Starting from Following Uchiha Madara and Leaving Konoha

Not even hitting the wall is enough to fail.

Are you planning to write a stream of memories? The kind that refers to the original work

Poison point one: the protagonist's name. The author's explanation is inspired by the dog raised by Asura and Indra. This explanation is worse than no explanation at all. I originally thought it had some meaning, but the co-author is really just a dog. Combined with the identity of the protagonist, Uchiha Madara has a dog, right? Poison point two: the identity of the protagonist. Uchiha Madara's identity is a rebel ninja of Konoha (those who have only read a few fanfics, don't scream, Uchiha Madara is a rebel ninja), the protagonist left with Uchiha Madara, which means he is also a rebel ninja, and Konoha let them return like this. Poisonous point three (the biggest poisonous point): The protagonist's return, identity is a problem, and the handling of the return is a big problem. The protagonist and Obito returned tepidly at first, and then they actually started to fight wits with the three generations. The protagonist has really lived like a dog for the past fifty years. No, when I think of the protagonist's name being a dog, I suddenly want to laugh. Summary: The identity and name are awkward, the battle of wits is not interesting, it is not exciting at the same time, and the writing style is only average.

It's quite difficult for Madara's followers, not to be like Obito and at least put a curse seal on them. The protagonist's name always feels a bit strange, so why not just pay homage to his ancestor and call him Uchiha Sudra.

What the author wrote is simply a joke. A person who follows Uchiha Madara can actually return to Konoha. The protagonist's identity should be a rebel ninja.

Name Persuasion Series Hey guys, is this protagonist called Vaishya? I, Otsutsuki Brahmin, laughed to death.

The combat power feels a bit strange. As I said before, I didn't expect the aura of the three generations to be so powerful. They recognized each other as the strong one. I feel that the B box dropped very seriously. It's not that the three generations are weak. It's mainly because you later wrote that the protagonist killed the battlefield and played with the Raikage (not even seriously). Here, it feels that the combat power of the protagonist and the Raikage is different. It's a bit spotty, but the three generations are not stronger than the Raikage, so...

Although he doesn't start with Madara's son, he finally has an Uchiha fan who left with Madara. I wonder if there is a female protagonist? I hope there will be no harem for the single female protagonist. It doesn't matter if there is no heroine, but at least there should be a sense of ambiguity.

Your name is Vaishya. . Why don't you call Uchiha Kshatriya and Brahmin. Or just call him Uchiha Dalit.

I'd better change this name. I thought it was outrageous when I saw the name, but suddenly I thought it might be called Vaisya, but it doesn't mean dog. I searched it on Baidu. Oh, don't mention that this word actually exists. I found that it does not mean dog. It is the third class of the Indian caste system. To put it bluntly, it works to supply the first and second classes It was nothing at first, but suddenly I saw the introduction and followed Uchiha to escape. Alas... Combined with the meaning of this word, the protagonist is to be a dog to provide for Uchiha Madara. Well, no, it should not be a dog. After all, Vaisya is still a commoner But I never expected it. When the author explained, he found that his status had been reduced. It turned out that it was the protagonist's mother who wanted a stable place. The family hopes to have a dog to accompany their children. This is not a big deal. The key point is that it was inspired by the dog raised by Indra Asura The most important thing is that the relationship between the name and the Indian caste was denied in the end. The co-authored protagonist is really a dog The key author also has to have a relationship with India But Indra (India) The prototypes of the words Asura (Buddhism), Vaishya (caste system) are India The author explained it awkwardly, the co-author's protagonist is a dog that provides Uchiha Madara's life, and it is not even as good as the original meaning. At least the original meaning of the name is at least a person, a commoner. As soon as the author explained it, he instantly changed from a human to a dog

Looking at the title of this book, I thought that the protagonist was going to play chess with Madara in the ninja world, and finally make it big. I didn't expect that he would go back to Konoha and compete with F4 to fight wits and courage. It was so funny that he really couldn't write a novel without leaving the main plot of the original work? As an author who doesn't even have an outline of his own, I can only say that you deserve such an achievement.

Em, a comment about the protagonist's name. The protagonist's ancestor is called Indra, and his ancestral brother is called Asura. They are both transliterations of Indian proper nouns. The blue bar is called Chakra, and the entry comes from Indian yoga. Anyone with a normal mind would probably forget to think about this. Besides, what the author meant by this is that I said that the protagonist should be called Doghouse, not Third Class Man. We are all Chinese, so he should be called Doghouse. This makes people give up on the book before even reading the first chapter.

Author, you'd better go to a factory and write novels. It's not suitable for you.

It looks like a time traveler, but it doesn't look like it. I don't know if I missed it. I feel like the protagonist knows a lot of things and a lot he doesn't know.

Vaisya? Is there another person named Uchiha Kshatriya who discriminates against you all day long?

It is not easy for Vaishya to write a book, so everyone should be more tolerant towards Vaishya. I still support Vaishya's book, after all, it is Vaishya

The protagonist is like a street kid who has gained great power. It gives people the feeling that he wants to show off, but he pretends to be sb. It is all supported by his strong strength, or in other words, it is all supported by the author.

If you talk hard and argue with the readers, or the plot is not arranged well, and you spend a long time explaining to the readers, no one is successful. It's very simple. People come to read the book, not to listen to your explanation. Who will read it, Who wants to listen to the author's explanation and patch the readers, The more you do, the faster you will die,

Vaishya means dog, what a slave name.

Uchiha kennel. . . This name is awesome

The protagonist is called this name, and the author is also a talented person. I'm afraid someone will read it.