In Battle Through the Heavens, My Words Become Law

Fanfiction is all about enjoyment, but yours is so overpowered, with the female lead being indecisive and slow-moving. This kind of character is the least likable. How many people in real life actually enjoy being indecisive? Yang Guo's unwavering devotion to love is commendable, but everyone wants to be like Wei Xiaobao, not just snatching things away. You haven't succeeded in anything in your 100,000 words. In short, you're too tedious.

Judging from the author's previous books, I have a feeling this one will also be abandoned.

Looks like another one has been sent. These days, there are always authors who like to enter the palace (a metaphor for author recruitment), and there are more and more of them; even the emperor says he can't use them all!! 😠😠

You did a pretty good job of criticizing yourself. After reading what you wrote later, it really is rubbish. 😜However, the fact that you recognize it as garbage, yet you still continuously produce garbage, is still admirable.

The synopsis said there were too many unfinished works, but after looking at the table of contents, the author exclaimed, "It's so good!": I want to be Zhao Gao, the Zhao Gao who's second only to the emperor! 😅😅😅

The prelude to abandoning a story: Having read so many stories on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) over the years, I've noticed a pattern. It starts with two or three updates a day, then one, then one every two or three days, then a break, then weekly, monthly, quarterly updates, then another break, and it's abandoned.

There weren't any major problems with the beginning, but the inner thoughts need to be limited. The author's writing style is quite good, unlike other novels where the author only focuses on family and shamelessly asks for resources, as if there are no other opportunities in such a vast world as Doupo Continent (except for female readers).

Edit directly in the backend. Found a divine artifact from another world under the bed: the Ultraman Tiga Spark Mirror.

This author, are you genuinely clueless or just pretending? You've managed to write such a bland plot with all that cheat code. Everyone's here to see the female lead, Medusa, Yun Yun, Xiao Yixian, and Xiao Xun'er, not Nalan Yanran or Ya Fei. Even if you were there, you'd have to prioritize the other characters. And this male lead is way too weak! Some of those clowns were already trying to ambush him and were clearly intent on killing him, but he didn't react at all? Are you some kind of saint?

Why turn off the "Voice of the Heart" feature? That's the main reason to read this book. Turning it off ruins the experience. Comment if you can, otherwise don't.