Swallowed Star: The Age of Cataclysm

Don't be a eunuch protagonist. There are a bunch of eunuch time-travelers at the starting point. Is this the price of time-travel? If the cost is so high, most people will not want to travel through time. A good novel must have seven emotions and six desires. Ancient saints also had a lot of women. Just look at Confucius and you will know 😁

Overall it's lookable, but there are a lot of little bits and pieces. 1. Venerable Fenji is the protagonist and his master actually knows that the earth is a place for mountain travelers. The original work only found out about it when the founder of the giant ax went back in time. 2. The term Lord of Laws is the name of the ancient inheritance (the continent of origin). The original work became popular only after the Duandao River inheritance and the corpse of the Mountain Guest arrived. In the early days, a lot of sages here called the Lord of other people's universes the Lord of Laws. They were also drunk. 3. A few venerables can activate time and space retrieval. Isn't it possible to become the Lord of the Universe in the original novel? Anyway, there are a lot of flaws

The setting is too weird. It's obviously just six years after the disaster, but the various side descriptions in it are the same as in Luo Feng's era except that the base city has not yet been established.

In the original work, Luo Feng spent hundreds of thousands of years to acquire the combat power of the Lord of the Universe (actually a Venerable) and set the fastest record in the original universe. But even with the best fortune and the most genius, Luo Feng only practiced the laws of gold and space that he was good at, and did not practice other laws. Judging from other Universe Venerables and Masters of the Universe, they all practice what they are good at and will not practice multiple laws casually. Another example is the battle between geniuses. Bolan is the only one who practices space and wind (time) laws. All other geniuses practice the laws and superior laws they are good at. Even for a genius like Bolan who has been around for thousands of years, his dual cultivation of law has obviously failed. Of course, there are also people who are born with multiple laws of talent, such as Bo Lan, but the powerful people only think that he has a slight possibility of becoming a cosmic sage, that is, they think that his space talent barely reaches the sage's talent threshold. But I never thought that he could become the Lord of the Universe, because his wind time talent was obviously too poor for fellow practitioners to succeed. Later, Bolan became the Lord of the Universe, and it was also the human race that dominated the resources of the universe, and also had the support of a massive super inheritance. Luo Feng probably also particularly supported their generation of geniuses. To sum up, there are very few people who are born with many laws and talents, and the probability is as high as that of Bolan (a genius of all ages). Among the multi-law talents, there are also some with higher talents, but it is almost unheard of. Therefore, after so many years, the human race has only 6,000 lords (single law) and 18 lords of the universe (dual cultivation of time and space, or fusion law). In other words, it is extremely difficult for a venerable person to completely cultivate a single law. The difficulty for the Venerable to become the Lord of the Universe is simply unbelievable. It requires the Venerable to either possess the super talent of dual laws (common practitioners of time and space), or to practice the law of fusion (but it is much more difficult than single sleep). So for the protagonists of the fanfiction, I think the dual-law practitioners are the most common, and it is impossible to have multiple-law practitioners before immortality. If you follow the path of the beast god, just follow the law. At the stellar level, I think if we start from the Earth chapter, we should practice the law of single rest honestly. After all, the time is too short, and it is already very evil to be able to step into the threshold of the law of single rest.

It looks a bit awkward in some aspects, and is the Venerable's inheritance serious? Using interplanetary puppets to test the combat prowess of planet-level protagonists? You must know that Trial Site No. 9 Knows how to test the understanding of those who are trying it. How can you, a Venerable, test it like this? It's like there is a stone there. As long as you have enough strength to lift it, you will pass. . . You must know that the geniuses at the eighth or ninth level in the field of genius battle are only the top one thousand geniuses in the universe, and the top one thousand geniuses in the universe are all geniuses at the threshold of the law, and only a few hundred people can enter the initial universe sequence, and few of them can catch the eyes of the venerable and be accepted as disciples. For a planet-level protagonist with no domain and no threshold for understanding the laws, is it necessary to use fighting to test? It is clear at a glance how much strength he has. For such a low-level life, there is no test of understanding. . . Also, even though a venerable person was almost beaten to death, it is impossible for him to lose all his valuable treasures. Nearly ten valuable treasures were taken away by the enemy. Have you been stripped naked? Did the space ring unidentify itself and throw it to the enemy? Also, say to several women, I want them all, and keep your bodies for me to enjoy? How embarrassing, Long Aotian? The period of disaster is written in the same style as Long Aotian. The character writing of Hong Lei is also different from the original work. There is a delicate girl in the family, and the high-power knife skills are not found in the original work. Although these are small problems, they are very convincing when combined. Goodbye, I hope the next one will be better.

It would be wrong to directly transfer the wilderness from the Luo Feng period to the Nirvana period. The Great Nirvana era base city cannot be established in the game with just one click. At this time, population migration in the wild would be so dangerous that half of the people would die. Although the wilderness of Great Nirvana in my imagination is dangerous, the density of monsters will not be too high, because there are too few wild animals, and even if they mutate, the national power will exterminate most of the monsters in the early stage. Someone will ask here, why not destroy the land monsters? The answer is insufficient manpower. All military forces are concentrated on the coast, especially at the estuary. Marine monsters are the biggest enemy. If the Great Nirvana really wants to attract people, it must write about the collapse of the old system and the establishment of the new system (the improvement of the status of warriors), but if it is really written well, it must be 404.

Chaner

Shen Nong is here, The secret method of clone does not need to be given by the universe, it can be cultivated by oneself. The strongest person in the universe can still have a clone. I wonder if you can bear it?

There is a secret realm of Venerables on the earth, nonsense.

Venina