has seen it, just follow the new ones as hard as you can. I won't read more and follow the new ones every day.
It's rubbish. You can still read it in the front. But in the back, it's basically just talking about love. Either picking up girls or just going about daily life. The plot goes at a snail's pace. The plot doesn't forget to talk about love. Basically, they are all women. Without women, this book would not be written at all. I can't write it.
Who is Su Ruoxi? Cuihua, played by Ma Hongjun, is also responsible for advancing the plot, and there are several scenes. A time traveler with plug-ins, as for getting an artificial silicone doll?
The protagonist knows that the heroine will see it, but he still writes it in such a vulgar way? The protagonist actually has this habit.
Author, why don't you update?
Author, I really like this book. It would be good to update more episodes.
Author, I hope you add the story of the demon god and the eternal fairy tale. Author, I hope you can add more animations from all over the world and Chinese comics. Update a few more episodes and speed it up, author.
The author will add another world of killing gods.
Someone copied our book?
Don't change the title of the book, brothers, give him more strength
The fighting power collapsed! Forget the soul ring! Anti-three and anti-Hao proved that they are more powerful!
I suspect this author is a fan of Tang San and Tang Hao! The protagonist of this book, 3 blacks, 2 yellows and 1 purple Tang San, dares to brag that his physique is greater than that of Douluo natives! (Can't he prove this by pressing 3 black on Zhao Wuji? In the original book 2, Huang Tang San has already hit Zhao Wuji who is not exerting his strength) When he was at level 50+, he had a million-year golden soul ring. At level 70+, he went to the spirit cage, but he still couldn't beat the crippled Tang Hao after he came back At level 80+, his soul ring turned into 8 red? Sell the gold ring for a red ring? At this time, he was actually injured when he beat Tang Hao to a disabled person? It's not a crushing? A proper waste protagonist! Also, Tang San absorbed Tang Hao's soul power, rose from Soul Emperor to Soul Douluo in one night, and went to the Sunset Forest to kill ten thousand-year-level soul beasts, turning the Clear Sky Hammer into 8 black! WTF, what about the concept of time? Is this Tang San already the God of War? And Tang San has been promoted to level 20, and Tang Haocai's soul power has dropped by 1 level! Tang Hao's gold content continues to rise!
Can the author produce subsequent editions of this book?
The author is in Douluo Goddess All Collapse. I like this book. Can I make a follow-up version? Come on, come on, keep working hard.